I'm a Clerk in a Scientific World

I was originally very optimistic about this subject matter. I'm not saying that the author is not good at the subject matter. His writing style makes people feel very awkward. It means that it is a first-person perspective, but it doesn't quite look like a first-person perspective. There is no sense of immersion like the first point of view. You say it is a third point of view, but it also has a first point of view. The situation is very strange. There is no way to insert it into the novel, and there is no way for people to look at it and feel that, well, they can enter the future story scenes like the protagonist. It's a very strange situation, that is, you can't immerse yourself in reading this novel. If it's a third-person perspective novel, I've actually read a lot of it, and I can relate to it. I'm the kind of person who can easily relate to novels, but I still feel a strong sense of alienation, as if I'm reading other people's memories or diaries. In short, there is a strong feeling of exclusion. There won't be that sense of immersion. Sorry, I can't watch it. But I really want to describe my state of mind while reading that novel. There's no malicious intent, don't comment if you don't like it.

Why is no one commenting? At least it's interesting to watch. There are some problems with the layout of the article. I should add punctuation. At least I should use quotation marks when speaking. Moreover, a lot of content is repeated in this chapter.