The story of the Tokyo Metropolitan Police Department's Mobile Unit ace and a female superintendent from the Tokyo Metropolitan Police Department
I don't think this is very well written, so I'm planning to make major revisions. Please bear with me.
1. This is my first anime fanfic. The characters being out of character and the plot being illogical are to be expected.
3. I'm very sensitive and won't accept any criticism. If you don't like it, click the top left and leave. Thanks.
4. I believe every reader has their own idea of Matsuda. My version of Matsuda is based on how I imagine the Matsuda who was a hostage in the 12-million-hostage case. If you think he's out of character, that's normal. Every writer's Matsuda is different. But I can't accept certain portrayals of him, like the ones in SR or XLC. That's not Matsuda. There are others, too.
A warning: I've already warned you. If you read this and then insult me somewhere else, and I find out, I won't be nice about it.
1. Because the old geezer used Matsuda to make Hagiwara Chihaya look good, ruining Matsuda's characterization, I really dislike Hagiwara Chihaya. If you like this character, think twice before reading!
2. Rei and Hiromitsu both like a heroine in a choose-your-love-interest setup. If you don't like that, don't read.
3. Let me make this clear: the timeline in this story is a mess!!!!!! The Detective Conan original story is pretty muddled too. A lot of things that happened in Conan's first year will show up in this story. As for when Conan appears, I'm not hiding anything from you: he's not in the main story, only Shinichi Kudo is. He'll appear in the bonus chapters, so read the author's notes carefully.
4. I really dislike certain heroines in Detective Conan choose-your-love-interest stories. That sort of heroine appears in my story too, so if you like them, don't read this!
5. If you feel what I've written doesn't match your expectations, stop reading. If you read it and then insult me, don't blame me for not being nice. I just love Mazda and write this out of passion!
The Matsuda in the 12-million-hostage case is the coolest and best man in Detective Conan. I won't accept any arguments!!
Theme: For Jinpei Matsuda
I feel the same way, and I don't like stock buying articles. Each character is unique, so why should you try to rob someone?
I'm really convinced. Some of my colleagues are wondering, are you sick?!! Why does Matsuda always sprint in the opposite direction, and some people say that he is a scumbag. Obviously the original work is not like this. Can you respect the original work when writing fan fiction? If it is because the fan fiction hates the original work, Mazda must be credited to you, and why, why Mazda Tatsu always borrows Kenji Hagihara's plate to stay with Kenji Hagihara's girlfriend. Mazda is not the kind of person who steals his brothers' women. I suggest you go to the hospital and see why. Why can't you write a good wife for Mazda? Why!!!!!
I agree, I don't like buying stocks either. I read an article before and I always thought I would be with Matsuda until CP decided on something else. I bought three-quarters of that article, and then I felt like I was traumatized. . . . . . . So I no longer want to read stock buying articles.
In fact, I don't think the fan Matsuda is OOC as long as it doesn't deviate from his basic character. The original novel and the new version of Matsuda have some aspects of OOC. He is a policeman. He cannot forget his police mission and cannot give up this profession. He says he hates it, but he respects the job in his heart. If you write that he gave up police work because the protagonist or violated police principles, it would be OOC. Also, Matsuda is very smart. I think many books write about his intuitive system. I think it is quite good. He is like that. I am a straightforward and sensitive person. Because of his father's affairs when he was a child, Matsuda is very sensitive. When he met Hagihara Kenji, who was good to him, he became his most important partner. He cannot be an idiot. The original book said that he is an idiot because he is OOC. Don't let you fellow fans be led as well. Isn't it wrong? He immediately deduced that there was a bomb on the Ferris wheel and that the people at the second location, Rice Flower Hospital, had low emotional intelligence and were straight men. In fact, the original work was also OOC. Don't forget how Matsuda comforted Sato. How could he have low emotional intelligence? I admit that he is uninhibited and his venomous mouth is okay. I think as long as he deviates too much from his basic character, he can be Matsuda. Don't tell me about the new version of Matsuda who has a broken character. I only recognize the character of 12 million hostages. He can give people unlimited performance. I tried my best. I can't write his charm. It's my fault, but he is really charming in 12 million hostages!
It's such a shocking idiot and beauty. Why is this kind of persona so popular? A beautiful, strong and flirtatious sister should be the one.
Without Conan, this wouldn't be called Detective Conan, it would have to be called Police Jinping. But Jinpei is indeed much, much better than Takagi. As for Fangtani Rei, everyone has his own merits. Anyway, I am on Jinpei's side. I don't know why when writing a novel where the male protagonist is Zero, we have to single out our little Jinpei as a big scapegoat. Why, Jinpei is so good and handsome, when did he end up being the second male lead? He really has no vision!
In this part of Matsuda shouting like a prisoner, I actually feel that my reaction is wrong. If it were 12 million hostages, would Matsuda be calmer, smile mischievously, and face the prisoners with a serious face? Of course, it's my own imagination, that's how the original version was, and that's how I wrote it.
Some of them write Matsuda in big letters, which is really good. Some of them write Matsuda, and I just want to curse people. Is that Matsuda that you write? Matsuda gives you the impression that he is a straight man with a sharp tongue and an idiot. Have you seen 12 Million Hostages? The yy of some authors is just disgusting. Your protagonist has no charm at all, and some of them are not Neptune characters. As a result... Why do men like Mingke? Don't you know that your writing of Kenji Hagihara is greasy? Does Hagiwara Kenji give you the impression that he is a playboy who can drive? Be sick!!!
Well, I think based on Matsuda's personality, the criminal should be arrested here, because the heroine just has a sprained foot and is not in any other danger. But after looking at the table of contents, it seems that the author doesn't want the case to be solved in less than a chapter, haha
I don't understand a bit when I read this chapter Logically speaking, Matsuda would subdue the prisoner first, right? The prisoners kidnapped people and stabbed them with knives... And if the heroine directly says that that person is a suspect, Matsuda can also immediately understand and arrest the other party. Keep talking about that figure and then no next sentence...? No harm intended, but I really don't understand this chapter