Clear Winds, Bright Moon: A Dream

Let's practice again. This kind of writing is not really good. It's all dialogue and narration and there's basically no literary talent.

Let me just remind you, there is no malice. Author, your article is basically dialogue between characters. If it were all dialogue between characters, it would be a drama. It is best for the character dialogue in an article to be less than 30%. If the setting of this article is mainly about character dialogue, just pretend I didn't say it. I just want to give you a suggestion, don't criticize. If you criticize, you are right.

Can the author sleep well? I can't sleep anyway, you haven't updated it for a week!!! Urgent update.

You and I have similar original intentions. I know nothing about old dreams, but I have sealed them with my own hands. I hope you will always be with me and never forget your original intentions. I find my reflection in you. May you ascend to the sky, and I will walk on Pingshui again. Let's meet strangers.

Baby~ you really wrote too many character dialogues

Dada is very good, the writing style is novel, but if you want to sign a contract with Dada, the number of words in each chapter must be around 3,000, but Dada is already very good. Come on, the future is promising.

Why not update it? I think it's pretty good.

Dear author, you are so "diligent"

Woohoo, girls all like to break through the world, ugh

Come on, author!!