1. A quick note: Qian Cuo's father is named Qian Xi, and his female dorm roommate is Cong Cuo. Teng Ruiyu's father is named Teng Xun, and his mother is Ji Yu.
The academy was founded by Qian Xi and Teng Xun, so it's called Xixun Academy. Qian Xi is older than Teng Xun, so Teng Xun calls Cong Cuo sister-in-law.
2. I update irregularly, depending on how things go. We only get access to our phones on Sunday afternoons (I'm a student athlete, and my writing isn't very good, so please bear with me. Thank you!)
3. Qian Cuo is the strongest Alpha in the school. Teng Ruiyu is the strongest Omega in the school, but not many people know he's an Omega. They only know that Qian Cuo is an Alpha. I'll write about them finding out Teng Ruiyu is an Omega later.
4. Qian Cuo and Teng Ruiyu are engaged. Their parents arranged it, and they talked about it themselves when they were little, but they've probably forgotten (and even if they remember, they won't say anything).
Theme: None for now.
I looked through the previous reviews and was curious as to why an article was given one star, so I pulled it out of the blacklist and reviewed it. When I saw it, it was not a one-star rating. It was obviously a minimum of one star. Forget about poor writing, the biggest connection between the derivative work and the original comic was actually just the name of the protagonist! Even the names of the main character's parents are wrong. Calling it OOC is just a compliment. You might as well change your name and publish your original work [angry]
Your introduction is quite funny. Have you read your comics? It's so fucking annoying to me. It's just going to attract unhealthy attention, isn't it? It's low-profile garbage.
What a coincidence. The title collides with the title of a comic book called "Unsound Relationship". The main character's name is the same. Wow.
Author, although I have read the original text, I think your writing is quite good, but I think the title of the book and the name of the person could be changed, and the part where they broke up smoking, you wasted my feelings.
Teng Ruiyu Mr. Yu Mr. Yu
I really thought they broke up, which made me sad in vain.
It's so beautiful that I couldn't sleep at night because of my excitement.
😆 What the teacher wrote is great!! ❤️
So what... Can you check the year before you start spraying? The first chapter of this article was first published on July 17, 2022, and the preview of the comic was first published on October 17