The entire story is undergoing a major revision as of 7.22, mainly to the plot and romance in the second half. There's a lot to fix, so this will take a very long time.
I'm recommending my upcoming historical danmei novel, Forced to Live with a Psycho. Its blurb is below this one.
This novel:
Xie Zi'an has a disorder that makes it difficult for him to recognize emotions. On his way to the hospital, he transmigrates into the book, a danmei novel called A Carefully Laid Plan, as a minor prince doomed to die.
The minor prince shares his name and surname. After his entire clan is massacred, he plays his final part and takes his own life.
Xie Zi'an transmigrates into the book right as the minor prince's clan is being massacred. Without a moment's hesitation, he joins the villain's faction.
Rumor has it that within just two years, the gentle and refined minor prince became a rabid dog at Empress Xiao's side, one that always drew blood when it bit. Everyone in Ye City avoided him.
Yet someone approaches him anyway: Li Hanchi, who will one day become the ultimate villain.
According to the original story, Li Hanchi's family will be slaughtered by the emperor a year from now. He will flee to the border, then fight his way back to Ye City. When he becomes emperor, the protagonist, his beloved, will poison him to death.
For now, he's devoted to the protagonist, his beloved, and swears to follow him and be a good person.
After several confrontations, Xie Zi'an loses the use of both legs. Knowing he's no match for Li Hanchi, he drags his crippled legs away and fakes his death. He recuperates while waiting to enjoy the ending where Li Hanchi is betrayed by his beloved and dies miserably.
Instead, he hears that the man has gone mad ahead of schedule, nearly stabbed his beloved to death, and is searching for him everywhere.
Sensing danger, Xie Zi'an tries to flee again, but as soon as he opens the door, he sees a familiar figure.
Li Hanchi's expression is cold and grim, his eyes dark with menace. He grabs Xie Zi'an's wrist and snarls with almost cruel intensity, 'Fuqing, where else do you think you can run?'
*
It was only much later that Xie Zi'an learned that Li Hanchi had killed everyone who cursed or despised him along the way. He had made it clear to nearly everyone that Xie Zi'an was the beloved he kept buried in his heart, someone no one else was allowed to mention or touch.
Reader's guide
(It's best to subscribe one chapter at a time, so you can cut your losses as soon as you reach something you don't like.)
1. A sickly, beautiful, mad-dog bottom, the son of a disgraced official, Xie Zi'an * a ruthless, unrestrained, wolfish top, the young general Li Hanchi. Both are virgins.
2. 1v1, happy ending.
3. Xiao Xie has a mental illness, emotional detachment disorder, but he'll get better. I'll try to keep this part realistic, but please don't nitpick; I'm not a professional. (Heart.)
4. The story takes place in a fictional world loosely based on the Ming dynasty, but it won't be exactly the same. Some details will differ, and there are original additions.
5. The characters' views aren't the author's views. Please don't attack the author. (Heart.)
6. Xie Zi'an's courtesy name is Fuqing. Li Hanchi's courtesy name is Jingchen.
Upcoming novel blurb
Liang Henian can see monsters invisible to other people. Anyone haunted by one meets a terrible end.
Then one day, a monster began following a young man who had once helped him.
Liang Henian was about to warn him when he saw the young man beat the hideous monster to death, his handsome face lit up with a crazed smile.
Foul, viscous liquid splattered everywhere. It was a horrifying, disgusting sight.
Sensing the dangerous, murderous gaze fixed on him, Liang Henian pretended to be blind.
The corpse vanished into specks of light, and the young man walked toward him, his voice icy. 'Stop pretending. I know you can see them.'
Liang Henian turned to run, but a long, pale hand suddenly pressed down on his shoulder. 'Welcome to the Paranormal Task Force. I'm the team leader, Chen Jing.'
He was about to refuse, but the hand on his shoulder suddenly tightened. 'The pay is excellent. You don't want to join?'
Faced with the man's dangerous eyes, Liang Henian immediately grabbed his hand. 'I do! I really do!'
After being forced to join the Paranormal Task Force, Liang Henian couldn't stand Chen Jing going crazy every day. He ran off in the middle of the night and, along the way, happened to rescue a middle-aged man haunted by a monster.
The man cheerfully handed him a business card. 'The country needs talent like you.'
Seeing the name Chen Jing on the card, Liang Henian's smile slowly froze.
If this man is Chen Jing, then who is the lunatic squatting in his house, going crazy and biting him every night?
Theme: Never give in to fate
After reading it, overall, the flaws outweigh the flaws. The rhythm of the later stage is very different from that of the early stage. In the early stage, it took several ledgers to find, but in the later chapter, at least one person had to die.
The emotional line between Xie and Li is also weird. Li's feelings for Xie are still traceable, and they have been foreshadowed from the early stages. Xie's feelings for Li... Forgive me, a layman, for not understanding this. Li rode a horse and hit Xie, stabbed Xie with a knife, and was often confused. How did Xie fall in love with Li? I don't understand (but rou is quite fragrant, it would be better if it was more intrusive)
Alas, this article is still too short. If the author writes 500,000 words, he should be able to explain everything clearly.
Ah, my 500-word review is gone because of chatting with roommates!!!! Then I will briefly comment. The writing is good, the tone is sad, the logic is average, there is a suspenseful atmosphere, but there is no suspenseful story. The plot is generally monotonous and boring, but the small characters are well and brilliantly portrayed, but there are not many. The protagonist's emotional scenes are very boring and blunt, with sudden changes from before and after, and all Gong can see is superficial love and pretentious deepness, and the character is seriously OOC. The story line is good, but not progressive enough. The overall evaluation was average, and it was pretentious. It made me hold my breath in my heart, and I couldn't get up or get down. Terrified.
No, why is there a "wrong place" in the extra story?
After reading it, negative review! It can be said that it was like a flood of Laqua... I was heartbroken and wanted to give up, but I spent the money!
I've finished reading it, and I'd like to thank the author for shocking my bottleneck. Everyone can really challenge it. Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people. The character of the protagonist is super interesting.
I really think it's okay, but the back part is a bit messy. The front part is very good, and overall it's pretty good. It's not as worthless as the comments section says.
Hey, everyone knows, right? A person can change so much before and after, even a little bit of brainpower can guess it.
Not like be but better than be
Seven years later, I still feel that the main theme is very sad, although this time there is a bit of warmth and peace, at least this time my life is not in danger. I feel that such a summary in the history book is pale, and only one chapter is pale. It is really a pity. If this part summarizes Xie's various measures, and then this troubled ancient times has increased food, scientific and technological progress, improved life, etc., The overall tone will be happier. The country is peaceful and the people are safe. It is good to just summarize it without mentioning the specific lives of the people. I feel that I still think of the chaos and cruelty of several regime subversions.
Ending and spreading flowers, I personally feel that this article is well written. The early part of the article is very exciting, but I feel that the later writing is a bit rushed, and I feel that the author still has a lot of things that he has not written. But as a novice author, I feel that this is already a great beginning, and I wish the author's next book a success.
After Being Forced to Live with Crazy Batches
After Losing His Memory, He Got Together with His Mortal Enemy.
Prison Crane
We Want to Be Together All the Time
The Paranoid Disciple Prepared a Crematorium for Me
After Faking My Death, My Sickly Husband Went Mad
My Secret Crush Is a Top-Tier Tea-Drinker
Grandmother's Death
The Laid-Back Beauty Gets Hunted Every Day
After reading it, overall, the flaws outweigh the flaws. The rhythm of the later stage is very different from that of the early stage. In the early stage, it took several ledgers to find, but in the later chapter, at least one person had to die. The emotional line between Xie and Li is also weird. Li's feelings for Xie are still traceable, and they have been foreshadowed from the early stages. Xie's feelings for Li... Forgive me, a layman, for not understanding this. Li rode a horse and hit Xie, stabbed Xie with a knife, and was often confused. How did Xie fall in love with Li? I don't understand (but rou is quite fragrant, it would be better if it was more intrusive) Alas, this article is still too short. If the author writes 500,000 words, he should be able to explain everything clearly.
Ah, my 500-word review is gone because of chatting with roommates!!!! Then I will briefly comment. The writing is good, the tone is sad, the logic is average, there is a suspenseful atmosphere, but there is no suspenseful story. The plot is generally monotonous and boring, but the small characters are well and brilliantly portrayed, but there are not many. The protagonist's emotional scenes are very boring and blunt, with sudden changes from before and after, and all Gong can see is superficial love and pretentious deepness, and the character is seriously OOC. The story line is good, but not progressive enough. The overall evaluation was average, and it was pretentious. It made me hold my breath in my heart, and I couldn't get up or get down. Terrified.
No, why is there a "wrong place" in the extra story?
After reading it, negative review! It can be said that it was like a flood of Laqua... I was heartbroken and wanted to give up, but I spent the money!
I've finished reading it, and I'd like to thank the author for shocking my bottleneck. Everyone can really challenge it. Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people. The character of the protagonist is super interesting.
I really think it's okay, but the back part is a bit messy. The front part is very good, and overall it's pretty good. It's not as worthless as the comments section says.
Hey, everyone knows, right? A person can change so much before and after, even a little bit of brainpower can guess it.
Not like be but better than be
Seven years later, I still feel that the main theme is very sad, although this time there is a bit of warmth and peace, at least this time my life is not in danger. I feel that such a summary in the history book is pale, and only one chapter is pale. It is really a pity. If this part summarizes Xie's various measures, and then this troubled ancient times has increased food, scientific and technological progress, improved life, etc., The overall tone will be happier. The country is peaceful and the people are safe. It is good to just summarize it without mentioning the specific lives of the people. I feel that I still think of the chaos and cruelty of several regime subversions.
Ending and spreading flowers, I personally feel that this article is well written. The early part of the article is very exciting, but I feel that the later writing is a bit rushed, and I feel that the author still has a lot of things that he has not written. But as a novice author, I feel that this is already a great beginning, and I wish the author's next book a success.