
Reborn! Fanfiction: Holding Hands
家教同人·牵手
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 66k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 16y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
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55Chapters
135Favorites
8.4Score
1.3kClicks per chapter
83Comments
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"Holding Hands" is what I downloaded yesterday. It's a very good article. When I was reading it, I resisted the urge to smash Yiping and Rambo. They both obviously like each other, but they are not as innocent as they were when they were children. There are many worries and thoughts. No one can pierce this layer of window paper. After reading it, I feel itchy in my heart, ah, ah, bastard. Actually, thinking about it, I don't know when the subtle relationship between Lan Bo and Yiping started to change. Sure enough, childhood sweethearts are the most likely to have JQ (cover your mouth and snicker)! This is my first time to write a mid-length review. There are few authors who can make me confused (note, not confused), because the author's writing style is very good. I think the fan fiction written by the author is a little off track, a bit like an urban feel. It would be best if some more fighting scenes can be added to the article. I hope the author writes some extras hahahahaha! I think there are very few authors who can write fan fiction very well. The plot is either boring and unoriginal, or the characters are broken. Ahhhhh! The heart of a wretched girl like me was broken into pieces like dumpling stuffing (I'm flattering). I have to say that this article feels a little warm and very good. The author's ability to analyze the character's psychology is good, and the article he writes is more realistic, not Mary, not Su, 333333333333! At first glance, the click rate is not high, and there are no long comments. There are also very few comments, but I support you. I hope the author will concentrate on writing after seeing my message. Work hard, be self-reliant, start a business with hard work, science and technology are the primary productive forces, focus on economic construction, vigorously develop productivity, one center, two basic points blablablablablablabla (Hey! I am off topic)
I like it very much. Every time I want to read a tutoring article, I will read it again first. The author's writing is very good, and the story is very fascinating. Nice!
Rambo, you BAGA, how long will it take for you to achieve positive results if you continue like this...
Obviously, Little Blue Wave's voice is so nice~ (Xiaojie+Naruto+…)
As the saying goes, Qiu Si... Xiao Yiping's Chinese is still very funny when I watch the animation~ (Sister voice actor, thank you for your hard work... Take a bow...) I still remember clearly that the first sentence in Chinese is... Um... TMD... The pronunciation is weird, so I laughed in front of the computer at that time
So beautiful, so beautiful, woo woo woo QAQ
···It's so beautifully written…
Good job
You have to do all the transfers.
I was very touched at the end