Seeking advance readers for Drowning Swim, blurb at the end
Blurb:
No one in the unit isn't afraid of Wen Shichuan.
Everyone knows he's cold-blooded and ruthless, exceptionally capable, and so calm he hardly seems human.
Yet this seemingly distant man has the most down-to-earth bad luck.
He gets hit by cars while walking, gets slashed with knives on cases, has misfired guns pointed right at him, and has even ended up in the hospital after choking on water...
He doesn't care at all, and has never even complained.
Then Chen Zhi appears.
He gradually realizes that whenever he gets slashed by a knife, Chen Zhi has just dodged a knife attack. Whenever he gets hit by a car, Chen Zhi has just avoided an accident.
In all those moments when she counts herself lucky, he unknowingly takes on the pain that should have fallen on her.
All the signs point to this being no coincidence. For her safety, Wen Shichuan keeps a close eye on Chen Zhi, and she naturally becomes his human accessory.
As they spend more and more time together and their hearts draw closer, more and more of their past gradually comes to light.
None of it has happened without reason.
tips:
^1v1 / both each other's first / HE
^The story revolves around several cases and includes a fair amount of criminal investigation. Many plot holes and plenty of invented details. The romance is the focus, so please don't nitpick.
Advance readers wanted:
Drowning Swim blurb
Chen Yao first met Yang Jing in a bar.
She was mixing drinks behind the counter, with a pack of Marlboros beside her.
He reached out for one. "Can I have a cigarette?"
She gave a soft laugh, put the cigarettes away, and pushed a glass of honey water toward him.
"What's a kid like you doing smoking?"
He said nothing. Alcohol had flushed his face a faint red. His Adam's apple protruded slightly, and the tendons in his neck traced down to his collarbone, firm and sexy.
"Are you in college nearby?"
She took out a cigarette and lit it. Playfully, she blew smoke in his face. "You're this red. You can't hold your liquor."
"Mm." His eyes were deep-set and pitch-black, but just then, his gaze at her was unfocused.
Yang Jing asked, "Are you going back to your dorm tonight?"
"It's too late," he said. "I can't get back."
She smiled again and leaned toward him, passing the smoke in her mouth into his. They shared a breath. Her bewitching voice drifted lightly by his ear. "Then come back to my place."
The reflected light in her eyes outlined his image. He couldn't read any desire in her gaze, yet he felt as though he was already burning.
Theme: Love can break fate
This is to protect her. How could she not gain the trust of the male protagonist? What kind of brain circuit is this?
This heroine is a bit strange, you don't have the ability to protect yourself, why do you expect the hero to take you to the scene??? The previous description is also somewhat contradictory. I haven't seen anything about the heroine's character or attractiveness so far.
Is the heroine really a chief physician who has been practicing for several years? Why are you so weak when you meet the male protagonist? She didn't owe anyone to begin with, it was enough to feel a little surprised and indebted in her heart. I also couldn't understand her words and tears when she wrongfully accused Zhou Cong. She didn't look like a director who had been struggling in the workplace for several years. The design of the female supporting characters is a bit retarded, but the male supporting characters in a few cases, such as Guo, are very attractive. It would be nice if they could be more in-depth.
The male protagonist is so weird. He acts like he likes the female protagonist, but at the same time he keeps tossing her, fearing that she might be in danger and cause harm to him? Then wouldn't it be safer to let the heroine sleep at home while arresting the criminal than to go to the scene? After all, the heroine is just a psychiatrist
As a good friend, does this good friend's fiancé have a problem and not tell her?
"Most of the differences between men have to do with women." What... This means that when men commit crimes, they blame women. If there are no women, then there are no women???? I really... Forget it...
"It turned out that this story was changed" is a big bug for the author ~ Since!
Innocence is good. Chastity is the best dowry for a man.
This interrogation... The male protagonist was completely led away by the nose, right?
Although, as a friend, should the heroine remind her friend when she knows that Qi Yun has a big problem? After all, even if she didn't know whether he had committed a crime at the time, she still knew that he was a morally corrupt person?