[A River of Sorrow] A New Beginning

Many people have never seen a real girl. It is estimated that a real girl is not ignorant and has no desires. A real girl is full of desire to conquer. Their wings gradually harden, and standing on the shoulders of their parents, they will say, the world is ours, the future is ours, you all stand down, we are going to take over the world. They will point out social problems, they will accuse authority of rigidity, they will laugh at boys for being stupid, they will outline ideals and grand plans, and they will indulge in hobbies. The only thing they will not do is stare at the stars and worship anyone. In the eyes of a real girl, she is the best, and no one is more important than herself, because anyone else is not of my kind, younger than her, too naive; anyone older than her, not cool enough, only she, just right, is the center of the world. This is the kind of self-centeredness that only girls have. To hell with everything about being considerate, pleasing others, and being shy. They are all fake girly images cut out by men's lust and male dominance.

I really like the author's writing style and ideas! The writing is really good, I must continue writing, big woman! ! I read the original work in middle and high school. What kind of female character can I write? I still don't seem to understand whether Gu Senxiang said that the world is really dirty? What did I go through after being deceived, and then I /a. Why is he so malicious towards Yi Yao, making her go through so much pain, and mistreating her pitifully? Is there any good description of girls in it? It's simply funny. The pain of youth is only made so nondescript by Nan's description. It's ridiculous.

It's true that you love men. Jinjiang, a women's literary city full of female authors, is almost like a men's toilet…

It feels like the author is very worried about readers being deceived by this "good man" Qi. Don't worry, I haven't read the original work, and I don't even know which ones are self-created characters and which ones are the original work. Without the halo bonus of the original work, Qi is just a cowardly and annoying little trash with a bad mouth. His few advantages are that he is too beautiful to be real and has a weak physique. Normal people will not like it, okay.

There should be no ending. To be honest, when I first read this novel, it was difficult for me to understand why Yi Yao wanted to die to prove her "innocence". The characters in the original novel were not worthy of her concern at all. But now in your writing, she sticks to her true nature like a soaring female eagle. She is very dazzling like this. Thank you for depicting her original appearance.

If you haven't done anything, you just haven't done it. What's the point of crying? Do you expect the protagonist to forgive you? It's a low-level thing.

I'm so angry. It's really late at night. My whole body is shaking. My hands and feet are cold. The rapists are dead. They all deserve to be beaten from feet to head.

Yi Yao, I'm so damn proud of you! ! ! Hug baby girl

What a romantic dream. Can I understand that Yi Yao briefly overlapped with Yi Yao in the parallel world (original work by Guo Diao) in the dream, and her actions changed those characters, including the fate of Yi Yao in the original work?

I really like it, it's from the latest one, and you can tell at a glance that they are fellow travelers! Although I haven't read the original article, I know to some extent the routines of female abuse articles on the market, and this article is their original direction.