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Life is full of surprises. The kite in your hand may suddenly snap its string.
Life is full of coincidences. Even two parallel lines might meet one day.
In this familiar yet strange online game, we are searching for a face that is strange yet familiar.
Story version:
Yichen, who loves playing online games, meets the aloof Yelan in a game and makes friends with all kinds of people.
From one alliance to an entire city, they share joys and hardships, and gradually fall for each other.
But just as their love is beginning to bloom, a conspiracy strikes…
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That, I watched it back and forth several times, I think it would be better if Chenchen's heart was more detailed. Chenchen's reaction to Yelan's offensive was a bit like a bystander, and then he suddenly fell in love with Yelan. It felt like he missed a lot.
And in the end, it felt a bit unfinished. What happened to those people, and a series of things happened after that. Suddenly, they were rescued from Chenchen and then moved to the siege battle -0-. I thought I had skipped a few chapters at first.
Just to mention one thing, the big text is still very beautiful. In a time of literary shortage, having such a delicious article will still make people feel very happy
Come on!!!
\\(^O^)/Read it in one go. La la
Ai I feel like I still have more to say~
- - BS you, I would rather you write down those things you just imagined.
Happy birthday, my dear friend, scatter flowers.
You are an adult, truly 18 years old. (Although my feeling about adulthood is just that I can go to Internet cafes with arrogance, ORZ.)
First of all, congratulations to your Zuiyue OL for finally HE. Zuiyue OL is really a very long online game article (nonsense). It was serialized for nearly a year. I have to say that in this article, I can completely see your passion for writing, your continued growth, and your determination to become a great master. I know that there was a period of time before when you were really sad because your income did not increase, your collections did not increase, and there were no comments. The few comments really made you depressed, and you even had the idea of abandoning the article. But I am very fortunate that you survived, and the constant updating of articles during this period shows your increasingly calm mentality. I wonder if you feel this way. Although sometimes I still feel uncomfortable because there are no messages, no comments, etc., It is not as unbearable as before, or even passive resistance. So, I think you probably really understand, no matter whether there are those messages or not, at least, someone is really reading the article.
Although some readers were lost in a hurry when adding V, it is undeniable that every author will experience these situations. I am also very lucky that you quickly found a balance between the lost readers and the remaining readers, because these remaining readers are a group of absolutely loyal readers who will definitely support you. Therefore, are you afraid of less income? Don't be afraid, because if you add up, one day your article will still attract a large number of readers even if it is deleted, which will prove that you are truly a great person.
In fact, I haven't been in Jinjiang for a long time. How can I put it, because there are more and more authors writing articles recently, and it is difficult to find good articles among them. Therefore, I can't help but feel a little discouraged. If I want to read articles, I ask my friends if they have any good articles to recommend. Therefore, Yishisang and Zuiyue OL can be said to be my only bond in Jinjiang. Yishisang's seriousness in readers' comments made me really feel the sense of need when the author understands and absorbs the author's opinions. It made me feel very comfortable, because the author writes very hard, but I can feel that my help can save the author. This feeling is really wonderful. So I chose to continue to support Yishi Sang without hesitation.
I have basically written all my views on Zuiyue OL in the last long review. Writing it again would be a bit of a waste of time, so I am not going to write more pros and cons. Instead, I have found the most obvious one from the series after the last long review: In the previous long review I once wrote that there was too little interaction between the protagonists, and then I found that in the later chapters, Yi Shi Sang had added obvious interactions between the two parties, such as familiarity in words and intimacy in actions, but I have to say that it seemed a bit stiff (maybe it is my personal feeling) ), but I always feel that there is an element of sudden and deliberate interaction between the two people in it. However, this is probably a problem that was noticed later, which caused this situation. However, seeing the interaction between the two people in the later articles will indeed make people feel more emotional. And warmth, so Yishisang, write more of this interactive feeling into your new article, (ORZ, actually I want to say that H Shenma's is the most lovable, does the new article have H~~~! KUSO, Jinjiang Shenma's is the most annoying, and Broth Shenma's is not enough. - -! )
Secondly, the most direct reason for writing a long comment this time is that I forgot your birthday, Yishisang, so I came here to apologize. Also, because I don't have any gifts for you, I chose the long comment that you always need to pay attention to, because I am good at sensationalism and the worst at finding faults. . - - After seeing Xiaoxun, Xiaoyou, and Xiaozhu all come to write long comments, I feel a little bit ready to move. Is this a confession post for Liu Shishou? ! Well, the main reason is to make Yishisang happier, ah, by the way, the name Yiyan, pfft, is quite interesting! 77 Is really good at learning and applying it!
Then there is the problem of article piracy, which has been bothering you for a long time. I regret that I can't help you. I can only tell you that since there are searches for your articles on Baidu, it proves that many people still want to read your articles, so come on! (ORZ, what am I talking about?! In fact, I'm just here to remind you of the extra story--, you who steal the article, the God-horse, Yishisang, probably you can't stop it--, touch, but the children's shoes who steal the article, can you stop being so arrogant and keep updating simultaneously--, although I understand this eagerness to see the latest updates--)
In the end, your new pit: opened up around you, although it started out very tortuously: first, after posting on the forum and being reminded that the copy was likely to be stolen, you wanted to change the plot but couldn't keep up with the ideas that were already in your mind. Secondly, there were various interesting and cute things that were criticized and pointed out in the copy, and then you started character creation under the guidance of □. These really cost you a lot of energy, Yishi Sang, so I am confident that based on Zuiyue OL's article, it will definitely look better by your side, and the strong and powerful one is indeed my cuteness! So, without any care, I continued to write about my legacy.
Zuiyue OL is yours, and being by your side is another milestone on your way to becoming a great god, so don't update carelessly!
PS, if the update is slow, I will definitely call you serially.
GO GO GO, start a new journey.
Review of "The Drunken Moon"
I still remember watching Zuiyue when I was preparing to enter my first year of high school, almost a year ago. When I was watching Zuiyue, I was crazy about online games. . Still confused.
There is a computer class in the first year of high school. If the teacher is in a good mood, he will let us surf the Internet. We will happily run up to Jinjiang River to watch the drunken moon. . . However, Zuiyue hadn't updated much at that time, so I finished reading it in just a few episodes, and I felt very unhappy. Yishi also made an announcement saying that it would stop updating for a while. . . .
Of course, due to various reasons, I feel sorry for not being able to post in time! To make up the numbers: It was one morning. After I had recruited in advance, my father took me to Labrang Monastery in Gansu Province. They got up early to take pictures of the morning scenery. When I woke up, they had not come back yet. I opened my laptop and looked at the drunken moon, haha! I just found that there are a lot of new ones that I haven't read. . . Also, not long ago, when the finale was about to come to an end, I spent several hundred Jinjiang coins in one night. I was urged to update the story but couldn't read it in time. I felt a bit sorry. . . . I am here to make up for you.
At that time, Zuiyue updated which chapter it was. . Forgot. It's just that I have a deep impression of Zuiyue. I'll see if I can update it as soon as I can go home during the holidays. I like the image created by Yichen: the ethereal figure, the elegant guqin, and other identities... It can be said that the image of Shou that I yearn for is somewhat common, but it is not like a novice, not lazy, not like a monster... It gives people freshness and naturalness, and reveals the charm of ink and wash that I love. Sigh, the plot is a bit short...
As for that guy, Leng Yelan~(@^_^@)~ has a very comfortable name, and it's my favorite surname. . . It's really good (⊙o⊙)!
Apart from the two protagonists, I like Dulu Dulu the most, such a cute baby. . . .
I'm in a hurry and want to write a long review for Yishi. It's my first time and I don't know what content is needed. . . Make up a few more words. . .
Left behind. . I'm waiting for your extra story at school. Move faster. Xiaoyu, who is procrastinating, will get angry. No, he will get angry no matter what. There is also an updated article on the Lost World. I will follow it. I hope the new article on the Lost World will be updated faster and faster. . . . .
Well, and thanks to the legacy, I have made many friends. A bumper harvest this summer~\\(≧▽≦)/~ La la la! ! ! (This is a long review, right?!)
Give it to the jerked jj again
I still remember watching Zuiyue when I was preparing to enter my first year of high school, almost a year ago. When I was watching Zuiyue, I was crazy about online games. . Still confused.
There is a computer class in the first year of high school. If the teacher is in a good mood, he will let us surf the Internet. We will happily run up to Jinjiang River to watch the drunken moon. . . However, Zuiyue hadn't updated much at that time, so I finished reading it in just a few episodes, and I felt very unhappy. Yishi also made an announcement saying that it would stop updating for a while. . . .
Of course, due to various reasons, I feel sorry for not being able to post in time! To make up the numbers: It was one morning. After I had recruited in advance, my father took me to Labrang Monastery in Gansu Province. They got up early to take pictures of the morning scenery. When I woke up, they had not come back yet. I opened my laptop and looked at the drunken moon, haha! I just found that there are a lot of new ones that I haven't read. . . Also, not long ago, when the finale was about to come to an end, I spent several hundred Jinjiang coins in one night. I was urged to update the story but couldn't read it in time. I felt a bit sorry. . . . I am here to make up for you.
At that time, Zuiyue updated which chapter it was. . Forgot. It's just that I have a deep impression of Zuiyue. I'll see if I can update it as soon as I can go home during the holidays. I like the image created by Yichen: the ethereal figure, the elegant guqin, the mysterious identity... It can be said that it is the image of Shou that I long for. Although it is somewhat common, it does not look like a novice, does not look like a lazy person, and does not look like a monster... It gives people freshness and nature, and reveals the charm of ink and wash that I love. Sigh, the plot is a bit short...
As for that attacker, his name is Leng Yelan. His name is very comfortable. It's my favorite surname, ~(@^_^@)~ ha. . . It's really good (⊙o⊙)!
Apart from the two protagonists, my favorite is Dulu Dulu, so cute. . . ~(@^_^@)~
I'm in a hurry and want to write a long review for Yishi. It's my first time and I don't know what content is needed. . . Make up a few more words. . .
Left behind. . I'm waiting for your extra story at school. Move faster. Xiaoyu, who is procrastinating, will get angry. No, he will get angry no matter what. There is also an updated article on the Lost World. I will follow it. I hope the new article on the Lost World will be updated faster and faster. . . . .
I'm not very good at saying touching words, so I wish Yishisang a happy birthday in advance~\\(≧▽≦)/~ La la la! ! ! I will officially return to school tomorrow. By the way, I have already gone back to school twice this summer.
Well, and thanks to the legacy, I have made many friends. A bumper harvest this summer~\\(≧▽≦)/~ La la la! ! ! (This is a short and long review, right?!)
Sure enough, many V stories were finished when I ran out of money. . . . Tear. . .
How can I put it~~ I feel a sense of disappointment every time I read the end of the text~~Bapao~I hope to see new articles soon~~> w <~
How can I feel that my role is being kicked out by someone else? . . . It means that JJ had no money before~
That, I watched it back and forth several times, I think it would be better if Chenchen's heart was more detailed. Chenchen's reaction to Yelan's offensive was a bit like a bystander, and then he suddenly fell in love with Yelan. It felt like he missed a lot. And in the end, it felt a bit unfinished. What happened to those people, and a series of things happened after that. Suddenly, they were rescued from Chenchen and then moved to the siege battle -0-. I thought I had skipped a few chapters at first. Just to mention one thing, the big text is still very beautiful. In a time of literary shortage, having such a delicious article will still make people feel very happy Come on!!!
\\(^O^)/Read it in one go. La la
Ai I feel like I still have more to say~
- - BS you, I would rather you write down those things you just imagined.
Happy birthday, my dear friend, scatter flowers. You are an adult, truly 18 years old. (Although my feeling about adulthood is just that I can go to Internet cafes with arrogance, ORZ.) First of all, congratulations to your Zuiyue OL for finally HE. Zuiyue OL is really a very long online game article (nonsense). It was serialized for nearly a year. I have to say that in this article, I can completely see your passion for writing, your continued growth, and your determination to become a great master. I know that there was a period of time before when you were really sad because your income did not increase, your collections did not increase, and there were no comments. The few comments really made you depressed, and you even had the idea of abandoning the article. But I am very fortunate that you survived, and the constant updating of articles during this period shows your increasingly calm mentality. I wonder if you feel this way. Although sometimes I still feel uncomfortable because there are no messages, no comments, etc., It is not as unbearable as before, or even passive resistance. So, I think you probably really understand, no matter whether there are those messages or not, at least, someone is really reading the article. Although some readers were lost in a hurry when adding V, it is undeniable that every author will experience these situations. I am also very lucky that you quickly found a balance between the lost readers and the remaining readers, because these remaining readers are a group of absolutely loyal readers who will definitely support you. Therefore, are you afraid of less income? Don't be afraid, because if you add up, one day your article will still attract a large number of readers even if it is deleted, which will prove that you are truly a great person. In fact, I haven't been in Jinjiang for a long time. How can I put it, because there are more and more authors writing articles recently, and it is difficult to find good articles among them. Therefore, I can't help but feel a little discouraged. If I want to read articles, I ask my friends if they have any good articles to recommend. Therefore, Yishisang and Zuiyue OL can be said to be my only bond in Jinjiang. Yishisang's seriousness in readers' comments made me really feel the sense of need when the author understands and absorbs the author's opinions. It made me feel very comfortable, because the author writes very hard, but I can feel that my help can save the author. This feeling is really wonderful. So I chose to continue to support Yishi Sang without hesitation. I have basically written all my views on Zuiyue OL in the last long review. Writing it again would be a bit of a waste of time, so I am not going to write more pros and cons. Instead, I have found the most obvious one from the series after the last long review: In the previous long review I once wrote that there was too little interaction between the protagonists, and then I found that in the later chapters, Yi Shi Sang had added obvious interactions between the two parties, such as familiarity in words and intimacy in actions, but I have to say that it seemed a bit stiff (maybe it is my personal feeling) ), but I always feel that there is an element of sudden and deliberate interaction between the two people in it. However, this is probably a problem that was noticed later, which caused this situation. However, seeing the interaction between the two people in the later articles will indeed make people feel more emotional. And warmth, so Yishisang, write more of this interactive feeling into your new article, (ORZ, actually I want to say that H Shenma's is the most lovable, does the new article have H~~~! KUSO, Jinjiang Shenma's is the most annoying, and Broth Shenma's is not enough. - -! ) Secondly, the most direct reason for writing a long comment this time is that I forgot your birthday, Yishisang, so I came here to apologize. Also, because I don't have any gifts for you, I chose the long comment that you always need to pay attention to, because I am good at sensationalism and the worst at finding faults. . - - After seeing Xiaoxun, Xiaoyou, and Xiaozhu all come to write long comments, I feel a little bit ready to move. Is this a confession post for Liu Shishou? ! Well, the main reason is to make Yishisang happier, ah, by the way, the name Yiyan, pfft, is quite interesting! 77 Is really good at learning and applying it! Then there is the problem of article piracy, which has been bothering you for a long time. I regret that I can't help you. I can only tell you that since there are searches for your articles on Baidu, it proves that many people still want to read your articles, so come on! (ORZ, what am I talking about?! In fact, I'm just here to remind you of the extra story--, you who steal the article, the God-horse, Yishisang, probably you can't stop it--, touch, but the children's shoes who steal the article, can you stop being so arrogant and keep updating simultaneously--, although I understand this eagerness to see the latest updates--) In the end, your new pit: opened up around you, although it started out very tortuously: first, after posting on the forum and being reminded that the copy was likely to be stolen, you wanted to change the plot but couldn't keep up with the ideas that were already in your mind. Secondly, there were various interesting and cute things that were criticized and pointed out in the copy, and then you started character creation under the guidance of □. These really cost you a lot of energy, Yishi Sang, so I am confident that based on Zuiyue OL's article, it will definitely look better by your side, and the strong and powerful one is indeed my cuteness! So, without any care, I continued to write about my legacy. Zuiyue OL is yours, and being by your side is another milestone on your way to becoming a great god, so don't update carelessly! PS, if the update is slow, I will definitely call you serially. GO GO GO, start a new journey.
Review of "The Drunken Moon" I still remember watching Zuiyue when I was preparing to enter my first year of high school, almost a year ago. When I was watching Zuiyue, I was crazy about online games. . Still confused. There is a computer class in the first year of high school. If the teacher is in a good mood, he will let us surf the Internet. We will happily run up to Jinjiang River to watch the drunken moon. . . However, Zuiyue hadn't updated much at that time, so I finished reading it in just a few episodes, and I felt very unhappy. Yishi also made an announcement saying that it would stop updating for a while. . . . Of course, due to various reasons, I feel sorry for not being able to post in time! To make up the numbers: It was one morning. After I had recruited in advance, my father took me to Labrang Monastery in Gansu Province. They got up early to take pictures of the morning scenery. When I woke up, they had not come back yet. I opened my laptop and looked at the drunken moon, haha! I just found that there are a lot of new ones that I haven't read. . . Also, not long ago, when the finale was about to come to an end, I spent several hundred Jinjiang coins in one night. I was urged to update the story but couldn't read it in time. I felt a bit sorry. . . . I am here to make up for you. At that time, Zuiyue updated which chapter it was. . Forgot. It's just that I have a deep impression of Zuiyue. I'll see if I can update it as soon as I can go home during the holidays. I like the image created by Yichen: the ethereal figure, the elegant guqin, and other identities... It can be said that the image of Shou that I yearn for is somewhat common, but it is not like a novice, not lazy, not like a monster... It gives people freshness and naturalness, and reveals the charm of ink and wash that I love. Sigh, the plot is a bit short... As for that guy, Leng Yelan~(@^_^@)~ has a very comfortable name, and it's my favorite surname. . . It's really good (⊙o⊙)! Apart from the two protagonists, I like Dulu Dulu the most, such a cute baby. . . . I'm in a hurry and want to write a long review for Yishi. It's my first time and I don't know what content is needed. . . Make up a few more words. . . Left behind. . I'm waiting for your extra story at school. Move faster. Xiaoyu, who is procrastinating, will get angry. No, he will get angry no matter what. There is also an updated article on the Lost World. I will follow it. I hope the new article on the Lost World will be updated faster and faster. . . . . Well, and thanks to the legacy, I have made many friends. A bumper harvest this summer~\\(≧▽≦)/~ La la la! ! ! (This is a long review, right?!) Give it to the jerked jj again
I still remember watching Zuiyue when I was preparing to enter my first year of high school, almost a year ago. When I was watching Zuiyue, I was crazy about online games. . Still confused. There is a computer class in the first year of high school. If the teacher is in a good mood, he will let us surf the Internet. We will happily run up to Jinjiang River to watch the drunken moon. . . However, Zuiyue hadn't updated much at that time, so I finished reading it in just a few episodes, and I felt very unhappy. Yishi also made an announcement saying that it would stop updating for a while. . . . Of course, due to various reasons, I feel sorry for not being able to post in time! To make up the numbers: It was one morning. After I had recruited in advance, my father took me to Labrang Monastery in Gansu Province. They got up early to take pictures of the morning scenery. When I woke up, they had not come back yet. I opened my laptop and looked at the drunken moon, haha! I just found that there are a lot of new ones that I haven't read. . . Also, not long ago, when the finale was about to come to an end, I spent several hundred Jinjiang coins in one night. I was urged to update the story but couldn't read it in time. I felt a bit sorry. . . . I am here to make up for you. At that time, Zuiyue updated which chapter it was. . Forgot. It's just that I have a deep impression of Zuiyue. I'll see if I can update it as soon as I can go home during the holidays. I like the image created by Yichen: the ethereal figure, the elegant guqin, the mysterious identity... It can be said that it is the image of Shou that I long for. Although it is somewhat common, it does not look like a novice, does not look like a lazy person, and does not look like a monster... It gives people freshness and nature, and reveals the charm of ink and wash that I love. Sigh, the plot is a bit short... As for that attacker, his name is Leng Yelan. His name is very comfortable. It's my favorite surname, ~(@^_^@)~ ha. . . It's really good (⊙o⊙)! Apart from the two protagonists, my favorite is Dulu Dulu, so cute. . . ~(@^_^@)~ I'm in a hurry and want to write a long review for Yishi. It's my first time and I don't know what content is needed. . . Make up a few more words. . . Left behind. . I'm waiting for your extra story at school. Move faster. Xiaoyu, who is procrastinating, will get angry. No, he will get angry no matter what. There is also an updated article on the Lost World. I will follow it. I hope the new article on the Lost World will be updated faster and faster. . . . . I'm not very good at saying touching words, so I wish Yishisang a happy birthday in advance~\\(≧▽≦)/~ La la la! ! ! I will officially return to school tomorrow. By the way, I have already gone back to school twice this summer. Well, and thanks to the legacy, I have made many friends. A bumper harvest this summer~\\(≧▽≦)/~ La la la! ! ! (This is a short and long review, right?!)
Sure enough, many V stories were finished when I ran out of money. . . . Tear. . . How can I put it~~ I feel a sense of disappointment every time I read the end of the text~~Bapao~I hope to see new articles soon~~> w <~
How can I feel that my role is being kicked out by someone else? . . . It means that JJ had no money before~
Discover. . . There are so few people on the sofa