The Song of the Divine Eagle, Unharmed

The writing is normal and by no means childish, but something immediately goes wrong when it comes to the heroine's behavior and behavior. The author probably wanted to write a lively and energetic heroine, but she overdid it and turned her into a noisy and annoying character. The heroine takes up more than half of the main dialogue in this novel. The other characters are mainly responsible for "listening" and "following her instructions." This is a shortcoming.

The heroine is superfluous... Alas...

Because the monthly subscription was not used up. Pu Pu La, it was a bit silly and abrupt at the beginning, but it became much more normal by the middle. However, I personally feel that the author hates Xidu so much that the heroine's tone towards Xidu is very rude. After all, he is also her brother's adoptive father, but to her, he looks like a bastard old man on the roadside.

Isn't that a Mingjiao line...

Nice writing, keep up the good work~~ Pack it up and take it away

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By the way, if it wasn't for Wu Shan, who did Lu Youjiao leave the beggar gang in? Can't remember?...

To put it bluntly, this book is quite good.

Beautiful

Sprinkle flowers~~~~~~~~~~~~! ! The writing is smooth and the story is very watchable. Also: Dear friends who read my article, tell me your story. The male protagonist is also a monk, the son of Ouyang Ke, and he also practices the Nine Yang Sutra. I came over and took a look, and even the word "Hui" in their names was the same! But it's much better than what I can write! My husband is very fair and says that we are both ~~~~~~~~~perverts! ! ! ! Hahahahahahaha