Sincere Intentions

Let's change that part at the beginning, it feels like it's plagiarized from "So and So"

"Another" catches a big bug for the author~ fork

Regarding the fact that some people say that my beginning is very similar to "So-and-so", I would like to apologize first, because we all like "So-and-so", so I will respect your suggestions, but if I change it, it may need to be delayed for a while. I would like to apologize again because during this time, I have to prepare for the high school entrance examination. After the high school entrance examination, I will make a major revision of this article. To be precise, it will need to be rewritten. The character will also be changed, so I can't change it in the near future. Please forgive me. I'm sorry. Note: I finished my high school entrance exam on June 20, so it may take a little long.

I saw it, come on!! (???_??)?

Come on, come on, okay?

This is a long review: Hey hey hey, you didn't expect it, I am here to write a long review again, it's the same sentence, I strongly recommend all sisters to read this article, if it doesn't read, come back and kick me with a knife, we will continue to analyze the content of the second chapter. In the first and second paragraphs of the second picture, we can see that Sheng Zixi seems to have a sense of familiarity with Gu Jinyi. Then, below, the author reveals to us Sheng Zixi's memories. In the memory, Xiao Sheng Zixi held her mother's hand, pointed to a merry-go-round and said she wanted to ride on the merry-go-round. This can reflect Sheng Zixi's innocence, romance, and childlike innocence, even though he is a child to begin with. The author also describes Sheng Zixi's appearance as a child in the following paragraphs. The description is of fleshy cheeks. I can already picture his cute face in my mind. I have to say that this description is really silky. The scene below is that an old man selling marshmallows passed by Sheng Zixi, and Sheng Zixi looked at the marshmallows flowing down and wanted to eat them, but her mother went to buy a ticket for him and could not buy him π_π. The author also described the appearance of marshmallows here. If it were not too late at this moment, I would definitely go out to buy snacks. When I saw his description, I really wanted to eat them. Sheng Zixi couldn't help but walked to the place selling cotton candy, but when he found that his mother was not around, he burst into tears. At this time, the light appeared, and a little boy came over. I guess this was Gu Jinyi. The little boy picked up a dollar and bought a marshmallow for our little Sheng Zixi (see the original text for details). Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. It would be nice if someone would buy me marshmallows for me when I have no money, but most of this is just a daydream of mine. The author also described the calloused hands of the old man. The characterization was really good, which made me appreciate the hard work of the old man. I don't know if this is secretly referring to the things people do, hard work or not. Okay, let's talk about the following plot. The little boy walked up to our Sheng Zixi with a marshmallow. The exciting moment came. He asked his brother, do you want to eat this marshmallow? Ahhhhhhhhh, I don't want to fall, but he called me brother (even though I am a woman) Xiao Sheng Zixi also said something innocently, and the little boy sneaked close to his ear and said secretly, "Can you promise me something?" (There are abbreviated sentences here, it is recommended to read the original text) Xiao Sheng Zixi innocently said brother. Oh my God, he actually called me brother. I'm going to die. Needless to say, the little boy was stunned. (There is a big paragraph missing in the middle. Read the original text yourself.) Then he said, "You have already done that. Oh my God, you look like a scumbag at first glance!" Although our little Sheng Zixi was very confused, she was still happy and got marshmallows??(ˊωˋ*)?? They held their little hands and walked away happily. Just like that, the memory was over and we jumped to the classroom. The author's use of environmental descriptions and metaphors here are really very artistic. I highly recommend reading the original text because I can't copy it. Then, the bell rang, and the supporting characters started talking. I especially recommend all sisters to read this treasured article. I personally think the writing style is really good. Let me tell you secretly, I have the author's Penguin account hhh. I will definitely have a copy of my autograph in the future.

Coming, coming. Is Sheng Zaizai suffering?

This is a long review: I personally think this article is quite well written. Although it only has one chapter, and this chapter only has 1,300 words, I am willing to write a 1,000-word long review for it. At the beginning, the protagonist has been written out and the scenery has been described. "There are pleasant chirping of birds outside the window, and the sound of books in the classroom is loud, but they cannot wake up Gu Jinyi, who is sleeping peacefully in the corner of the window." I personally think this section is very artistic, of course this is my personal opinion. Next, there are a few passages that the supporting character of this article, the protagonist's younger brother, enters the classroom and talks to other supporting characters. There is no need to excerpt it here. You will know it by yourself when you go in and read it. Several supporting characters clearly explained how the other male protagonist came here through a few paragraphs, and then used descriptions to describe the protagonist's brother like a husky, which can highlight the lively and enthusiastic character of the protagonist's brother. In the passage, one of the students around him was very excited. It can be seen that they may be lacking academic masters here, because someone asked if they were academic masters? Moreover, she also used a parallel metaphor, which can vividly reflect the enthusiasm of the surrounding students for the new classmates. Here, a supporting character showed an expression of looking at his son to the protagonist's brother. I'm sorry, I couldn't help but laugh when I saw this part. I sincerely recommend that sisters go and watch it. But it is obvious that the protagonist's brother dislikes him very much, and of course this dislike is not the other. Then there is a clip, you can watch it for yourselves. Anyway, it emphasizes that the protagonist's younger brother looks like a husky, and his personality is more distinct! In the following article, another supporting character reveals that the other male protagonist is a handsome guy. I have to say that at this moment, the corners of my mouth are already curled up. At the same time, I have already imagined a 10,000-word blockbuster in my mind. You can't blame me for reading too many books, and I am very used to thinking about it. Then because the classmates around were too noisy, our protagonist Gu Jinyi was woken up. This is the stare between the protagonist and the protagonist. As for who is attacking and who is receiving, we still have to look at the back, I am not sure now. Xia Wen once again emphasized the appearance of another male protagonist. Then I call the number one male lead Gu Jinyi and the number two male lead Sheng Zixiha. As for why I don't just type their names, can I use the excuse that their names are too difficult to type? Male Protagonist No. 2 Extends his hand to Male Protagonist No. 1. The description here is as cute as a kitten. I suggest you read the original text because it cannot be copied here. I cannot copy the original text. I can only type it word by word. I don't want to type. It's a pity that the male protagonist No. 1 Didn't even look at the male protagonist No. 2 And looked directly at the rising sun outside the window. Woo hoo hoo hoo, I made up the 10,000-word theater in my mind. Then I started the class and there was no follow-up because the author's second chapter was still loading. The detailed introduction is here, and you can read the rest by yourself. I personally think this is a very relaxed campus article, full of campus atmosphere. I feel that the protagonist's attack and reception should be pretty good. The main reason is that the author can write the supporting character's character so well, so the protagonist's character may not be too bad. Personally, I think the author's writing style is very good, and many sentences in the article make me feel very poetic. Anyway, I think this is a treasure trove of articles, and I highly recommend all sisters to read it. The author updates it very quickly, but the review is too slow.

Why does it feel like the pace is so fast? I also started to change from the first chapter. Now I am lazy to fish and wait for the seventeenth update. Jpg.

Uh... Isn't Gu Jinyi's character a cool academic? Why is the character designed to be more aloof and cold? It needs to be changed. (Suggestions from your □□friends)