The Bu family are born with beautiful faces, but they have a secret no one knows.
Yang Yang, an elite member of the Fire Investigation Bureau, takes on a temporary assignment to infiltrate the Bu family.
The moment she steps through the gates of the Bu residence, Yang Yang, who never loses her composure even when Mount Tai collapses before her, twists her ankle. "Hey, ex-boyfriend. When did you change your name?"
She first met him on a mountain of desolate graves. He told her his name was Yanyin.
Later, he appeared before her covered in blood, saved her, and said he had nowhere left to go.
After that, everyone began respectfully calling him Mr. Bu. First, he picked the lock on her door, then he tried to throw money at her. Unfortunately for him, she reacted quickly and threw money at him first. "I don't have any experience with this, so I don't know if this price is fair."
Theme: Live life with purpose.
Madam, the writing rhythm is actually good, and the story is not bad. It would be better if some small details can be handled and changed.
Madam, do you want to change the civility and copywriting? I have no idea what the story is about after reading the copywriting. It's a waste of text.
There are really people like Zhu Miao. She ignored the dissuasion of her family and left with the man as soon as she hooked up with her. It was as if the whole family was preventing her from running towards happiness, and in turn scolded the person who persuaded her.
"You've already paid him a salary" is a big bug for the author~ Change "he" to "she"
"Come together and rush over" is a big bug for the author~
"Wash away the tears with your face all day long" is a big bug for the author~ wash face with tears
"This woman" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ Yang Yang
If you rely on Gou Chang to sign the contract, I think this article is long enough. . You can change the title and copy, it's too un-Jinjiang now
I guess you are still persisting?