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Qin Jiaojiao, a goofy girl who became so sick she was nothing but skin and bones, suddenly transmigrates into the body of a chubby girl everyone mocks as "Fat Jiaojiao"
Oh my goodness, this is wonderful! A waist is a waist, legs are legs, breasts are breasts, and a bottom is a bottom. This round, plump figure feels even better than being given another life.
Her family is rich and powerful. They can afford to feed her, right?
Otherwise, what a waste of all the egg cakes, lüdagun, four-treasure meatballs, and braised pig trotters she's eaten...
With such a rich family, somehow they've also raised one, two, three... seven, eight, nine cousins who are as skinny as sticks. A strong breeze might blow them away. Can you imagine how worrying that is?
Qin Jiaojiao is beside herself with worry. Every day she brings her cousins delicious food, and every time she sees them, she pats their shoulders anxiously and urges them: "Sweetie, you really should eat more. Look at you, your waist isn't even as thick as my elbow. What if the wind blows you away? Can't you let me worry a little less..."
The one, two, three... seven, eight, nine cousins: "Who needs to worry about whom? Have you looked in the mirror? Your waist, legs, breasts, and bottom are almost impossible to tell apart, and you still want to eat?"
Fat Qin Jiaojiao: "What nonsense! I'm clearly plump and graceful, so beautiful that fish sink and geese fall, the moon hides and flowers blush. I'm too beautiful to hide..."
If you've read this far, then you'll surely see the author's follow-up note: This blurb... just take it with a grain of salt. It doesn't have much to do with the actual story. After all, the author wrote the blurb after waking up hungry in the middle of the night, while the actual story requires careful consideration.
The author doesn't want to write a heroine who does nothing but eat, drink, and give up on life. My heroines will never give up. To be honest, I really dislike the term "give up on life." This is just my personal opinion, so feel free to criticize me. At least it'll give us something to talk about.
Theme: Discover the true meaning of life amid the simple pleasures of everyday living.
I think the ending is perfect here. I like this article because I want to see the family life of a carefree unmarried girl. If she follows her husband to get promoted, it will start to turn into officialdom.
After reading two books by this author, I felt that she couldn't grasp the rhythm. She was not brief when she should be brief, and she didn't explain what she needed to explain. It started anticlimactically, and it was like watching the first volume of the female channel at the starting point, so you said it was a home-based fighting novel. It didn't say farming, and the parents didn't say much about their shortcomings. It stopped abruptly and didn't stop. It was very exciting. The rhythm of this article is not as good as that of Good Girl. After reading the male and female protagonist's characters, I will remember that the female protagonist is fat and the male protagonist is beautiful...
The tone is very suitable for writing a long farming article. It ends like this, top-heavy.
I really like the author's writing style. He doesn't deliberately describe the sentences, but it has a natural and antique charm. Let me sincerely share my thoughts on this novel: First of all, there are too many characters in this article, such as the third wife, the third old lady, and the third grandma. Although they can be distinguished clearly through scene changes such as Dongfu North Alley, they still have to think about constantly and occasionally they will be confused. It is not as easy to read as other online articles. Then, in terms of the number of characters that appear, the story is too short. In comparison, the length and number of characters in The Good Girl are better. There are so many people in this story that I felt like I wanted to write it into a classic novel like Zhifu, but it ended abruptly. Finally, the main story is too bland. Jiaojiao is a very charming protagonist, but this story is not as attractive as the good girl. Based on the author's excellent writing style and character creation, I feel that you are capable of writing a beautiful and classic ancient group portrait novel, and I'm looking forward to it. (The author must have his own ideas and plans when writing articles. This is definitely not a writing guide. I am just briefly talking about the views of a reader who has been in the Internet literary circle for many years. I hope you will not feel offended.)
Ah, is this about to end? It's a pity. Based on the big foreshadowing, I thought it would be a long novel, but maybe there were too many characters in the first few chapters, so not many people came to watch it. Great work, looking forward to the next one!
It looks good, the author has something in his belly, his writing skills are also good, and the characters are fleshed out. It's the same feeling that everyone has. I always feel that there will be at least dozens of chapters later, but it's gone. When will the author be able to write a chronicle, I want to read it.
Real days are ordinary, but ordinary days are the true meaning of happiness
I feel very good, very good, I really like it. Even those who teach children have noticed it. I won't say more. I really learned after reading this.
Where are the teachers? Have you written it on another website? I still don't write anymore. Is there no new article? My dear, please come back.
I finished reading it in one go, it's so good