After Streaming, I Made My Fake Romance with the Zerg General Real

A reflection that can be missed if you pass by Subjective and medium rare. Intellectually I know that I shouldn't write this, but after all, this is my first article. I really want to grow, and maybe friends who have doubts will want an answer, so I wrote it anyway~ Feel free to skip~ At my current level, I have two biggest problems. One is that the plot line is lame, and the other is that the protagonist is not the pioneer of new history. When I made the outline, I thought that my focus was on the emotional line between the protagonists. During the journey of their acquaintance and love, I devoted myself to adding events to make the process look less mundane, but I ignored the role of the special world background itself. Regarding the world background of this article, the most controversial issue is the issue of equal rights between men and women. The most logical setting should be that the protagonist, as an outsider, becomes the savior, breaks the rules, and forcefully introduces new rules to make both parties equal. But in fact, in my setting, the biggest problem is not the antagonism between men and women, but the delicate balance between aristocrats, royal families and common people. The biggest villain is the aristocrat who uses historical reasons to instigate male and female antagonism to satisfy his own interests and wants power, wealth and sex, rather than a conflict between men and women simply due to the loss of interests. The real role of the protagonist is to help the royal family and serve as an opportunity to bankrupt the villain's noble conspiracy - the ending is written here. The reason why I say this article is a plot line lame is because in this ending, the protagonists have fallen in love with each other and trust each other, and their relationship has reached its best state. Regarding my original intention of writing a love story, I thought this could be the ending, but in fact it cannot. In my mind, the protagonist is a passer-by in this world. He only stays because of CP. He hopes that the world will get better, but he does not have that much desire to save the world with his own hands - so I actually do not think this is an equal rights article. Although it does cover this issue one-sidedly, both the competition for power in the above background and the needs of the protagonist are very different from the concept of equal rights. Therefore, although the royal family conflicts with the protagonist, their needs are not actually opposing. From the perspective of the protagonist, the royal family does want to create a better environment, which has satisfied his basic sense of responsibility for the world; for the royal family, the two protagonists are huge hidden dangers, but the protagonist chose to stay away from the dispute and clearly expressed his disdain for the benefits they expected. Considering the power of both parties, the royal family also chose to maintain restraint and vigilance, rather than deliberately looking for trouble. So for the ending, in my mind, the couple of gods and goddesses choose the Peach Blossom Land to start a happy life, and although the royal family has its own calculations and will be wary of threats, it will indeed make the insect star slowly get better, and it will also be a good choice for the continued development of the insect star. Therefore, this article is a part of history, not the final end. It is in the middle and late stages of history. ——It's not that I can't write, but I obviously didn't write it well. From my current reflection point of view, my preparation for the ending is far from enough. People will find it unacceptable because I did not create this demand in the early stage and did not reveal this option. What everyone wants to see is the protagonist becoming a savior and defeating the evil nobles and royal forces, rather than the protagonist simply becoming an envied passerby in the world. He is free and happy, but he is not a successful protagonist. The story shouldn't stop here, because it's not over yet. The protagonist should not just be a witness to a history, but the creator of a new history. But if I then start writing about the battle of wits and courage between the protagonist and the royal family, it will run counter to my original intention. So in the final analysis, I did not do enough foreshadowing and did not clarify the real needs of the characters. Therefore, the needs of the protagonist are different from the needs of the readers, so I am dissatisfied with the ending. And there is not enough explanation of the ending of the insect star people, causing readers who are looking forward to this part to feel frustrated. The only thing I have done is write out the emotional line that I originally wanted to express, but for this story that already exists as text, this is not enough. The above is my reflection on my outline setting... Although this article is very immature, it really gave me more knowledge and perspective on the preparations I should make when writing an article, and the dimensions that a story should express. All in all, I am very grateful to those who have raised questions about this article, and to those who are willing to express that they like this article. Thank you for watching! Refill! I will work hard to make up for my shortcomings and hope to present more mature works in the future! Thank you all~ See you soon~~

Not bad. I just felt like something was missing after reading it... I felt like I was disconnected. What did I see before? Let me talk about my feelings. The worst part of the whole text is the introduction. I really hesitated for a long time before clicking in after reading the introduction (because the Zerg novel is my favorite subject). When I read the introduction, I almost thought it was another silly and sweet redemption novel from another world. To be honest, I like the world where the male is superior and the female is inferior, but I really have it. I'm a little tired of the fixed redemption model of the Zerg novels - it's nothing more than the idea of traveling through time and insisting on a male-female system, and must be interested in strong men, and fall in love with Shou at first sight, and then treat Shou a little better, and be yelled by a group of insects, so sweet and envious, ahhh, Shou is crazy and moved by the crazy low self-esteem in his heart. This kind of writing is good, I actually like it, but the writing style... (Wry smile) So when I first read the introduction, I was really afraid that this kind of writing was very boring. The biggest problem with this introduction is that the selected clips do not reflect the most prominent character at all, and the "mud puppet" used I feel that I will be confused when I first come into contact with it (you will know what it is talking about after reading the text, but it is a bit sudden just by looking at the clip). The "hot face and cold heart" character that attracts me the most is not reflected (although I feel that this attribute is not particularly obvious in the original text). Repaying gratitude, sensibility and rationality coexist, and the further you go, the closer it feels to being silly and sweet (no derogatory meaning). I don't understand where this "cold heart" lies. Maybe it would be better to use "slow". Then let me talk about my sense of fragmentation. In the first half of the article, I felt that I was well-organized and smart in doing things, but in the end, I felt that my IQ was not enough. I can understand that this is a professional mismatch; but the plot line is also the same. Most of the first half is about live variety shows and interaction with netizens. I was still Guessing who will be eliminated soon turns into a family power struggle. Although there is a lot of foreshadowing, the change is not blunt, but if the subject changes significantly, it is recommended to write a longer length, otherwise it will appear. One hour ago, I read that he was still playing in the mud, and an hour later they were bombing other people's homes. There will really be some fragmentation. In fact, this article is really a novel Zerg equality article. I have read a lot of Zerg articles, and most of them are in a world where males are superior to females. The protagonist is female insects who have equal rights. However, this article is based on the very contradictory social phenomenon that female insects have a high degree of disgust towards male insects, and some males still have bad behaviors. It is an article about equal rights for male insects. In the end, Shou is not just a man of low self-esteem, and in the setting, although he hates male insects, he has a sense of justice and compassion for the weak, which makes me feel like he is a very gentleman; Gong does not have an inexplicable redemption mentality of the Holy Father, but repays kindness, seeks advantages and avoids disadvantages. It's really rare to see a normal couple's daily life in Zerg novels. Although I didn't come here just for this, I was indeed healed by the sweetness of the early interactions. Later, I felt that the "hot-faced and cold-hearted" persona collapsed, so I couldn't stand it anymore. It still feels a bit pity

The unique Zerg novel, in the sweet love, explains the background, not focusing on males, but on achieving equal coexistence between males and females through efforts. It just kind of ended and there was something missing from the daily life between them. Maybe the sweet daily life between the young couple and getting along with the little Zaizai will make them fall in love even more with more of this episode.

Hiss, I didn't see Mute's round belly. I'm sorry (hiss, hiss. Jpg)

... Now I probably have a lot of disgust towards the Insect King and Yue up up up But there probably won't be any bad ending for them, after all, the power is there, and I don't seem to see any similar hints in the article. In short, I'm just numb. Chasing articles is like opening a blind box

Finished spreading flowers! Work until sunrise the next day, right?

The ending is a bit of an outline! Not enough. Not enough. Not enough. Not enough.

Let's explain it in depth. Look at the sunrise. It's very early, right? You got up really early? If the anchor refuses to lie down, why not sleep? Why don't you sleep? Ahem, the big rose bed is out. Let's watch the sunrise in three days together, right??

The ending feels anticlimactic, and the ending feels really poorly written.

My mind is full after seeing this???