Everyday Life in the Conan World

Why do I feel that the protagonist created by the author always has a condescending and contemptuous attitude towards the character Ming Keli? It's like Long Aotian from the Qidian novel was stuffed into the shell of the Jinjiang male protagonist.

I can't stand it anymore. When I wrote about the protagonist's thoughts about Xiaolan, I could still reluctantly understand that he wanted to cause trouble for Shinichi. I could also reluctantly accept that he was an evil person who joined the black organization, but why did I write about Xiaolan's reverie about the protagonist?! Xiaolan has been waiting for Shinichi for so long, and she has learned a lot about Shinichi's dedication. Why does the protagonist's face make Xiaolan have thoughts?! This character collapsed into the Mariana Trench! This is blasphemy to Xiaolan! It's disgusting to use Xiaolan to create a character that everyone likes as the protagonist!

Why do I feel like reading a Qidian novel when reading this novel?

Hmm, I always feel weird. It is said to be a very realistic work but in fact it is not. The content of Aotian is too much. I always feel that the male protagonist must be like a girl. I am very unhappy and unhappy, even to some extent. . To the point of piling up a vulgar male protagonist with vulgar tastes. This may be what I don't like about this article. Although I think the setting of Kudo Shinichi having a different younger brother sounds good, after reading it for a long time, I still feel that the male protagonist is very annoying.

I just personally feel that the writing style of this article is very suitable for writing on Qi. Dian (can this be said?) There is no other meaning, please don't disturb me if it is not a comment.

This is no longer a disdain for the male protagonist, okay? It's no longer just complaining about characters It feels like I'm picking out goods with clearly marked prices. It is easy to cause discomfort to women and readers of the original work Jinjiang is the original base for female online literature Are you serious about coming to Jinjiang to write this kind of article? Although in recent years, female fans are indeed more likely to be signed than male fans. The content is speechless... I heard it was changed... Does the author really know what the dissatisfaction in the comments is... Aren't they twins? Don't they have the same face and different temperament? I can understand... There are so many flaws...

Is this how the author sees Xiaolan? (It means Xiao Ran seems to like Kudo Ritsu, but I personally think that Xiao Ran and Kudo Shinichi have been childhood sweethearts since childhood, and they should be more loyal to love. The article is a bit strange, but of course it's not unsightly. I don't mean any harm. Don't scold me, thank you!)

Come on, work hard Be more confident and eliminate the possibility. When a problem arises, go and solve it!!! If you really like writing, don't unsell your passion, repackage it, enhance its content, and make it worthwhile. What should I say? The language in the early comments was "somewhat" intense, I hope it didn't cause too much psychological burden/annoyance to you. The accumulation of writing skills does not happen overnight. It is a good thing to face up to shortcomings and mistakes and improve them. This is a tempering process More people talking means more people watching you... (What on earth am I talking about...) I hope you will make progress and your children will be the same. Now that he has appeared, the birth of all things is to learn to love and be loved. A person's complex label is just the surface of the individual, and the personality is repeatedly figured out. Real beauty does not need to be deliberately catered to. (Mmd I still spend two stones/If I really don't want to pay attention to you, I will run away in 2 minutes) (woc you are actually still in my favorites, I just want to see what you can change it to) (See if my ID is familiar to you, yes, it's the one who avoids lightning and curses) (Actually, your setting is quite eye-catching/Maybe you should consider multiple protagonists?/What a group of protagonists, after all, the male protagonist + the setting of cultivating immortals + the invisible harem are really a source of conflict/I remember I reminded you)

Demining If you like the theme of the protagonist Long Aotian, you can continue If you like cool writing and slap in the face, you can also try it New Zealand Party, government-backed party, think about it I don't know if the author has read Ming Ke. There are many deviations between the original character and the description in this article. It's easy to get angry, just from the first chapter First, Yuzuo and his wife will not and cannot neglect their children to this extent. It can be seen from many memory clips of Mingke that the "unreliability" of the Yusaku couple is based on their belief that their children can be independent. They love their children and will help their children at critical times (such as fooling the Japanese police). And I am very curious. Kudo Yusaku's awareness is extremely high. Children's emotions are often not hidden. There are signs of depression. How could he not see it? The child didn't know about depression until his child died. They really have to be an excellent couple. Pay attention in the future! Second, did the author not pay attention? In the description of the protagonist's rebirth, "irresponsible" and "a little bit" are obviously labeling the Kudo couple, and give people the illusion that the couple is unrepentant, which will greatly reduce their favorable impression of the characters. Readers who have not read the original work can easily misunderstand, please pay attention to this, thank you. With the development of Jinjiang online literature, there are more and more derivative works such as Conan, but the quality is often uneven. A large part of the derivative works market is supported by the True Love Party. It is better to understand the original work before writing an article. Thirdly, I have also observed some other works of the author. The writing style has always been very stable. The fantasy of cultivating immortals and the derivative of Conan are indeed very novel. From the systematic description in the article, it can be seen that the protagonist is the author's own son. It is not uncommon for male protagonists to be written in Jinjiang. They are divided into non-CP and Danmei. Non-CP protagonists are generally difficult to grasp, which tests the author's writing skills. However, the style of the non-CP male protagonist in this article is more unique and may not cause collapse. Fourth, the author should be more clear in the setting and avoid ambiguity, otherwise it will be easy to be unclear. Fifth, the emotional line of the protagonist is also very critical. It is very important to grasp the appropriate rhythm. The description of psychology, movements, and expressions are all important. Don't forget to describe the environment to set off the atmosphere. Finally, congratulations to the author for this article being recommended on the derivative non-CP urban light novel list! In the vast market of Jinjiang derivative works, this is really amazing! It's also very powerful after entering V! Looking forward to your reply

This article is actually quite creative and the writing is fluent. But it does have a strong starting point, so it may be a bit difficult to sign a contract. Jinjiang Generally speaking, the personal golden finger of the protagonist of the fan fiction must be limited, and it cannot completely surpass the original work. The description also highlights the original characters, including interactions with the original characters. It falls into the category of dream fulfillment, in which the protagonist himself achieves his goal by helping the original characters. Similar to romance novels, the heroine achieves other goals through falling in love with the hero. This is the cool part of this type of novel. Generally speaking, this article focuses on the protagonist himself, and the style of writing is more similar to that of Qidian, so it may not be very popular in Jinjiang (but the writing style is quite good, but it is occasionally a little bit poisonous, which is the kind of male channel that female channels don't like)