Water Lily

The author should not care about those people who have no vision. I really like it. I must keep going. I hope the author can continue writing. I think the author's writing is good. Don't give up your writing career because of those people. I am looking forward to the second part of Water Lotus. Come on, author, keep going! Author's reply: Thank you~~ … Really touching~ I'll try my best sometimes

Well, it is indeed an EG novel. The writing style is not very stable, it is thriller/suspense/warmth/official/novice/funny... But although it has a chaotic feeling, there is no feeling of disgust, maybe because the character of the protagonist is more realistic. In normal times, we often wander between deceiving and being deceived. Every time we are deceived, we always feel like how could we be so stupid, but in fact, the scene at that time did not allow us to make another choice. There are many loopholes in the article, and there are many cut-scene characters (in fact, the only one with a beginning and an end is probably the protagonist and Ying Chun, who died inexplicably. What I want to particularly point out is: Didn't the protagonist's master give him some kind of fairy grass that can "living the dead"... Sigh... And things have reached this point, Wen Xiang must have discovered that Ying Chun was plotting against him, and he is still waiting for the protagonist to take Ying Chun away, and then come back to obviously tease him, He also put the silver X (I forgot the jewelry) into the wine in a very suggestive way... Did he really use this kind of IQ to become the prime minister... The author's math is not very good... Sigh... It seems that logical thinking should be strengthened... There are one or two similar examples, you can pay attention to it. But this courage deserves to be commended. For someone like me who has nothing to do but wait for others to jump in, the author is very good. Some parts of the article are also humorous and touching. Flowers and encouragement. (Don't be afraid of smashing, human personality is born in solitary behavior)

Not bad, why give up?

I don't understand something. Sir, please explain it clearly.

It's baffling to see! ! !

Not bad, but the ending was a bit too rushed

Quite good... Gambatek ne

Maybe forgetting can lead to happiness

I think no matter how good the work is, it is the author's hard work. If you don't like it, you don't have to read it. There is no need to vent your anger and give negative marks. I don't want to start a war of words, but personally I think what ciaociao said is a bit extreme. Bing is also a person, and maybe there are some things he didn't consider well when he wrote the article. I think you will appreciate it if you read the article. Everyone, you can definitely put forward your opinions and let Bing write the article better. Everyone's feelings are different. As the saying goes, it is difficult to agree with everyone. Everyone has their own opinions when reading the article. If the ending you write does not meet your own opinions, it is unfair to say that others are wasting your time. Please read the article. Dear friends, you can give 0 points for criticism, but do you have to give negative points? Isn't this too cruel for the author? Bing writes to share his own things with others, not to accommodate the people who read the article. Bingbing, don't be sad, it is inevitable for everyone to have different opinions. Questions raised by others, okay, I just feel Thank you, if it's not good, or if you don't agree with it or if it's suspected of hurting you, just ignore him/her. I know that you are a fragile and sensitive person. Don't be sad. I'm really worried that you can't think about it. You can write the article according to your own wishes. If you agree or disagree, you just need to listen to the opinions. Nothing else. I have to worry about it. Also, I have been chasing the Water Lotus article for a long time. I feel that the writing is good. Although there are some messy parts, overall, it still has some feeling. (The messiness I refer to is that I still don't know whether Comrade Yingchun has sex. Others, it's okay.) Also, I agree with ciaociao's words. It means that "men can attract each other not only by their appearance". Danmei articles often aestheticize characters. I also think that love between men does not necessarily require a man who looks like a woman. Men should have the spirit of a man. But in Water Lotus, I think Ying Chun's appearance is completely forced. It's understandable that it came out. But the cold is not enough. Later, there was some kindness... Don't blame me, sissy, it was so unpleasant. Also, Qing, if you like the cold, just say it, and you will only worry all day long. Also, what is Qing's origin??? However, the end of the first part, I'm still not sure whether it can be connected with the second part. After reading the outline of the second part, I felt that Leng was giving up on himself. Where did Qing go? Is the peaceful life about to be broken again? The last sentence, if you have different opinions when reading the article, please fill it in and don't waste the hard work of the writers.

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