
[Western Crossover] A Century-Long Love Letter
[综英美]百年情书
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I would like to make a suggestion. I wonder if anyone else has the same feeling as me, that is, there are too many descriptive words... It doesn't matter if you skip the free chapters. If you charge for it in the future, I hope it won't be like this for every chapter?
Bruce: Everyone picks up children, but I am the one who picks up the parents.
The subject matter is quite interesting, and the writing style is also good. However, the character perspectives are very mixed and fragmented, and the changes are very frequent. It feels like there are many sudden ideas, and then I keep writing based on the inspiration. There is no focus. When I read it, it felt very messy. It was a strange feeling.
I understand... This chapter is almost all narration... There is very little dialogue. Although the narrative narration is very important, the dialogue between the characters is also very important... There are less than ten lines of dialogue, and the rest are all relied on narration to promote the plot... Although there are more dialogues in the first few chapters, they are still mostly narrations... I dare not say how I feel about this... At the same time, I wish the author all the best!
Speaking of which, part of the Red Hood only wears a mask with the lower half of its face, which is super cool.
It becomes furry, hahahaha, this is also the cuteness of rice
... This later development was somewhat disrupted.
Mermaid baby, super cute
Ah, ah? What a big idea, huh?
120 Top supermodels ⊙ω⊙Bruce is so lucky, beautiful sister posted it