[Hunter X Hunter] The Spider's Scarlet and White

It turns out that this is how Xiaodi came to be What to say I really liked Lorisu at the end.

It's actually Xiaodi...

Is this the end?? O(╯□╰)o. . .

Due to objective reasons, this is Guangnian Jun's commentary. The protagonist Ling Feibai's personality is undoubtedly very impressive. The author writes brilliantly about the numbness and vague despair caused by being at a loss in life. Readers who like this style are in luck. It is a pity that the general direction is impeccable, but the small details cannot withstand scrutiny. I hope the author can improve it in the following articles. First of all, there are too many bad sentences. For example, in the first sentence, "It's not a big deal" is not an adjective and cannot be used to modify a noun. And "Snake? Small animal? Or robber?" There. Snakes and small animals have a subordinate relationship and cannot be juxtaposed. Of course, as an online article, writing style is not something that should be deliberately pursued, and many readers will not care. But for a serious reader like me, the first sentence alone is enough to make me give it a thumbs up. (I was too scared to look carefully later) I hope the author can pay attention to it. Second, the characters are still distorted. For example, the phrase "Who is she?" I don't think everyone in the tour group has this kind of petty bourgeois sentiment. Since it is not a Honkai Impact novel, I still hope that the author can abandon his own preferences and make the characters closer to the original work. The last point is that the character's emotional transition is a bit abrupt, so it seems a bit too suspenseful. For example, with the prince, even if a special extra explanation was written, it was still awkward. Is such a portrait reasonable? The etiquette in the court is very complicated, and there are regulations on how much different people can bend. Forget it about the prince, but will the queen really not become suspicious? However, overall, as a novice, it is really worthy of praise for being able to write like this. I hope the author will continue to work hard. From your article, it is still very inspiring. I hope my words will not be too harsh.

Tuanzi is actually a WS uncle. . . What = =

I thought it was going to be H. H H H H Mr. Tuanzi...

Yes, let's kill the Kuluta tribe with the spiders! ~

The author should update soon. Could it be that such a beautiful article is a trap?

It should be that if you tell the truth and are denied by the other party, you can kill the other party and control the other party's body. When the body is killed by others, the ability becomes invalid, right?

If you tell the truth, you can kill the other party?? Trait system?