After Returning to the Human World With the Female Zerg Who Wants to Kill Me

Since I stayed up all night to read this book, I still want to write some more of my opinions. I just wondered whether there was a hard-core mission of "chasing the husband in the crematorium" before writing this book, because the characters and plots in the book were too deliberately focused on this mission, and in the end it was a bit different. Let's talk about the main CP first. In the early stage of Attack 1, he is the kind of person who does his best to help female insects. Regarding the equal rights of men and women, even if he accidentally kills the female insect, he should not be indifferent to this issue. On the contrary, he has some empathy for it. Therefore, the first level of the main cp chasing husband crematorium - career conflict does not need to exist (the key point is this "can"). Attack 1 himself has the ability to understand and empathize with the female insect's situation, but the author intentionally (because it is illogical) blocked his "eyes" to see the world, causing the early attack 1 to look a bit stupid in the holy father, artificially creating the first layer of conflict; the second level is Shou 1 letting down Attack 1, and the early Suffer Even if 1 participates in equal rights between men and women because of his younger brother, it can be seen from the conflict between him and Shou 2 that Shou 1 is essentially a person who can rationally analyze problems, cherish personal happiness, and relatively does not value the cause of equal rights. Such a person will not be confused by power under the reasonable logic of life, let alone harm Gong 1 under the confusion of power, and ignore the harm Gong 1 suffered in prison. If we don't force the crematorium route, according to normal character logic, I personally think that Attack 1 chooses to stay, Shou 1 will bravely defend Attack 1 when Attack 1 is caught in prison, and finally the young couple chooses to leave the Zerg together and take their children to live on earth again. Then there is the deputy cp. Shou 2 in the early stage made me feel like a careerist and schemer. He suffered enough in his previous marriage, but he not only saw his own suffering, but he could also see the torture and harm of other females like him. This shows that he has great love in his heart. This is a very precious shining point hidden under his selfish, indifferent and ruthless mask. At the same time, Shou 2 is very disgusted with some of Xiong Zun's bad habits (such as the very unfair property division rights and the use of husband's surname), which shows that he is a very self-respecting, independent and thoughtful businessman. Why can't such a complex and fulfilling character be allowed to become the King of Insects, but in practice he constantly adjusts his once somewhat extreme thoughts, develops a great love for the Insect people, and truly writes equal rights into reality? Why must he become haggard, crazy, and yandere in a failed relationship, and then completely put himself under the yoke of Attack 2 after returning to modern times? This husband-chasing crematorium completely destroys the shining point of this character, and also eliminates the possibility of this book digging deeper. Judging from the previous content, he is very brave to write. He is able to write about the dark side of Zerg society (which is actually the potential dark side of current human society), and uses the collision and discussion of different people's opinions to develop a grand world view. If he can really write in this direction, this book will be amazing. As a result, after Gong 2 returned to Earth, their good relationship was broken up and he was forcibly tied to Shou 2. Later, Gong 2 completely became the biggest stumbling block for Shou 2 to complete his career, and even made Shou 2 collapse into a good wife and mother who gave birth to Gong 2's children. This is really boring. And it's quite sad and ironic. Or is it that the author himself lost in the end and felt that having children is also good. What career is not suitable for female insects?? In short, the main culprit of this book's confusing plot and character collapse is the forced "chasing of the husband to the crematorium". Is this routine really popular now? Do you have to write it? Even if these two pairs of cps are very unsuitable for this setting?? Finally, I hope that the more you write, the better (I only write this paragraph because I feel it is a pity. Some of the conjectures in the comments do not disrespect the original plot of the book, but only represent my personal views)

Finally finished reading. . . The following only represents my personal opinion, please correct me if I am wrong. . . >>>Let me talk about my journey first. I read it based on the synopsis at first, but it turned out that the content of the synopsis did not really appear 😂. It can even be said that the synopsis was just a smoke bomb 😂. When I reached 40%, I became a little impatient. I randomly selected a few main chapters and extra chapters to read. I felt that the plot was very depressing. I wanted to abandon the article many times, but I didn't think about it for long. I read it all, so I persisted and finished it. . . [Picking the brain] >> Next, let's talk about the plot. The plot of this article is divided into two parts. The first half is the equal rights line of the Zerg world (the protagonist travels through), and the second half is the daily line of the earth world (the protagonist's suffering + upgrade flow). >>The world view and character preparation of the first part are well written. It does not start the narrative from time-travel, but starts from the time when the two attacks (yes, this is a two-CP, four-protagonist article) have established a foothold in the Zerg. The past of the two attacks is interspersed in the middle. The story line is divided into a detective line (it tells the mystery of the murder of the female insect brother of the first one, and how the male insect villain who abused the female insect was beaten to death), and the plot line (the two attacks are like How to promote equal rights, and then equal rights failed, the harsh external environment became the trigger for the two attackers to travel back to the earth, this part of the twist is very exciting), the emotional line (the happiness of attacker 1 and Shou 1 made Shou 2 jealous, who caused the family breakdown. Shou 2 single-handedly promoted the family breakdown of Attack 1 and Shou 1, which led to Attack 1 and Attack 2 returning to Earth more determinedly. Shou 2, you are actually the biggest villain, right? 😂) >>The second part is the earth line. After discovering that Liang Gong had left, Liang Shou decided to return to Earth to find Liang Gong. Shou 1 did it because of love, Shou 2 wanted to love and save the Zerg world. . Then after time traveling, I encountered the worst world in the world (for example, when I returned from the two attacks, I found that I had no diploma, no job, no income, there were sick elderly people at home who had to spend money to take care of me, the company was about to go bankrupt and I had to commit myself to the younger brother of the rich company boss) , he was also humiliated by his boss, and his wife and children, who did not understand the language, came to seek refuge from his hometown. Every day before going to bed, he woke up thinking about where the money was coming from... This paragraph is very real and immersive, and can be said to be the most sadistic in the whole article 😭 😭 😭 😭). . The story line is divided into two CPs: the first CP is that the relationship between mother-in-law and daughter-in-law is not good, the wife reluctantly runs away with the child, and they reunite over and over again. Most of the second pair of cps are about one person's beauty and misery, and a small part is about breaking up and getting back together again and again (but the author of this pair of cps has mentioned it briefly). . . >> To be honest, as someone who has worked for 15 years, I can say that I am very receptive to some themes that describe social systems and real life. But this article made me feel aggrieved [vomiting blood]. Let me talk about what I feel aggrieved about. It only represents my personal opinion—— >>1. The character's capriciousness [brain-picking]. For example, in the Zerg chapter, Shou 1, who was in love in the early stage, suddenly became indifferent to Gong 1 after becoming the queen of the bugs. Gong 1 was imprisoned and refused to visit the prison, and even planned to brainwash Gong 1 and put him in a small dark room. No, at this time, the status of the male worm has been classified as a "breeding machine". Haven't you ever thought about what will happen to your husband in prison? [Pick your head] But Shou 1 traveled to the earth and became a love brain, washing your hands, making soup, and supporting your husband and raising your children every day (and then the plot of the CEO's chain in the introduction is gone [Pick your head]). In the Zerg line, Shou 2, who has a career brain, turned into a love brain after losing his memory. However, according to the description, the only memory he lost was "the reason for coming to Earth." In the early days, his memory as a radical equal rights fighter was not lost 😂. He can be said to have "killed his son to prove his morality" for the sake of his career. , Is a ruthless man who kills decisively. As a result, after arriving on Earth, he only surrounded Gong and cried and became a full-time househusband. After recovering his memory, he chose not to tell Gong 2 to go back and save the Zerg world because he was greedy for warmth (Zerg: So our world is so messed up? 😭). . >>2. What Shou 2 does is very villainous, but as the protagonist he is. By the way, Shou 2 is really annoying. He wishfully thinks that equal rights will allow female bugs to live a good life, even at the expense of male bugs. He wishes to think that he is a lone hero who forcibly turns his happy life into beauty and misery. He wishes to think that the heavy responsibility of saving the Zerg world should be left to him, but he also wishes that Shou 2 has the obligation to bear it with him. Secondly, it is obvious that Shou 1's misery is caused by Shou 2. Shou 1 clearly knows but still accepts Shou 2 as a friend. The earth line also takes care of Shou 2 a lot, which is hard for me to accept. . . [Vomiting blood] >> 3. The grand narrative of the Zerg line and the ordinary life of the Earth line are too abrupt. The Zerg line can be said to have a very complete world view, but the Earth line is like a dog's tail. Both of them are big figures in the Zerg line who are decisive and successful in their careers. In the later period, they all turned into little spoiled wives who accomplished nothing, with only two of them working hard to earn money to support the family [picking their brains]. It is obviously written that "two attackers can gain a foothold and adapt to life in a strange Zerg race", but two successful enemies find it difficult to adapt to the earth's society. Then the author probably didn't want to write about Liang Shou's career line, so he forced Liang Shou to arrange "a rich and powerful family suddenly discovered that Liang Shou was their long-lost relative, and ignored everything that Liang Shou was not from Earth." The career line of Liang Gong was also briefly mentioned (and then the plot of Shou 1 becoming the boss in the introduction was gone) [brain pick]. . . >>4. The writing is good but the plot is cliché. The author's narrative of suffering and entanglements of love and hate are very realistic and realistic 🤩, and his writing style is also very fluent, but he cannot describe happiness and contentment [Cheek-holding]. Many plots have a sense of routine and formula of torture for the sake of torture, forcibly creating the kind of abuse point that is "obviously unnecessary but still to be tortured out of nowhere" 😂. For example, writing attack 1 is afraid that the child will be seen and only dares to walk the larvae at night, but the larvae cries endlessly for the short-term freedom. There are also larvae crying and making trouble at home, which leads to the neighbor knocking on the door and complaining. All the people on earth just want Seeing the true nature of the Zerg will cause stress and faint. Shou 1 discovers Gong 1's mother and is so frightened by his true identity that she is hospitalized and takes the baby away... I feel that these plots are forcibly exaggerating the suffering [covering my face and laughing and crying]. According to the toughness of the Zerg, children will be beaten when they cry, and militarized management will be used if they don't listen. As a result, both Gong 1 and Shou 1 have become new parents who are at a loss when their children behave and roll around. For another example, it is clear that both Gong 1 and Shou 1 have reunited, but Shou refuses to tell the larva that this is your father, and allows the larva to call his father uncle, forcibly creating the point of abuse of "seeing each other but not knowing each other". These plots made me feel as if I was watching an ancient family ethics drama. All the characters were avoiding problems instead of solving them until conflicts broke out, and the racial differences in the Zerg background were not reflected in the characters' dealings. >>5. Some settings are very abrupt, and it feels like they are forcibly set for the sake of the plot. For example, in the early stage, "the body of the Zerg will be assimilated and strengthened by two attacks, and the body of the earth by two attacks will be assimilated and weakened." Although it was mentioned, it was not seriously foreshadowed and hinted in daily life. However, in the later stage, when the enemy attacked, it came suddenly again. The sentence "Because the body is weakened and then blablabla", is it because the enemy came and the physical strength of Liangshou was forcibly reduced? Also, in the later period, the bad guys suddenly attacked, and suddenly Liangshou "carried guns with him in case of this day", so this is the reason why the author set "actually this is a parallel earth"? Is it reasonable to be slightly unreasonable anyway?

I don't quite understand it, but I've basically finished reading it. I think this book is interesting in the middle, but weak at the end. I felt so uncomfortable watching the second half, so speechless. Not only was the plot speechless, I felt that he was illogical (maybe I thought so), but forget it, I finished it. The protagonist group is something written by the author. I am too lazy to assign missions to them. But after reading this book once, I felt that I was at a loss. I lost my coins to read this book.

It feels too disconnected from front to back

Lao Xu is really unlucky!

The protagonist is a little bit better, and the deputy CP pair is really awesome. Do you have any backbone? The other party didn't like you before, and he liked you to death. After you were killed, he just coaxed you and ran back.

Tsk, tsk, tsk, it's so miserable, it's so worthless.

I like the author because The Wife is really loving and willing to give. Many of the attacks in other people's novels do not end well (the attack on the stand-in's college classmate and the attack on the by-product of the stand-in). Peace of mind is a big reason why I read the author, but to be honest, several books start with attacking the assholes and then change them. But if the positions are reversed, I don't feel that I have been changed. The sadistic attack is easy, and the sadistic attack is easy, and the torture is done with just a few strokes.

Ouch, I haven't seen the sweet days of the deputy CP yet, it's going to be ups and downs again Qaq

Hehe, fortunately, I felt something was wrong when I saw the earth half, and felt that the part about saving the Zerg was definitely gone. Let's skip to the extra chapter. I suggest you stop reading when you see the part where Gong ran away from the insect planet. Returning to Earth is a long history of real suffering in the human world, and Shou Jun is in love with Tongtong. It shows that the author did not grow up in love, and must have problems such as middle-aged difficulties, because the portrayal is too lifelike. [Glasses] The full text is a story about a failure to save the world and return to the family life.