Li Chishen x Xi Sui
Content warning: Poor writing, a new writer, and lots of summer commitments, so updates may be delayed or interrupted. Please understand!
Lastly, thanks so much for everyone's support, hehe!
If you have any opinions, please be gentle! Be gentle! I'll revise anything you point out!
That's all, kisses to you all!
"Li Chishen!"
"Hm?"
"Will you regret meeting me?" The boy gathered his courage and asked in a quiet voice.
Li Chishen smiled helplessly and ruffled his hair. "It was fate. We couldn't escape it, and neither of us owes the other anything."
"Oh."
Actually, you were the most passionate, and you were also the most carefree. From the day you came running toward me with the evening glow on your shoulders, it was destined.
The silhouettes of the two boys leaning on each other were reflected in a pool of clear water. The light of day and shadows of clouds were the prelude, but they were each other's one and only.
Theme: Youth in full bloom, unafraid of what the world thinks.
Well, I really don't understand why boys who serve as literary and art committee members are called sissies. I think this title is really inexplicable. Sissy is based on whether a person's behavior is feminine, and Gong's mother should be very warm, cheerful and kind. I don't understand why Gong is so bad. Is it because he bullies if he likes it? It's really unnecessary. Really, there is no need to quote the word sissy, personally. I feel that the author may need to observe more about various people, experiences, and personalities in life. I feel that he may have too little experience, otherwise it will be very empty. He is just expressing his personal thoughts and does not represent others. He does not mean to criticize. However, the author's writing style is OK. Maybe with the proficiency and experience in the future, he will become a powerful author. Come on.
I feel that the language is too gorgeous. One or two sentences are fine, but more are not good. (Also, I think the plot is too bloody. Whisper bb.) You can change it.
I still have to say, hug my wife, she should be happy
Wuwuwu, please be well, madam, and be happy every day. Happiness is the most important thing. Updates can be slow. Madam, you must soothe your emotions. If you want to be happy, I will send you a row of hair?????????
I'm here, although I can't find the DY number that is your friend [Manually sad]
I have finished reading all the updates so far. It is really good. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot and the relationship between the two people. Good luck writing!!! In addition, I would like to make a brief suggestion: the number of words in a paragraph can be reduced, and it can be divided into more paragraphs. If one paragraph is full, it will be a bit visual fatigue (personal thoughts and suggestions)
I also came from Douyin. The writing is very good. I feel that the plot will be better if it is more complicated. Hehe
Hahahahahaha I love reading BE articles. Xi Sui's words almost made me forget that he was frail and sick, but not Li Chishen.
Madam, please remember that you are never allowed to write be articles in the future.
It's really beautiful. I'm here to update it again.