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After reading it, I'll leave you a review with more than enough subjectivity but not enough objectivity~ This article mainly has two settings, one is traveling through the book, and the other is that the male protagonist can hear the female protagonist's voice. I haven't read many books about time-traveling, because I actually don't like the protagonist who first travels to the book, and then spends a lot of pen and ink to write about their feelings, which makes me feel embarrassed and boring. Really, every time I see this, I don't want to read anymore... But this one is okay. I think the heroine has adapted to the situation of time-traveling relatively quickly. I have always felt that if two people are destined to be a couple, then they will treat others differently from the moment they meet, even if they fall in love over time. So they don't regard each other as friends, because each other is always the special one, and they can't be friends. From Qin San's point of view, he fell in love with Nan Zhiyi at first sight, but there is a small detail. Qin San didn't look at Nan Zhiyi in a different light just because she was beautiful and had a good temperament. He first heard Nan Zhiyi's inner thoughts and then went to see this girl. Like this, I think this point is very important to me. Why he fell in love with Nan Zhiyi at first sight is because there is a bug between them and because they are involved. This setting will not make me feel that Qin San is casual. I really love this detail. From Nan Zhiyi's point of view, she has been in love with Qin San for a long time, but during the process of falling in love, I feel that she never regarded Qin San as a friend. They are slightly acquainted strangers - ambiguous objects - boyfriend and girlfriend. Because they are always special to each other, the atmosphere between them is always different from that of friends. Nan Zhiyi is the first female protagonist I have seen who is so obviously socially anxious. She is both socially terrified and carefree, which I think is quite interesting. She is young, so her thoughts and personality are childish. She is kind, good to her friends, and a little silly. But what she thought from the beginning was that I should try to make as few big moves as possible. I can't ruin the direction of the book, or even ruin the original author's hard work, so she completed the script well and has been trying her best to follow the original author's wishes, so she has the caution and wisdom of an adult. I still like this image very much. Qin San, "white and black" but not black. In fact, I have always felt that those white and black characters are forced. No one wants to express his kindness and have a dark heart. So Qin San was very lucky that he met Nan Zhiyi and had a brother who always stayed with him, even though his childhood was so unfortunate, even if there was a lack of family ties. We have always used light to describe salvation, which is a bit corny, but the first thing that comes to mind when we describe salvation is light, so Nan Zhi means light, moonlight, sacred and gentle. Qin San finally waited for his moonlight, so everything is worth it. Qin San's brothers are the stars, not very bright, but looking at peace of mind, with them, Qin San will not always be in the darkness. One more thing, Nan Zhiyi's good friend Shang Qi, I really like her, "short hair with smooth ears but a bunch of stupid hair", "height of 172", "cute girl with long legs" and "neutral outfit", I love her from name to appearance to personality. I'm looking forward to her story with Chu Hansheng~ Authors have been saying that they are not good at writing. In fact, the first articles of famous authors are not very good. There is a big gap between their original level and their current level, so there is no need to ask their first article to be so perfect. Moreover, many people actually have the idea of writing a novel, but very few can write it completely. The author who can write a complete article is already very, very good. Don't belittle yourself, you are already great~ Let's just write this much first, thank you Nan Zhiyi, thank Qin San, and thank the author. See you in the next article.

I really hate people who hide things. Is there anything that I, the reader, can't read? Ah! (Cry TT)

The literary talent is not good, and I can't say anything profound, but one sister's comment is really good, and it especially poked me. The heroine is not arrogant and self-righteous because of time travel, and her character is simple and not stupid. Staying away from the male and female protagonists of the original book is actually the normal psychology of us ordinary people. The first reaction of normal people when reading books is never to get involved. Moreover, there were no brainless male and female supporting roles, nor did the male protagonist's top family members appear too much. The ordinary life of just two people is really warm.

Maybe it's because of the name "Nan Zhiyi" that I felt a literary style from the beginning, as if I was back in middle school when I read magazines and bought novels.

Sure enough, when it comes to falling in love, watching other people talk is more interesting.

Well. . . Why do you have to add bl to bg?

Why is the male protagonist called Qin Sansha? This name is so embarrassing.

The subject matter is good but the writing is lacking. Keep up the good work

There are a dozen male protagonists in a group, they look so worthless

This layer of window paper is about to be turned into a hornet's nest by the male protagonist.