Unhinged female disciple x devoted male master
Li Chanjun loves Xiangli Song. She sews her own wedding dress and eagerly looks forward to the day she'll marry him.
On their wedding day, after they bow twice, Xiangli Song leaves. She waits and waits, but her husband never comes back. Instead, an evil spirit comes to take her life.
She dies, then comes back to life and goes up the mountain to cultivate. Xiangli Song becomes her master. She starts looking for a way to lock him up and turn him into a cultivation vessel.
Later, he tells her he loves her and wants to hold their wedding again. Li Chanjun agrees. Then she runs away on their wedding day.
Original blurb below
Li Chanjun is the only disciple of Xiangli Song, the fourth-generation master of Fangzhang Mountain.
She's extraordinarily gifted and works hard at cultivation. In just two years on the mountain, she's advanced so much that the other disciples are envious.
Usually she's lively and sweet, and deeply respectful of her master.
Then she turns around and imprisons him.
No longer looking innocent and sweet, she grips Xiangli Song's chin and threatens him viciously.
Xiangli Song's back is streaked with blood. He knocks Li Chanjun's hand away and says, "Don't look at me like that!"
Li Chanjun grabs him by the throat instead. "Master, isn't this what you wanted? You cultivate the Path of Affection. How could you be so heartless to me? You made me into this!"
Xiangli Song says nothing. He closes his eyes and lets the snake whip lash him again and again.
But in his mind, he sees Li Chanjun in her wedding dress, smiling brightly.
*
Xiangli Song, the master of Fangzhang Mountain, has a secret everyone knows.
He's in love with his youngest disciple.
But he did something wrong.
Because of him, his youngest disciple has become violent, and her life is in danger.
He never dares to ask what she wants from him.
He doesn't dare give it to her.
Even he can't tell whether his feelings are love or guilt.
He's afraid she'll despise him.
Theme: Love life, be kind to yourself, and remember the road lies ahead.
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Friends, you write really well! However, the character design is a little blurry. I still don't understand what kind of protagonist Sorizatsu is. The plot could have been more intense. It is interesting but the development is a bit bland. Of course, I don't understand. I am looking at it from a reader's perspective. I can't pass the test if it is written so well. I really think the big frame and background are well written.
Hello~ I wonder if I can make a little comment here? The first chapter is very attractive, mainly because of the conflict, suspense, and the sense of taboo in a master-disciple novel. But the part after going down the mountain seems a bit flat. First, the plot itself is flat. The protagonist does not encounter much danger, and it is difficult for the reader to arouse emotions. The supporting characters who appear at this time are also so vivid; second, in terms of language, there are more narrative words than descriptive words, such as "... I saw five fingerprints on her neck. She was so frightened that she didn't even scream. He felt furious for the first time on the way down the mountain..." This type of expression is to directly express the character's emotions. Just imagine what kind of expression the character would have at this time, what kind of actions he would make, what kind of words he would say? Can his anger be shown directly through description? Can anger be conveyed in a way unique to this character? If the narrative takes up too much space in the article, it will flatten the ups and downs of the plot and affect the characterization. The above are all personal feelings, please forgive me if there is any offense! I hope the author will continue to work hard!
(Running around anxiously) Has anyone seen where my collection has gone? Is there any? I plan to write two books next: "Song of the Scapego" is about to go through, the scapegoat female protagonist × the male protagonist who doesn't necessarily have any form "Uncle Master Got My Baby" Xianxia, the nervous female protagonist × the mute, attentive and loyal dog male protagonist (Run 800 meters) (Out of breath) Please go to the column and save it. Don't force me to kneel down and beg you [let me be healthy] [let me be healthy]
Finish spreading flowers????
Just know that Xiangli Song is not dead! How could Li Chanjun kill his apprentice?
Finished this month! Yay! Happy New Year to the author's baby!
I actually waited until it was updated. Great!
Baby, pay attention to your health!!!!!
Why is there no one with such beautiful writing? I support it.