A Stunning Beauty Arrives in a 1990S Alley

Pity! In both the past and present life, Sun Miao and Xu Jia used the most despicable and malicious means to deprive and tamper with Xu Meng's originally happy life with an infinitely bright future. The only difference is that they succeeded in the past life and failed in this life! But where is their retribution? Don't say that Xu Jia had a murderer in her previous life. Even in this life, the two of them have only shown their prototypes. They still do many evil things, but due to a combination of circumstances, they failed to realize it and lived the life that originally belonged to them. Is this considered retribution? It's so frustrating!

This chase is over [Rainbow Fart] [Spreading Flowers] Let me talk about it first. It can be seen that the structure is complete, but there are many errors in details and inconsistencies in the characters. Since I have finished watching it all, it can be said that the heroine is lonely again. Repaying kindness (leading the adoptive mother to leave the domestic violence man) was done, but revenge was not done. The heroine was a pitiful little girl in her previous life. Her adoptive mother died. She barely got into college, but her admission notice was secretly changed, and her life was changed forever. She was also replaced by someone who secretly changed her notice, pretending to be her, reunited with her parents, and enjoyed the benefits (you got revenge after your rebirth?) The extra story didn't explain whether the female partner who killed her in the previous life was sent to jail? Has the truth come out? Have the boss's family, the second family, and the third family suffered retribution? That was a case of enslaving, torturing, and abusing the adoptive mother and heroine for decades, and then pretending to be someone else and even killing each other. Isn't it an exaggeration to have deep hatred? Just walk out and forget it? ? ? As for the female supporting role, the female manager who helped the heroine make a fortune also sent her daughter to tutor in English. Later, her daughter became transparent. The female supporting character only focused on fighting with the family of the cheating man who was in business. She was not accepted at the hot pot seasoning retail and wholesale port, so she just let it go? The venue approval was blocked due to personal grudges (they wanted to sell the heroine to the leader's son but failed), so they just let it go? No, why would the villain report the whole thing? They are ready-made [changed] Also, why did the miracle doctor make a hypothesis that the heroine's adoptive mother could not give birth, and then just complain about it? This is a medical accident Many people's characters are inconsistent, the writing of the second and third generation families is also messy, and the writing of a male college student falling in love with a sophomore girl in high school is also very greasy. The heroine herself was beaten honestly every time she was beaten, and the heroine's adoptive mother was also bullied honestly. The bad guys lived a happy life. Anyway, the retribution in the end was not much, so they enjoyed it without any regrets. Generally, the bad ones can still make dumplings together [eating melon] But what I like most is that even if the heroine is reborn and starts a business, she still studies and goes to college honestly, without taking the 4+4 or shortcut of being recommended. This is the most eye-catching thing. Everything else can be ignored. Many characters, such as the three brothers in the alley, the old lady who sold her house and went to a nursing home, the so-called miracle doctor who faked it, the man who deliberately made a wrong case at the police station and took away the underage heroine in handcuffs in public, the ex-husband's family who cheated on the heroine and suppressed the heroine, Accountant Tan's family who deliberately cheated on the heroine, and so on, were not written. Even good things are not pleasant, bad things are not pleasant, repaying kindness is not pleasant, and revenge is not pleasant either. Grinding and chirping.

The ending in the later period was a bit hasty. The layout in the early stage was quite large, but the feeling of hasty ending in the later stage was gone immediately.

In fact, the writing style of this article is really good, but if you want to create an image of the heroine who is smart and not afraid of trouble, I don't think it is necessary to include so many stumbling blocks and bad guys. I feel that in addition to the heroine's friends and the like, most of the group members are villains. Overall, it's okay

Such a hasty ending...

Xu Meng finally found his biological parents in this life

This extra chapter is a bit disappointing. It should explain some things that happened in the past life. Is it so dead? There is also too little emotional writing in the whole article. It is not interesting. I can barely give it 4 stars.

After reading it, to be honest, I felt that it was a bit unfinished, and many plots left too much blank space. I really wish this article could be longer, so it would be more complete. It's such a pity, ugh~[poor][poor][poor]

I think the plot is pretty good, but some details are too intellectually depressing. I couldn't bear it when I saw Chapter 41. It was written in the article that the son of the man named Jiang had one year of working experience when he was eight years old. Because the age was tampered with, he became 18 years old. You said he was fifteen or sixteen years old and had one year of working experience. I can accept it, eight years old! ! ! ! May I ask? I have brainwashed myself to accept the previous bugs, but I really can't accept this. If any readers care about the details, you can take a look at my lightning protection. The male protagonist is so grumpy that he calls the female protagonist a child. He also said that many girls are vying to sit in the back seat of his brother (that's not the original sentence, the meaning is similar)

[Orange candy] Got it [Purple candy] kswl ends with flowers