Sequel: "A Few Things That Happened After I Became an Omega and Got Together with My Bro" [Proud, Straight-Ahead Alpha Turns into an Omega, Beloved Main Receiver]
Blurb:
Why, after thousands upon thousands of years of development in a world of magic, has nobody even invented an electric light?
A resident of Linhai City goes missing during a thunderstorm. With a town-building game System in hand, he struggles, though not too hard, to survive on the low-magic continent of Zelin alongside an elven toddler and a pair of half-orc brothers.
At first, he thinks he has transmigrated to medieval Europe. From the start, he finds a strange-looking baby, then takes in a pair of half-orc brothers. Only later does he discover that this is a fantastical world where pythons and snow wolves can turn into humans. Even more terrifying are the rampaging dragons of Grada Dragon Island.
The missing resident had planned to laze around, but he sees how miserable the commoners on this continent are. Aristocratic lords secretly form slave-catching squads to hunt down and sell commoners everywhere. The king is greedy and wantonly murderous, while the church ruthlessly exploits the people. Ordinary folk can barely survive.
On this unbearably oppressive otherworldly continent, the missing resident, with his divine little homestead in hand, can no longer stand by. Together with the companions he raised, he works to push their serfdom into modern civilization. Whatever their status or race, everyone can live happily on the new continent of Zelin.
The dragons, beastfolk, elves, dwarves, and demons all shed their old labels. Their wars are no longer earth-shaking, bloody hand-to-hand battles. Instead, their battlegrounds move to online games, where they form teams and compete against other races in arm wrestling.
Dragons are keen on taking part in eating contests, where they are always the champions.
Elves become celebrities, dwarves become comedians, and the monsters of the Far North become child stars known to every household.
This is an age of dwindling magic. As the magical elements on the continent of Zelin are used up, mages become an exceptionally rare sight, and fewer and fewer races have both magical talent and the ability to use magic. Their ultimate Big Boss, the Pope, has always wanted to bring back the high-magic world of thousands of years ago.
Missing resident: Dream on! After thousands of years, you’re still this poor and benighted. Get moving and drag yourselves into modern civilization!
The evil slave-catching squads, exploitative lords, murderous and greedy king, and the Pope, who wants to destroy the whole continent, are all going to be rounded up and put to work so they can reflect on their actions.
For the first half of the story, the missing resident is busy collecting little ones. First, he needs to build an ultra-luxurious team made up of all kinds of races.
He picks them up as he goes, thinking he’s collected a whole kindergarten. Only later does he realize he’s actually collected a zoo: little wolf cubs, little kittens, little eaglets...
There are even little stone babies. What in the world are these?!
He cries out inside: ...Without the little homestead, I really couldn’t feed all these babies and all these mouths.
More than a hundred years later, several gods gradually awaken as the magical elements on the continent of Zelin recover. The moment they wake up, they find humans flying all over the sky without using magic. Their brains nearly short-circuit.
The little homestead was inspired by a town-building game I played before. I borrowed a few of its settings, but most of the story is original. The homestead is a single-player version at first. After it goes online later, everything is original.
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[Currently filling in the story. I sincerely apologize to everyone. I’m very sorry.]
Sequel: "A Few Things That Happened After I Became an Omega and Got Together with My Bro"
Blurb: [Beloved Main Receiver, Strong Leads, The Receiver Is a Cockroach Who Just Won’t Die]
After becoming an Omega, his friendship with his childhood friend goes off the rails.
What should he do when his powerful childhood friend covets his genes?
Marshal Qin Fang is a top-tier Alpha who once wiped out an imperial fleet single-handedly. His abilities are extraordinary and his combat skills unrivaled, earning him a reputation as a one-man-army legend and the overlord of the universe.
Everyone covets the powerful genes of the Qin family, yearning for the strength of Qin Fang’s bloodline in their own descendants.
And yet, for hundreds of years, not one Omega has ever emerged from the Qin family.
Until one day, Qin Lu...
A descendant of the Qin family who was originally an Alpha, he too was a top-tier Alpha, a one-man-army legend with unparalleled combat power. Then, all of a sudden, he became an Omega...
After class, following his mecha combat training, Qin Lu slept for twenty years. When he woke up, he found that the whole world had changed!
His childhood friend Lei Ge had become a federal lieutenant general, in command of the Sunburst Legion;
His romantic rival Chu Ce had become a federal lieutenant general, in command of the Cold Moon Legion;
His nemesis Ao Ze'en Kaliaosi had become a federal lieutenant general, in command of the Morning Star Legion;
And Qin Lu, once the shining star of military school...
was still the same goofy boy he had been back then;
What made it even stranger was that he had gone from a strong, handsome Alpha to a delicate, beautiful Omega;
With his powerful genes, he instantly became an object of desire for the children of military families. Everyone wanted him.
To make matters worse, a bastard had stolen his position as heir;
And what was infuriating was that this bastard was someone he had brought home himself!
After waking up, he had fallen from being the apple of everyone’s eye to a poor soul with nowhere to go. Not only had he lost twelve years of his memories, he was also facing the prospect of being married off by that ungrateful brat;
To escape being married off, uncover the truth behind his forced hibernation, and find out who had sabotaged him, turning him from a promising Alpha with a bright future into an Omega,
he thought first of all to ask his childhood friend Lei Ge for help;
But would the boy who had skipped class and gotten into fights with him back then, now a powerful federal lieutenant general, still remember a friend from more than twenty years ago?
When he finally managed to see Lei Ge, his good buddy from childhood cruelly sent him back to that ungrateful Qin Yufeng, telling him to wait until he could marry into the Lei family!
With nowhere else to turn, he never expected Chu Ce, the romantic rival he had hated with a passion back in the day, to come to his aid;
But just as he was deeply moved, this smiling fox of a man tried to take advantage of him...
After escaping from his romantic rival, he ran straight into his nemesis, Ao Ze'en Kaliaosi. Face-to-face with the son of his cold, arrogant enemy from back then, his lifelong foe, he saw that the man was just as cold as ever. In the throes of his heat, the first thing he said was: "Ao Ze'en, give me a temporary mark, now!"
Theme: Love and good food are both too precious to be neglected.
I feel like the protagonist here is not very smart. Children know not to eat food given by strangers, let alone an adult. In a strange place like this, shouldn't everyone be more vigilant under normal circumstances?
Knowing that the other person has malicious intentions, you actually go home with the other person and eat the other person's food [roll eyes] [roll eyes] [roll eyes]
? The protagonist is so naive that he feels like he can be dragged away if he is given a candy while walking. Those who are not familiar with the place dare to eat randomly. I have decided that I will sell health care products to him in the future.
This is the first time I met the protagonist who only appeared in Chapter 3. The two cub stories are a bit homogeneous, I mean the woman who was domestically abused and the mercy of the maid (especially the maid's repetitive psychological and action descriptions are a bit too much). I'm actually a bit of a protagonist addict. I always thought that the protagonist was going to appear in the next second, so I patiently watched it. But it turned out that I came back after the third chapter, and the preparation was a bit long.
Is the protagonist so sure that the parents lost their child? Don't you consider the possibility of human traffickers? Didn't he discover that the cloth the elf was wrapped in was not ordinary? It is also fireproof. Who would do this for an abandoned child? It would be too hasty to directly conclude that the parents lost the child without first determining whether there are other possibilities. For the development of the plot, there is no need to do this.
The fabric is fireproof, so how could it be lost if we can't afford it?
It was only after I lost it for so long that I realized it was still precious. Even the cheapest private kindergartens know how to nod their heads every day. And depending on the situation, elves also eat three meals a day normally, not because their concept of long life span is different from others. I really recommend fixing this bug. At least find some excuse for their slow reaction, even if it describes how special this child's family is.
It's been several days and now they realize it's missing. It's a baby, not a teenager. Even if the parents are away, someone must take care of it, and then they just found out? Is this the elf civilization that human civilization dares not invade? Author, describing an image does not just rely on adjectives, their behavior must match their description. If their subsequent response methods are not decisive and severe enough, the logical flaws of this article will be too great, and the article must be overhauled.
Can we be a little more logical, if you're going to write about a sleazy little bastard who, on a whim, stole a toddler and walked that far without being discovered. Just don't write that human society respects the elves' territory. This kind of security measures has long been exposed to the sieve.
The author's writing is still very good, but the layout looks a bit uncomfortable. In short, keep going!