Shuishui was sold by her alcoholic father to a dance hall madam at age ten, for the price of a bottle of liquor. Though he owed a debt of love, it was worth more than a debt for liquor. The beautiful little girl grew into a skilled performer, outshone everyone on the dance floor, and became the dream girl of countless men. But then the bloodwood worked its mischief, and she was swept away, body and soul, to the mysterious ancient kingdom of Loulan.
The conflicts of the Western Regions, royal intrigues, and passionate love are far harder to handle than the men at the nightclub. One little slip, and she could lose her heart.
Song and dance fill the air. One dance from a beauty can entrance the whole city, and she is surrounded by admirers. Though she is aloof and carefree, love awakens every emotion within her.
A lover from the present pursues her soul across a thousand years and through time. A legendary general appears. Will this fulfill their love in the present, or end their love in this life?
A tumultuous life in the palace, love and hate clinging to life, journeys through every corner of Loulan, witnessing right and wrong, struggling amid the gaps in a war, and acting out a truly epic tale.
If... if only there were no need to say so much. The dances of Loulan will end when this song is over, but the story must go on...
P.S. This story is set in the desert city of Pompeii: Loulan. It is a mysterious kingdom. History has concealed the reason for its disappearance, leaving endless room for speculation. The heroine lives freely, but she is no wanton; she is aloof, but not incapable of love; she is a little calculating, but ultimately loves deeply. The supporting characters have all sorts of temperaments, so I won't list them one by one.
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I have always liked Loulan.
Loulan has always belonged to a very mysterious place in my heart, just scatter a flower. Looking forward to the following
Poor Ge Ying, I really want to hug him! Why is he so pitiful? Is he jealous that he is too handsome? Huhu (covering my face, I'm so embarrassed). Finally mother and son recognized each other, so tangled! I really hope that he can take his mother and leave this place of wrong as soon as possible!
Oops, I forgot to rate it just now, sorry!
Poor Ge Ying, I really want to hug him! Why is he so pitiful? Is he jealous that he is too handsome? Huhu (covering my face, I'm so embarrassed). Finally mother and son recognized each other, so tangled! I really hope that he can take his mother and leave this place of wrong as soon as possible!
Generally speaking, tiles and wedges are simply ignored. Today I read it on a whim.
My curiosity was aroused by Nai. I remembered that I had read a poem called Loulan Bride by Xi Murong before, but I couldn't remember it clearly. However, I still remember that it was written with the mentality of Loulan's bride.
Kan Nai's writing is very beautiful. I don't know what kind of Loulan I will write. I read it with great expectation...
Great book! Looking forward to updates!
By the way, I'm a big fan of Duo, and I feel like I'm slowly falling into "The Beauty's Scheming"! I don't know, is this Loulan Dance mainly focused on palace battles? ? ?
Loulan is heavily Sinicized and associated with the Xiongnu. Just learn from the Han Dynasty and the Xiongnu. The prince calls his title directly and adds your highness. The king also uses the title to add your majesty. The queen is replaced by the name "" in the Xiongnu. You can use the title and add the "" or queen.
Dear wife, I feel ashamed to say that I can't bear with you. . . .
I have always been confused, mainly because I am not able to write a high-level opinion. I have read your article and feel that there are some questions, but I don't know how to express them. It has been hanging in my mind. I want to say it, but I can't. I scratch my head and scratch my head. I really don't know how to express it.
I am also exploring myself. I have written in the first person for too long. When I started writing in the third person again, I felt that it was difficult to grasp the focus. Many people want to write, but they are afraid of distracting too much from the theme.
I read your article from the beginning, wife, twice, and I think, first of all, the idea is very good. Loulan is a country full of mystery, and her disappearance is an eternal mystery in the history of archaeology. For this reason, I also wanted to write an article like this, especially about the female corpse unearthed in modern times. I bought many books and studied it for a while. Unfortunately, it was too complicated and I couldn't get a clue at the moment, so I gave up.
My dear, if you can write, it will really make up for the regret, let's spread the flowers! !
Back to the topic, it seems to be a little off topic, haha, I read the article back and forth, and I feel that some of the themes in the article are loose, and I can't see what the central issue you want to express is. The whole setting is a bit petty. If you want to write a grand legend, then the scene can be more elaborate. For example, the background at that time is that in the Yuanshou Year of the Western Han Dynasty, Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty wanted to attack the Xiongnu. Loulan, a small country at that time, was in danger. Let's start with a little background introduction to give you a sense of grandeur.
Please forgive me, wife, and don't hit me. I'm telling the truth. Shuishui is the protagonist, so you can focus more on this girl. However, what kind of character is this girl? I think I couldn't get a full feeling in your writing. The character creation is a bit scattered. You must Grasp the characteristics of this woman, indifference and open-mindedness, enchantment and casual attraction, must be in different occasions, and each occasion should have a fixed performance. You can be enchanting when dancing, and you can be indifferent when treating men, but you must pay attention to the same time period before and after. For example, this paragraph
"Damn it! This ungrateful woman actually showed a manipulative smile to him. He Yanmu pushed Shuishui away like he was disgusted, and his sharp eyes were directed at Shuishui who looked indifferent. "What does manipulative mean? Why is he smiling one minute and turning indifferent the next?
I think Shuishui's performance changes all the time, which can easily make people feel frivolous. You have to grasp the characteristics of this woman and not change at any time (ah, I don't know if my expression is correct, I always feel that I didn't hit the point, please forgive me, wife)
Next comes the male protagonist. Well, there seem to be several male protagonists. The eldest prince has more scenes now. However, it is still the same sentence. I haven't seen anything worthy of attraction. The attractiveness of a character can be reflected in many small details of life. You can try it, but that masked guy is very loving. Hoho, I am indeed BT, and I believe in secrecy!
As for the story, dear, you can be more nervous about the plot. There is the intrigue between Chanyu and King Loulan, and there is also the intrigue between the women in the harem. Plot, plot, is the soul of a story. My dear, you must pay attention to this the most important thing!
For each chapter, you can have a small theme center, and you can have an attractive chapter at the end, which will make it more attractive to read.
Maybe it's because your literary talent is tens of thousands of words, but you haven't developed it yet. According to what I read at the beginning, this story will be a legend, so I may be too anxious to make a conclusion, maybe because the story really hasn't been unfolded in detail yet, so it's hard to say more. I will only express my humble opinion. I always feel that the attraction of the story lies in a flesh-and-blood protagonist, plus flesh-and-blood supporting characters, and a story with an even skeleton. If these points are grasped well, it will be the best novel.
I hope that my wife's articles will become better and better as she writes. You can try what I said, read more and learn more. I am also doing the same. Let's encourage each other!
Forgive me for playing the piano randomly. If it's not right, don't mind my wife. I'm still exploring, maybe it's really wrong. Don't be angry and run away with the pot lid on your back
Haohaohao
Looking at it, it reminds me of many things
Duomi, support you, no matter what time, I can only support you silently
Your writing is your characteristic, it's really good
Still the same sentence: work hard, you will be outstanding
I have always liked Loulan. Loulan has always belonged to a very mysterious place in my heart, just scatter a flower. Looking forward to the following
Poor Ge Ying, I really want to hug him! Why is he so pitiful? Is he jealous that he is too handsome? Huhu (covering my face, I'm so embarrassed). Finally mother and son recognized each other, so tangled! I really hope that he can take his mother and leave this place of wrong as soon as possible! Oops, I forgot to rate it just now, sorry!
Poor Ge Ying, I really want to hug him! Why is he so pitiful? Is he jealous that he is too handsome? Huhu (covering my face, I'm so embarrassed). Finally mother and son recognized each other, so tangled! I really hope that he can take his mother and leave this place of wrong as soon as possible!
Generally speaking, tiles and wedges are simply ignored. Today I read it on a whim. My curiosity was aroused by Nai. I remembered that I had read a poem called Loulan Bride by Xi Murong before, but I couldn't remember it clearly. However, I still remember that it was written with the mentality of Loulan's bride. Kan Nai's writing is very beautiful. I don't know what kind of Loulan I will write. I read it with great expectation...
Great book! Looking forward to updates!
By the way, I'm a big fan of Duo, and I feel like I'm slowly falling into "The Beauty's Scheming"! I don't know, is this Loulan Dance mainly focused on palace battles? ? ?
Loulan is heavily Sinicized and associated with the Xiongnu. Just learn from the Han Dynasty and the Xiongnu. The prince calls his title directly and adds your highness. The king also uses the title to add your majesty. The queen is replaced by the name "" in the Xiongnu. You can use the title and add the "" or queen.
Dear wife, I feel ashamed to say that I can't bear with you. . . . I have always been confused, mainly because I am not able to write a high-level opinion. I have read your article and feel that there are some questions, but I don't know how to express them. It has been hanging in my mind. I want to say it, but I can't. I scratch my head and scratch my head. I really don't know how to express it. I am also exploring myself. I have written in the first person for too long. When I started writing in the third person again, I felt that it was difficult to grasp the focus. Many people want to write, but they are afraid of distracting too much from the theme. I read your article from the beginning, wife, twice, and I think, first of all, the idea is very good. Loulan is a country full of mystery, and her disappearance is an eternal mystery in the history of archaeology. For this reason, I also wanted to write an article like this, especially about the female corpse unearthed in modern times. I bought many books and studied it for a while. Unfortunately, it was too complicated and I couldn't get a clue at the moment, so I gave up. My dear, if you can write, it will really make up for the regret, let's spread the flowers! ! Back to the topic, it seems to be a little off topic, haha, I read the article back and forth, and I feel that some of the themes in the article are loose, and I can't see what the central issue you want to express is. The whole setting is a bit petty. If you want to write a grand legend, then the scene can be more elaborate. For example, the background at that time is that in the Yuanshou Year of the Western Han Dynasty, Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty wanted to attack the Xiongnu. Loulan, a small country at that time, was in danger. Let's start with a little background introduction to give you a sense of grandeur. Please forgive me, wife, and don't hit me. I'm telling the truth. Shuishui is the protagonist, so you can focus more on this girl. However, what kind of character is this girl? I think I couldn't get a full feeling in your writing. The character creation is a bit scattered. You must Grasp the characteristics of this woman, indifference and open-mindedness, enchantment and casual attraction, must be in different occasions, and each occasion should have a fixed performance. You can be enchanting when dancing, and you can be indifferent when treating men, but you must pay attention to the same time period before and after. For example, this paragraph "Damn it! This ungrateful woman actually showed a manipulative smile to him. He Yanmu pushed Shuishui away like he was disgusted, and his sharp eyes were directed at Shuishui who looked indifferent. "What does manipulative mean? Why is he smiling one minute and turning indifferent the next? I think Shuishui's performance changes all the time, which can easily make people feel frivolous. You have to grasp the characteristics of this woman and not change at any time (ah, I don't know if my expression is correct, I always feel that I didn't hit the point, please forgive me, wife) Next comes the male protagonist. Well, there seem to be several male protagonists. The eldest prince has more scenes now. However, it is still the same sentence. I haven't seen anything worthy of attraction. The attractiveness of a character can be reflected in many small details of life. You can try it, but that masked guy is very loving. Hoho, I am indeed BT, and I believe in secrecy! As for the story, dear, you can be more nervous about the plot. There is the intrigue between Chanyu and King Loulan, and there is also the intrigue between the women in the harem. Plot, plot, is the soul of a story. My dear, you must pay attention to this the most important thing! For each chapter, you can have a small theme center, and you can have an attractive chapter at the end, which will make it more attractive to read. Maybe it's because your literary talent is tens of thousands of words, but you haven't developed it yet. According to what I read at the beginning, this story will be a legend, so I may be too anxious to make a conclusion, maybe because the story really hasn't been unfolded in detail yet, so it's hard to say more. I will only express my humble opinion. I always feel that the attraction of the story lies in a flesh-and-blood protagonist, plus flesh-and-blood supporting characters, and a story with an even skeleton. If these points are grasped well, it will be the best novel. I hope that my wife's articles will become better and better as she writes. You can try what I said, read more and learn more. I am also doing the same. Let's encourage each other! Forgive me for playing the piano randomly. If it's not right, don't mind my wife. I'm still exploring, maybe it's really wrong. Don't be angry and run away with the pot lid on your back
Haohaohao
Looking at it, it reminds me of many things Duomi, support you, no matter what time, I can only support you silently Your writing is your characteristic, it's really good Still the same sentence: work hard, you will be outstanding