
Shadow of the Blood Prison (Main Pairing: Sasuke/Naruto)
血狱魅影(主佐鸣)
- Status
- Unknown
- Length
- 287k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 13y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
73Chapters
894Favorites
8Nutrient gifts
6.3kClicks per chapter
651Comments
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Reader comments 42
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Author, if you say that the article you wrote has touched upon some thunderous points, I can only tell you clearly. Many readers don't like a lot of CPs in a novel. Since it's a Sasuke article, it should be about Sasuke and Naruto, and there shouldn't be other CPs. If the author has already prepared to write an article with sub-CPs, you should mark the CPs instead of just writing them down. Readers who have never read this novel will definitely read it when they see that there are so many chapters. They think it is Zuo Ming's article and there are so many chapters. They will think that this novel is very interesting and they will keep reading it. However, you will gradually find that it is not a pure Sauna article, and some readers will no longer have the patience to read it. The remaining readers will say in their hearts: they have read so much, let's just finish it in one go. In fact, when I saw it later, not many readers were paying attention to the plot. They all wanted to finish it early and find other books to read. Therefore, I suggest that if the author still writes, please don't cheat. If you want to cheat, don't write it in the first place. Readers quickly hate authors who give up halfway. The author shouldn't say that I, a reader, don't understand how hard it is for the author to write articles. I can tell the author that I am also an article writer. I have written many more articles than you. None of the articles I have written has failed, whether it is a novel or a short story. I think that the author exists for the readers, so I ask the author to rewrite the article and take it seriously. Writing an article is not just for fun. It must be finished whether anyone reads it or not. I went too far, and I apologize. When the author wrote about Zuo Ming, he actually wrote it well and expressed his emotions well. The author's writing style is also very good, and the level is just right for people to understand what is going on at a glance, but the morphemes are not obvious, and the aesthetics and simplicity are integrated into one. Many words are also very good, but I think the author can expand a little more on the beauty of sentences and word choice. Well, just don't give up halfway.
Please continue to update. I really like your article?
Author, your article is very good, the plot is wonderful, the emotions are expressed beautifully and truly, and the writing style is quite artistic. I like it very much. But I can't comment on your personality. You kept writing in "What the Author Says": "Believe me, I didn't give up!!!" I was also willing to believe it, but the reality is cruel. You have the talent to be a writer, but you cannot become a writer. I have already guessed your giving up from your long absence, but I still have hope. What can I say... At least you came and explained it, and at least took some responsibility. If you didn't come, you were a fool for running away! Sorry, I tried my best to be polite, but I still feel very dissatisfied. A good article is abandoned like this, and a good person is reduced to such a waste! Your words speak to my heart. The reason "no one writes book reviews" is so false that I can't stand it! If you give it up, you give it up. Don't you know how to do it even if you just say it? ! Don't you think about it, is it because your writing is so good that people are too absorbed in reading it to write a review? Believe it or not, this is how I am! Narcissism is better than inferiority, and facing it is better than escaping! If you can't write it down, don't write it! Isn't what you said in the article very good? ! How heartbroken! If I had known this, I would have written under each chapter "Long live the author, the writing is so good!" These are the words you want to hear, so that you can stick with it for a while - with your temperament, you won't stick to it for long anyway. That's all I want to say. Just like the first two floors, just read it if you come back. It doesn't matter if you're not here. Just hope. By the way, I would like to remind all book friends to be cautious when writing articles. If you are afraid of giving up, don't write! As long as you have the heart of an author and a general writing style, you can gain the love and success of countless book readers! To put it simply, it means being thick-skinned! ! !
Author, as the person downstairs said, your writing style is really good, which is a good talent. But it's a pity that you don't have the heart that an author should have, and you don't have a strong heart. An article is not just about reading book reviews to see how many people are reading it. Book reviews are just for people to give you some opinions. If everyone only read book reviews to know how many people are reading this article, then there would be tens of thousands of book reviews here. After all, some readers just want to be invisible but supportive readers. Although it has been a long time since you stopped writing, I still want to write these words. I just hope that you will come back one day and read these words and continue writing to complete this good article. I apologize if what I wrote today makes you feel unhappy or in a bad mood. In addition, I am also an author myself, so I can understand your mood, but there are many things that need to be viewed from another perspective. So I hope you won't give up on this article just because of something.
I beg you to come back and update the article [biting the handkerchief][biting the handkerchief][biting the handkerchief]
Dear author, would you like to come back for more updates? I really want to read the plot behind it. I really like your writing [biting handkerchief]
Dad, I want to see, are you willing to come back?
Come on! I love this article
I like this article very much and want to see their ending
Come on ↖(^ω^)↗