Yan Guinan is a wealthy Omega who loves gaming and has no interest in fighting his stepmother for the family fortune. But his young stepmother and half-brother insist on making trouble every day, causing his father to grow more and more distant from him. After one argument, the usually well-behaved boy finally decides to live the way he wants, just like his older brother, who left home years ago.
Theme: Passionate esports
Also, let me ask, does Yan Jing refer to Yan Guinan? After a quick glance, it seems that this is not mentioned.
A small personal suggestion: divide it into paragraphs a little more. Too many words in each paragraph will cause visual fatigue. When characters speak, they don't just use their names as prefixes, but add appropriate actions and expressions. For example: Mr. Li looked at the direction indicated by the road sign and was confused, and asked Xiao Zhang: "Didn't you say go straight? Why does the road sign say that you need to turn left to get to the Central Hospital?" I'm not very good at writing either, this is just my personal opinion. Come on! If you work hard, you will definitely write a good article!