A World of What Might Have Been (GL)

Is this the end? It's not what I imagined, but it's also what I imagined. It's not the end of the ending~~There is nothing better than letting it go. With the passage of time and the ravages of the years, slowly learn to enjoy your own loneliness~

Let it go? If you can take it, let it go, or at least pick it up. How can you let it go before you take it? Many times you don't know what you really want, and you won't be willing to see it clearly. What is love? Can this society really tolerate the love between women? No Those who dare to believe it also dare not consider it. There are still a lot of burdens on them. But there are not many people who have the courage. There are even fewer people who can find a true lover. There is no need for reality, and there is no need for dreams. But I still hope that people can be happy. Haha

Regarding such a story, let's call it a story, I don't know where to start commenting, because this is the author's real experience. I always feel that novelists should write more fantasy than reality, so that readers can feel at ease with their entertainment. And for a work like this that incorporates too many real experiences and emotions, I always feel that it is better to sigh than to criticize. But having said that, in fact, most of the author's novels are filled with his own feelings. Articles without true feelings are not good articles. This is what teachers have taught us since childhood. So I said that we all have feelings, more or less. It's just whether she will become worldly~ Classmate Naihe is a good classmate with something in her mind. This is the conclusion I made not long ago. Then she shamelessly gave me a link to her article and asked me to write a book review as shamelessly as Peter Pan (there is a suspicion of being like a famous writer, but I don't care, because that is my purpose!!). After reading the article, I think my conclusion is quite correct - Quote: A piece of brick in Comrade Naihe's book triggered associations, and I was really touched after reading it. Indeed, sometimes ambiguity is really close but love is far away. There are too many "blockages" in this world that we cannot break, some are objective and some are subjective, some are given by others and some are self-imposed. The most difficult thing to break through is the self. At least that's how I feel. Classmate Naihe is a good classmate with dreams. This is my conclusion after reading this article. Don't ask me why, I feel that I can't explain clearly and I can't explain it well. OK, I am the person who despises the good things of others, so after praising them, it's time for me to criticize them. Well, please watch... 1. The arrangement of the article is somewhat confusing. It's OK to not play cards according to common sense; it's OK to use narrative methods; but this kind of writing sometimes makes the readers feel a little tired. There is no coherence in thinking, there are jumps from beginning to end, and I feel that my emotions are separated. 2. The characterization is not enough. There are many characters in the novel, but the psychological description is not enough, and the description of the characters' psychological state and personality is a little thin, so the characters in the novel appear to be full and vivid. Xia Shu is the protagonist, but I feel that I don't know as much about Xia Shu as I do about Nai He. It shouldn't be like this after a story, which is my next question. 3. The storyline is very rich, with ups and downs and ups and downs. The despair and hope, helplessness and control revealed in daily life are actually good. But I don't know why I couldn't be caught by the plot of the story. This article made me feel like I was reading rather than feeling. In other words, it has no resonance and does not enter the story. I watched it three times and still couldn't get into the character. I don't know if it's because I have good control, or if the story really lacks something. 4. Some small suggestions First, regarding Natsuki's sentence. I think this should be considered negligent injury. The sentence of 3 years is a bit harsh. Secondly, regarding the name Natsuki, I should actually focus on the first point and say that this name is really unflattering. Third, about Natsuki's trip. I don't think Natsuki's noodle business is a hugely profitable business, and she almost used up all her savings when she opened the shop. When leaving, it seemed that Natsuki was very free and easy, really just waving her hands without taking away a single cloud. But what is the source of income for such a long and extensive trip? And just looking at the places and times I traveled, it didn't seem like I was making money while traveling. Fourth, about Shen, I like to call her that. She left so suddenly, without any struggle at all. Maybe she felt that she was not loved enough, or maybe she felt that she had no expectations; and Song, her appearance was so natural but it was incredible. At one point, I even thought that Shen should have loved her, but there was no news about her in the following article. Such a disappearance was too hasty. This is also the reason why I said the characters are relatively thin and not vivid enough. Finally, what I have to say is that asking a novella to achieve the narrative effect of a long story is actually a very demanding thing in itself. Maybe my request is too much, but I always feel that the shorter the story, the more concise and concentrated it is. Long stories rarely achieve the shocking effect of short stories, although the two are incomparable. Comrade is still a good comrade, but my requirements are a bit higher. I welcome your suggestions. I dare say I am not afraid of being beaten. Thank you.

[Complaint] №1 Netizen: Lin Lan Comment: "The World of Naihe (GL)" Rating: 2 Publication time: 2006-03-24 16:00:32 Chapters reviewed: 40 I like your writing very much The writing is really apt and true. I wonder if the author is LES? I am so i cried Thank you Lin Lan:) Maybe it was because too much personal emotion was involved in it, but I was so moved that I wanted to cry, but I still didn't cry after all... I wasn't a lesbian before I met her, now I only like girls :) Is this a clear answer? Hehe

I like your writing very much The writing is really apt and true. I wonder if the author is LES? I am so i cried

I feel like I have nothing to say, it's too desolate…

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№1 Netizen: jiaozi Comment: "The World of Naihe (GL)" Rating: 2 Publication time: 2006-03-19 23:12:08 Chapters reviewed: 40 Cowardice is cowardice, why do we need to add some specious reasons? ! The guy downstairs hit the nail on the head! I have pursued it persistently, but whoever continues to pursue it even after knowing it is impossible, or who does not find another way out after constant setbacks, such persistence is so beautiful that it is enviable. Maybe "plausible reasons" can comfort my empty mood. Please don't mind if the writing is too depressing. It's better to read my other articles, maybe it will give your eyes another light, at least it will be different.

Cowardice is cowardice, why do we need to add some specious reasons? !

Thank you to everyone who reviewed me! I originally wanted to write another chapter to explain it, but it was really beyond my ability. New inspirations filled my head, and I was ready to open a new pit:) Everyone is welcome to support me! There are too many personal emotions mixed into this article and it is a lot of depression, but every time I think about it again, I will be moved to pieces. The person downstairs is right. This is one of my ideal life conditions. I really want to achieve results, but I can't bear to end it, so I learn to grow through struggle, and then I realize the beauty of giving up.