When you touch your chin, when you see Michelle, you will think of Wangwang Snow Cake
So, at the beginning, I was embarrassed, actually holding the "Moonlight Treasure Box"
I'm looking for trouble, but I can't find it. I just feel that the sentences are occasionally a bit wordy and repetitive, but the rest is fine! ~Spread flowers~
Traveled through...
The jasper flute is also a big favorite of mine.
Xiaoxiao (<--You can ignore this) I'm coming~
Dear, you are very serious. You have to work hard to collect information in order to write about people from the Song Dynasty. Worth learning. Haha
Although I'm not very fond of time travel, the author's writing is still very cute. I think you must be a kawaii girl~
Come on~
The description of two people who traveled through the Song Dynasty is very detailed. . .
The character's personality is immediately revealed~~
Hmm~~This is a good beginning~~ It gives people a sense of time travel
Very attractive
It looks good, I'll save it first.
Can some descriptions be as concise as the following?
That person actually wore night clothes in an exaggerated manner, and even had a saber on his waist that matched the suit.
Directly write about the person wearing night clothes and wearing a knife or something on his waist.
When you touch your chin, when you see Michelle, you will think of Wangwang Snow Cake
So, at the beginning, I was embarrassed, actually holding the "Moonlight Treasure Box"
I'm looking for trouble, but I can't find it. I just feel that the sentences are occasionally a bit wordy and repetitive, but the rest is fine! ~Spread flowers~
Traveled through... The jasper flute is also a big favorite of mine.
Xiaoxiao (<--You can ignore this) I'm coming~
Dear, you are very serious. You have to work hard to collect information in order to write about people from the Song Dynasty. Worth learning. Haha Although I'm not very fond of time travel, the author's writing is still very cute. I think you must be a kawaii girl~ Come on~
The description of two people who traveled through the Song Dynasty is very detailed. . . The character's personality is immediately revealed~~
Hmm~~This is a good beginning~~ It gives people a sense of time travel Very attractive
It looks good, I'll save it first.
Can some descriptions be as concise as the following? That person actually wore night clothes in an exaggerated manner, and even had a saber on his waist that matched the suit. Directly write about the person wearing night clothes and wearing a knife or something on his waist.