[New novel, My Strategy for Nonhumans in the Horror World, is now underway! The blurb is below. Please visit my column and add it to your collection! Also, I may make occasional corrections to this story.]
Blurb:
A military academy student whose spirit form was a one-eyed snake became famous across the StarNet.
But it was because she was dragged onto the trending list and roasted.
The mecha she designed were held up as cautionary examples.
She designed mecha at school and was looked down on by the entire academy.
Then she entered the Interstellar Mecha Design Competition.
As a result, her haters grew from the whole academy to the entire interstellar world.
[How can we save mecha designers' sense of aesthetics?] [The Alliance Military Academy has really fallen this low?] [Get out of the Alliance Military Academy!]
Chao Xi: ...
She might look speechless right now, but actually, she'd already fired back using 88 alternate accounts.
Question: What should you do when netizens target you?
Answer: The boss doesn't talk. The boss lets her skills dominate the rankings.
When the peerless mecha One-Eyed Zhuyin, which could cut through iron like mud and slay any foe in its path, made its way all the way to the Zerg homeworld, the livestream chat exploded.
Viewers trembled: This is bad. I think I've transmigrated... Mecha can reach this level now?!
The next day's hottest interstellar posts: [A huge reward for information on the mecha designer who built One-Eyed Zhuyin] [The Alliance has spent a century researching a secret weapon] [The secret behind Zhuyin]
Chao Xi tossed out a set of mecha designs modeled after ancient gods: You're making a fuss over nothing.
The whole internet was stunned.
They might be ugly, but they really could fight!
Mecha designers across the interstellar world worked through the night to study the designs, only to discover that none of them were as impressive as the one-eyed mecha that had devastated the Zerg that day.
Chao Xi: You mean that dragon? That's your big sister's spirit form.
...And whoever offered a huge reward to find me, don't forget to pay up.
[The following is a belated reading guide]
1. The heroine has low morals early on and develops over the course of the story. Read with caution if that bothers you.
2. This story includes livestreaming, with quite a lot of chat comments.
3. The plot comes first, with romance as a side element.
4. The setting includes many original elements.
Note: 70% of the story is protected against piracy.
The ending has been heavily revised. I am not responsible for pirated copies.
****Coming Soon****
Shu Yao is a therapist conducting research at the Federation's central headquarters, commonly known as a top-tier healer.
Every day, she's proper, diligent, and conscientious, practically the Federation's most beautiful civil servant: the kind who wins a big red flower in the annual awards.
That is, everything above would be true if she didn't illegally sneak into some big shot's consciousness every night.
*
"Dreams are the truest and most honest mental activity. All desires are laid bare before a dream thief."
That's what people in the city say about dream thieves.
Everyone has heard of dream thieves, but no one has ever seen one.
That hasn't stopped the profession from becoming the villain in countless films and books.
According to Article 31 of Federation law, anyone who illegally enters another person's dream without their consent or authorization through proper procedures will receive a seventy-year prison sentence.
Shu Yao's real identity is not the respected therapist everyone thinks she is, but a top dream thief feared by all.
*
"Why did you save me?"
The general, who woke up many years later, asked Shu Yao that question.
If he reported her, the Federation would arrest the top dream thief who navigated the gray world right in front of him within ten minutes.
The general still had his usual steady, upright bearing, with none of the wicked madness he'd shown in the dream.
Shu Yao smiled boldly, her eyes full of amusement. "Because I'm the only one who can save you."
So she came.
For once, the great villain wanted to do something good and save the hero's life.
World One:
The imprisoned mermaid met the first human who showed him kindness. The first thing he said to Shu Yao was, "You're mine."
He said those words when his affection progress reached 80%.
"You're my believer."
He saw her only as a believer and wanted to assimilate her, turning her into a mutated mermaid with no sense of self who could survive in the deep sea.
Later, during the mermaid's mating season, he constantly gave off mating signals. To suppress his body's urges, he clawed himself until he was covered in wounds, but it did no good.
Shu Yao stood above him and asked with a laugh, "Want me to help you? Beg me, and I'll help you."
Theme: Forge ahead without fear.
It sucks. The more I think about it, the angrier it becomes. I must comment. The ending is ridiculously bad, and I don't recommend buying the second half at all. To be honest, when the writing collapses at the end, you should know it yourself, think of ways to adjust the situation, and start writing after adjusting. It is better than just messing up and ending it. The content of the first half is completely fine, the writing is great, and the plot is good. The second half is just a mess. The development of the plot after you recognize Thor is like you can't wait for the end, and you haven't explained many things clearly. Let me tell you a simple sentence: Will there be a future chapter in the extra chapter, and will the emotional line be explained? Are you going to write a few extras to salvage your bad ending? I spent so much money in Jinjiang, and you are really the only one who is so bad that I have to comment on you. Adjusting the status, even explaining it, and short-term interruption of updates are really better than writing these inexplicable things later.
Emm, although I had a premonition that Fu was the male protagonist, the relationship was so unexpected... Jiu Min, not as good as Brother Song, was transferred out of nowhere in the later stage... It felt a bit unfinished...
Nowadays, I rarely read novels, and even less often read the entire book. The heroine setting of this book is so suitable for me, and the rhythm of the story is well grasped, so I finished reading it! Personally, I don't care much about love lines, so the love lines in this book are always a bit weak, which is completely acceptable. But if you want to reach a wider audience in Jinjiang, maybe the emotional line needs to be strengthened? For example, the setting of Little Black Wolf is actually very interesting and exciting, but the memories of being covered in thorns, calling me sister alone, eating sweets, etc. Are a bit messed up... Jianghe suddenly became boring. There are obviously more interesting plots to be explored when a man disguises himself as a woman and enters the women's dormitory. When we first met Fu Xin, she looked like a kind-hearted male mother who was not short of money. However, in the middle and later stages, she always felt that her motherly attributes were a bit heavy and she couldn't get enough of it. After Yueshen massages his little hands, the setting of his heartbeat could not be more logical!! And the twin star CPs who secretly rub and nibble on themselves and themselves couldn't be cuter!! But there are actually no scenes later!! I hate it!! There are no problems with the overall storyline and character creation. If I have to say, the slap in the face is a little bit more satisfying, especially in the later stages. It may be logical and can explain why everyone on the scene still doesn't understand the good girl Niubi, but in my personal feeling, it is still a little too much. Finally, I would like to say that although Dai Rin's story may be seen in various literature, the rhythm and writing of his story are really great, which made me cry immersed in front of the screen. It's really a gift to be able to write this first book like this!! Come on ma'am!!
After reading it, I didn't see the original ending. The whole replacement is okay, at least it's self-contained. However, many details are not mentioned, and when my wife wrote it, every time a new character appeared, there was not a lot of foreshadowing. It seemed that he suddenly appeared with a personal name and there was no real feeling. The emotional drama... From the perspective of the scene, Brother Song is more suitable_(:з∠)_Fu's description is too little. It may be better if it doesn't write such a long and big world view. Come on, my wife, please finish the book.
Why do I feel that the hostess behind me is a bit broken? And there is no need to write an emotional scene. There is no foreshadowing in the front, and it feels very abrupt to write about the heroine and Fu later. (I think the heroine and Song Hanyue have a more CP feel)
The male protagonist is not Brother Song. Well, I don't want the male protagonist to take the little black wolf with him in the future. There is really no sense of cp with Fu Xin, not even as good as Su Yao...
Oh, why did I read this crappy book again? Help, it was so good at the beginning. What a pity.
Really, this piece of shit makes me feel like I'm trying to cheat money. Suddenly, the author's train of thought stopped before the end, and the writing style is also different. The previous foreshadowing by Fang Yi is no longer needed. I can't understand what this is going on.
The progress at the end was a bit too tight and disappeared after a while?
He cheated me out of money! It sucks!