The Tale of the Nine-Tailed Fox

Dear author, please don't abandon the article. You can listen to my suggestions and opinions. 1. That's it, segmentation! Because the play you wrote is too long. No author would have the patience to finish reading such a long sentence. 2. In the article, she is very good at mathematics, but she only has a little memory. This is an Internet word, and it can only be used in the writing except joking and lively atmosphere. For example: She is considered an excellent person in mathematics, but she does not like to communicate with others, or she likes mathematics, but makes people feel difficult to get along with her. 3. It is not only necessary to combine your experience, but also from the perspective of the reader. The most important thing is to accumulate experience. The author can write this article as an article to accumulate experience. At the same time, he should also read more literary writers to increase his broad thinking.

I suggest you break it into paragraphs. Each of your paragraphs is too long.