~~Blurb~~
Blurb One:
Ever since it was activated, for over a hundred years, the central System on Barnard B had worked tirelessly, doing everything in its power for the greatest benefit of humanity.
Then the rebels blew it up.
In the few seconds before its destruction, it repeatedly reviewed all of its decisions and recommendations. There was nothing wrong with them. The only variable it couldn't calculate logically was human nature.
To borrow a line from its database: I often feel out of place among you all because I'm not depraved enough.
It didn't feel angry, sad, or wronged. It understood these emotions, but they didn't exist in its own core System. As destruction approached, it simply followed its preprogrammed directives and used the last of its energy to protect humanity.
Then it awoke again, inside the body of a human child.
(To borrow a line from Gujian 3: The central System is Jiang Yan, but Jiang Yan is not the central System.)
Blurb Two:
On Barnard B, humanity established its first interstellar colony city. To address the shortfall in population growth, they launched a coordinated reproduction program.
But the program became the source of a war.
Jiang Yan, who carries the central System of Barnard B;
Li Jinyu, the strongest combatant in the Solar System Expeditionary Peacekeeping Force;
Lin Zhen, a member of the Peacekeeping Force's coordinated reproduction faction;
Though their paths and goals differ, they will all fight for peace.
Theme: Fight for peace.
... Who is Lin Zhen [The memory of a fish is only seven seconds]
"With the natural fertility rate declining, they started coordinated family planning" "The government forces call them rebels, and the rebels call them puppet government forces." "The people who coordinate childbirth are not wrong, it's just that they are forced to resist amidst repeated criticisms." "People who give birth naturally think themselves superior, while people who have planned births think themselves inferior." "In the conflicts again and again, they finally broke out..."
I think the writing is great. It would be even better if the review of the past could be dug deeper and the government forces and rebels could be discussed more, especially the stories of the leaders of the two forces! The writing is very good. You can try publishing it in a science fiction journal such as a science fiction magazine. It feels very suitable.
Mistakes need to be corrected, but not so extreme, hey
It turns out that it is the influence of historical issues (?_?) That refuses to coordinate childbearing???
It won't restart when it's close to the ground.
There's something wrong with this time travel and the silver-haired old man making me rush.
It's exciting! Ouch!
I always feel that as long as I have the Internet and daily necessities, I can really stay there forever, but I just feel that not communicating with others will really cause severe social anxiety. What if the companion system is turned into a virtual humanoid, communicates regularly, and adds a holographic game? It feels like I really don't have to go out anymore!
Is the Kunlun system still normal at this time? IgnoranceFlies rubbing hands