After the Jingnan Campaign ended, Zhu Di, Prince of Yan, ascended the throne and began a sweeping purge of the old officials who had served under the Jianwen Emperor. After Tie Xuan, the Jianwen Emperor's Minister of War, was killed, his two daughters were consigned to the Music Bureau and forced to become entertainers along the Qinhuai River. His elder daughter, Tie Binghua, died on a snowy winter's day in the first year of Yongle. Her corpse was left in the street to be eaten by dogs. Soon afterward, his younger daughter, Tie Bingzi, was executed by slow slicing outside Qingliang Gate...
Time passed. In the spring of the fifth year of Yongle, a series of murders shook the capital, Yingtian Prefecture. All the victims were high-ranking officials of the court who had taken part in the Jingnan Campaign. Xue Yunhe, the young master of the Prince Consort's residence, and Prince Xiang, a figure from the martial world, investigated the cases and discovered that the murders were closely linked to a mysterious woman who called herself the "Water Demon of Jinghu Lake"...
Along the misty, bustling Qinhuai River, amid the warbling of orioles, how many painted skeletons lie buried? In Jinling, where the gentle spring breeze turns the trees green, whose tears of blood and rouge can bear such a weight?
I dedicate this book to the women who lost their lives in political struggles throughout Chinese history.
Thanks to Yue Liang Yu of Bishui Jiangting for creating this gorgeous cover, and an even bigger thanks to all the readers who have come to support me! I look forward to your guidance.
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Sure enough, I still can't accept this ending... If I must take revenge... I guess I will take revenge even if I join Bei Yuan and subvert the Han family...
"On the banks of the misty and prosperous Qinhuai River, how many red and pink skeletons are buried with the chirping of orioles? Whose rouge, blood and tears can't be carried in the green Mausoleum blown by the spring breeze?"
Sitting quietly alone in the dim light, with a click of the mouse, another page of the book was turned. Walking through the rugged mossy alleys and through the thick dust of history, whose voice is coming towards you with a soft smile and a slowly swaying bamboo board?
One general achieved great success, a battle of peace, a Yongle Emperor, and under the overwhelming imperial power, more than just the good man who went to battle to kill the enemy disappeared? Look, who is the person who achieved the hegemony of the wealthy people on the banks of the Qinhuai River?
"If you are not included in the music, you will be executed at Lingchi, and the corpse will be fed to the dogs in the street..." The shocking imperial orders, the stunned onlookers, and the word "sorrow" slowly emerged, as if it were made in heaven. But what a head start!
When Wedge came up, it was a bloody storm, and it successfully attracted a lot of attention. The smoke dispersed, the gongs sounded, and the show began. It just opens with a long dialogue. In the dialogue between you and me, the parents of the east and west and the shortcomings of the family are revealed. Although useful information can be extracted from it, the dull and stereotyped dialogue can also make people feel complicated.
The plot of the story slowly unfolds, and a public case brings out the love and hatred of the past. Characters of all sizes appear on stage, but they wear hats, dance with sleeves, and sing. It's just that the opera is interesting and bizarre, and the thick text reveals an air of absurdity for no reason, making it difficult for people to understand and understand, and it is slowly buried like quicksand.
This article only has 100,000 words. It is a veritable novella, and the plot is not complicated. The unsolved case in the capital leads to the remnants of Jianwen Party, and then reveals a love-hate entanglement in the Tie family in the past, and even the secret history of Yongle.
The text is written in the third person and the story is told entirely from the storyteller's perspective. Therefore, although love is involved, it is not the focus. There are four emotional scenes, in addition to the slightly dull emotional entanglement between the male and female protagonists, there is also a love affair between the heroine's sister and the hero's father, a betrayal and redemption between the heroine and the hero's father, and an ambiguous affair between the emperor and the eldest son of the Tie family. Use emotions as clues to connect the ins and outs of the story, making it continuous and advancing slowly.
But the reason why there is an air of absurdity in the text of this article is also very important because of the author's unexpected arrangement of the plot. From the slightly dull first chapter to the later stages, as a series of characters suddenly appeared, the story suddenly became bizarre and bizarre, just like the legends of the Tang Dynasty. The seemingly heavy historical drama was tainted with a layer of absurdity, historical records turned into legends, and severe frost turned into drizzle.
The first unexpected figure is Emperor Bian. When watching a seemingly sophisticated drama about the history of the Ming Dynasty, Emperor Chengzu suddenly said seriously that the reason why he wanted to kill the entire Tie family was just because of the eldest son of the Tie family who was killed by his own father. When the mystery was revealed and a 180-degree reversal occurred, and he learned that everything was just a romance, how could the upright viewers not be dumbfounded?
The second unexpected person is the monk, the monk with the most famous father in the world. This character appeared after more than half of the article, but as soon as he appeared, he did a big thing. He rescued the captured heroine from the assassination from the tightly guarded palace as if no one else was watching. He laughed and cursed, talked and laughed freely, just like an airborne troop. He has an incomparable personality and can kill with one strike.
The third unexpected character is Mr. Dongyue, who finally appeared after hearing several echoes. He is the most powerful figure behind the scenes of this article, a god-like existence, a master who can solve all problems without taking any action. He was speechless and choked.
Three unexpected characters appeared one after another when the curtain of the drama was about to fall, and their boats and oars were turned into ashes in the blink of an eye, just like the knights in yellow in the legend of the Tang Dynasty, concluding, ending and starting over in an understatement. The watercolor of the drama is gradually washed away, and the legendary imagination finally appears. The absurdity is getting stronger and stronger, ready to come out.
A 100,000-word article, a bizarre story, an ambush behind the seemingly ending, and an endless romance after the bloody storm. The appearance of a knight in yellow in the biography of Huo Xiaoyu completes the strong character of "I will become a fierce ghost after my death, making my wife and concubines uneasy all day long". However, at the end of this article, a group of knights in yellow appeared. The knights waved their hands, and all the problems in the previous article were easily solved. Although it seemed to be a complete success, the audience, who were struggling to watch the show, ducked.
He Dao asked if it was a flower or a brick? I'm confused too. It looks like a flower but not a flower, it looks like a brick but not a brick. To say it is a golden finger, I feel it again. Because looking at this article, it is just like a side story in a big story, a small link in a big ring. So as a viewer, I could only vaguely write down my feelings truthfully, bowed and retreated.
= =This couple has so much fun with their son. . If you want to write about time travel, just write it. . The reason why I am disappointed is because there are too many time-travel writings that are the same. . You can write a different version of time travel. . Good time travel articles are hard to find. We are always looking for good articles. .
Whoops, here comes the extra points
Float and scatter flowers, twists and turns, okay, let's make it clear~
Yes, I support Fisherman in writing the story of Mr. And Mrs. Dongyue. Hahahaha~
Time travel? Long story? ? ? Just forget it
I strongly recommend that the fisherman write the story of Mr. And Mrs. Dongyue. I think their story must be very interesting and exciting! This Mrs. Zhang is so cute in her words and deeds, and has a sense of joy. She complements Mr. Dongyue's literary and military skills perfectly. From their few words of dialogue, we can guess that there must have been many stories that happened back then! So I hope Fisherman will write their story as a prequel to Yongle, that would be worth looking forward to!
Fisherman, I'm here again. In fact, I really want to read time-travel stories. Although everyone thinks that the time-travel theme is poorly written, if you can write something very unusual, it will definitely shock readers. I just want to say some of my own opinions. First of all, the logic of ordinary female authors writing time travel novels no longer works. Zhuangzhuang's previous works such as "Eternal Night" and "Pandora Green Rose" are good representatives, but they cannot withstand review and scrutiny. If they write similar ones, they will definitely be compared. I think the identity of someone who travels back in time is very important. It is best to avoid ladies, men, princesses, eunuchs, etc. Moreover, it is also very fake to pretend to have amnesia to deceive people around you. The dynasty you travel to is also very important. The Qing Dynasty, Ming Dynasty and Yuan Dynasty are all omitted. If you make up a dynasty, to be honest, I won't read it unless I am very sure about the author. So it is best to choose an era that everyone knows but is not familiar with. There should be historical celebrities, but don't limit the story to one or two characters. I prefer Huang Yi's "Looking for Qin" in this regard. Regarding the beauty and ugliness of the heroine, to be honest, I still like to read stories about beautiful women, but don't let all men go crazy for her. She must have beauty that can compete with her. Beauty must be just right. She must have wisdom and shortcomings. How to outperform other beauties in ancient times and show the temperament of modern people is also a difficult point to grasp. I think poetry can be quoted, but it must be used appropriately, sparingly and with caution. Modern lyrics and the like can be omitted. In terms of talent, we have seen too many prodigies who can learn whatever they learn. If there is a competition or the like, there is nothing wrong with being a little embarrassed. No one has written about it like this before. Maybe some people will like to read it. In addition, it is also difficult to write a male protagonist. I personally don't like male protagonists who are particularly beautiful or domineering. I still like talented men and women who have a Confucian style, but I can't stick to the rules. Those who can do anything at the age of 5 or 10 years old do not feel reliable. Really smart people know how to act stupid and follow the crowd. There must also be dazzling supporting characters. In fact, in many novels, readers may prefer male supporting characters, so the supporting character must die helplessly in the end, so that readers can feel regret whenever they recall it. This is like first love and marriage. General Lin in "The Beauty" is a dazzling supporting character. That's all I can think of for the moment. It's just my personal opinion and cannot represent all readers, but I hope it will be of some use.
Fisherman, I am also the diving king of ten thousand years.
But after reading your article, I have been thinking about writing some serious comments when I have some free time, but before I was ready, I was shocked by you who wanted to write about time travel.
The real thunder of time travel is essentially thunder. Very few people wear it well. So far, the ones I have seen marked with the word time travel are basically 54 - I am really afraid of being too scorched by the thunder. What Rosaland said before is also my opinion. Time travel is really easy to turn into a thunderstorm~ Fisherman, you must be careful~! ! !
I have always loved fiction, because if the historical articles are not written carefully, they can easily become pure historical fiction. On the other hand, fiction that draws on the ancient background can provide the author with a larger space for play and a freer setting method.
In short, Fisherman, I believe in your strength and firmly support your writing of fiction, but traveling through time... Looking at the sky... Is really full of guilt...
Having said that, when it comes to this Yongle Tragedy, I also think the previous netizen "Yiyi"'s point of view is very pertinent. It does have a grand and thrilling beginning, but at the end, the supporting characters steal the show...= =|||||
The tone of Yongle is not what I like, it is too heavy and sad, but Fisherman's writing style and conception are the motivation for me to continue reading. The ending is inevitably a bit abrupt. Fisherman, are you too anxious to finish...= =|||
Sure enough, I still can't accept this ending... If I must take revenge... I guess I will take revenge even if I join Bei Yuan and subvert the Han family...
"On the banks of the misty and prosperous Qinhuai River, how many red and pink skeletons are buried with the chirping of orioles? Whose rouge, blood and tears can't be carried in the green Mausoleum blown by the spring breeze?" Sitting quietly alone in the dim light, with a click of the mouse, another page of the book was turned. Walking through the rugged mossy alleys and through the thick dust of history, whose voice is coming towards you with a soft smile and a slowly swaying bamboo board? One general achieved great success, a battle of peace, a Yongle Emperor, and under the overwhelming imperial power, more than just the good man who went to battle to kill the enemy disappeared? Look, who is the person who achieved the hegemony of the wealthy people on the banks of the Qinhuai River? "If you are not included in the music, you will be executed at Lingchi, and the corpse will be fed to the dogs in the street..." The shocking imperial orders, the stunned onlookers, and the word "sorrow" slowly emerged, as if it were made in heaven. But what a head start! When Wedge came up, it was a bloody storm, and it successfully attracted a lot of attention. The smoke dispersed, the gongs sounded, and the show began. It just opens with a long dialogue. In the dialogue between you and me, the parents of the east and west and the shortcomings of the family are revealed. Although useful information can be extracted from it, the dull and stereotyped dialogue can also make people feel complicated. The plot of the story slowly unfolds, and a public case brings out the love and hatred of the past. Characters of all sizes appear on stage, but they wear hats, dance with sleeves, and sing. It's just that the opera is interesting and bizarre, and the thick text reveals an air of absurdity for no reason, making it difficult for people to understand and understand, and it is slowly buried like quicksand. This article only has 100,000 words. It is a veritable novella, and the plot is not complicated. The unsolved case in the capital leads to the remnants of Jianwen Party, and then reveals a love-hate entanglement in the Tie family in the past, and even the secret history of Yongle. The text is written in the third person and the story is told entirely from the storyteller's perspective. Therefore, although love is involved, it is not the focus. There are four emotional scenes, in addition to the slightly dull emotional entanglement between the male and female protagonists, there is also a love affair between the heroine's sister and the hero's father, a betrayal and redemption between the heroine and the hero's father, and an ambiguous affair between the emperor and the eldest son of the Tie family. Use emotions as clues to connect the ins and outs of the story, making it continuous and advancing slowly. But the reason why there is an air of absurdity in the text of this article is also very important because of the author's unexpected arrangement of the plot. From the slightly dull first chapter to the later stages, as a series of characters suddenly appeared, the story suddenly became bizarre and bizarre, just like the legends of the Tang Dynasty. The seemingly heavy historical drama was tainted with a layer of absurdity, historical records turned into legends, and severe frost turned into drizzle. The first unexpected figure is Emperor Bian. When watching a seemingly sophisticated drama about the history of the Ming Dynasty, Emperor Chengzu suddenly said seriously that the reason why he wanted to kill the entire Tie family was just because of the eldest son of the Tie family who was killed by his own father. When the mystery was revealed and a 180-degree reversal occurred, and he learned that everything was just a romance, how could the upright viewers not be dumbfounded? The second unexpected person is the monk, the monk with the most famous father in the world. This character appeared after more than half of the article, but as soon as he appeared, he did a big thing. He rescued the captured heroine from the assassination from the tightly guarded palace as if no one else was watching. He laughed and cursed, talked and laughed freely, just like an airborne troop. He has an incomparable personality and can kill with one strike. The third unexpected character is Mr. Dongyue, who finally appeared after hearing several echoes. He is the most powerful figure behind the scenes of this article, a god-like existence, a master who can solve all problems without taking any action. He was speechless and choked. Three unexpected characters appeared one after another when the curtain of the drama was about to fall, and their boats and oars were turned into ashes in the blink of an eye, just like the knights in yellow in the legend of the Tang Dynasty, concluding, ending and starting over in an understatement. The watercolor of the drama is gradually washed away, and the legendary imagination finally appears. The absurdity is getting stronger and stronger, ready to come out. A 100,000-word article, a bizarre story, an ambush behind the seemingly ending, and an endless romance after the bloody storm. The appearance of a knight in yellow in the biography of Huo Xiaoyu completes the strong character of "I will become a fierce ghost after my death, making my wife and concubines uneasy all day long". However, at the end of this article, a group of knights in yellow appeared. The knights waved their hands, and all the problems in the previous article were easily solved. Although it seemed to be a complete success, the audience, who were struggling to watch the show, ducked. He Dao asked if it was a flower or a brick? I'm confused too. It looks like a flower but not a flower, it looks like a brick but not a brick. To say it is a golden finger, I feel it again. Because looking at this article, it is just like a side story in a big story, a small link in a big ring. So as a viewer, I could only vaguely write down my feelings truthfully, bowed and retreated.
= =This couple has so much fun with their son. . If you want to write about time travel, just write it. . The reason why I am disappointed is because there are too many time-travel writings that are the same. . You can write a different version of time travel. . Good time travel articles are hard to find. We are always looking for good articles. .
Whoops, here comes the extra points
Float and scatter flowers, twists and turns, okay, let's make it clear~
Yes, I support Fisherman in writing the story of Mr. And Mrs. Dongyue. Hahahaha~
Time travel? Long story? ? ? Just forget it
I strongly recommend that the fisherman write the story of Mr. And Mrs. Dongyue. I think their story must be very interesting and exciting! This Mrs. Zhang is so cute in her words and deeds, and has a sense of joy. She complements Mr. Dongyue's literary and military skills perfectly. From their few words of dialogue, we can guess that there must have been many stories that happened back then! So I hope Fisherman will write their story as a prequel to Yongle, that would be worth looking forward to!
Fisherman, I'm here again. In fact, I really want to read time-travel stories. Although everyone thinks that the time-travel theme is poorly written, if you can write something very unusual, it will definitely shock readers. I just want to say some of my own opinions. First of all, the logic of ordinary female authors writing time travel novels no longer works. Zhuangzhuang's previous works such as "Eternal Night" and "Pandora Green Rose" are good representatives, but they cannot withstand review and scrutiny. If they write similar ones, they will definitely be compared. I think the identity of someone who travels back in time is very important. It is best to avoid ladies, men, princesses, eunuchs, etc. Moreover, it is also very fake to pretend to have amnesia to deceive people around you. The dynasty you travel to is also very important. The Qing Dynasty, Ming Dynasty and Yuan Dynasty are all omitted. If you make up a dynasty, to be honest, I won't read it unless I am very sure about the author. So it is best to choose an era that everyone knows but is not familiar with. There should be historical celebrities, but don't limit the story to one or two characters. I prefer Huang Yi's "Looking for Qin" in this regard. Regarding the beauty and ugliness of the heroine, to be honest, I still like to read stories about beautiful women, but don't let all men go crazy for her. She must have beauty that can compete with her. Beauty must be just right. She must have wisdom and shortcomings. How to outperform other beauties in ancient times and show the temperament of modern people is also a difficult point to grasp. I think poetry can be quoted, but it must be used appropriately, sparingly and with caution. Modern lyrics and the like can be omitted. In terms of talent, we have seen too many prodigies who can learn whatever they learn. If there is a competition or the like, there is nothing wrong with being a little embarrassed. No one has written about it like this before. Maybe some people will like to read it. In addition, it is also difficult to write a male protagonist. I personally don't like male protagonists who are particularly beautiful or domineering. I still like talented men and women who have a Confucian style, but I can't stick to the rules. Those who can do anything at the age of 5 or 10 years old do not feel reliable. Really smart people know how to act stupid and follow the crowd. There must also be dazzling supporting characters. In fact, in many novels, readers may prefer male supporting characters, so the supporting character must die helplessly in the end, so that readers can feel regret whenever they recall it. This is like first love and marriage. General Lin in "The Beauty" is a dazzling supporting character. That's all I can think of for the moment. It's just my personal opinion and cannot represent all readers, but I hope it will be of some use.
Fisherman, I am also the diving king of ten thousand years. But after reading your article, I have been thinking about writing some serious comments when I have some free time, but before I was ready, I was shocked by you who wanted to write about time travel. The real thunder of time travel is essentially thunder. Very few people wear it well. So far, the ones I have seen marked with the word time travel are basically 54 - I am really afraid of being too scorched by the thunder. What Rosaland said before is also my opinion. Time travel is really easy to turn into a thunderstorm~ Fisherman, you must be careful~! ! ! I have always loved fiction, because if the historical articles are not written carefully, they can easily become pure historical fiction. On the other hand, fiction that draws on the ancient background can provide the author with a larger space for play and a freer setting method. In short, Fisherman, I believe in your strength and firmly support your writing of fiction, but traveling through time... Looking at the sky... Is really full of guilt... Having said that, when it comes to this Yongle Tragedy, I also think the previous netizen "Yiyi"'s point of view is very pertinent. It does have a grand and thrilling beginning, but at the end, the supporting characters steal the show...= =||||| The tone of Yongle is not what I like, it is too heavy and sad, but Fisherman's writing style and conception are the motivation for me to continue reading. The ending is inevitably a bit abrupt. Fisherman, are you too anxious to finish...= =|||