I Became a Villain’s Dad at a Young Age

The article is very good, I really hate Qin Miaomiao

I picked it up from Ye Fanfan's house next door. I have read both books. The content is almost the same. The protagonist's career, love and raising a baby are very similar. The article is written with the warmth of a parent. It is suitable for reading when you are bored to kill time. However, looking back, there are always some shortcomings in the story line. I feel that the author can study this aspect. The article is called Becoming a Villain Father at a Young Age, and the main plot must be related to raising children. The author writes very well about how the male protagonist raises children, how he cultivates children's labor habits, and cares about the children's psychological development. It is very comprehensive. The deepest impression given by the whole article is that Qin Feng is a good father. In addition, he is sensible, understands the world, has a wide range of contacts, and is willing to guide others to get rich. The character image is very three-dimensional and charming. However, the portrayal of the children is a bit poor. It focuses on the children's intelligence but does not show the versatility of their characters. It is difficult to tell which child it is from their response to one thing. After the eldest son of the Gu family, the second child, showed his intelligence as a child at the beginning (rebirth version), he went back to his old business (the eldest son used to be a businessman) and started a small business of buying popsicles. Then he mentioned that the eldest son used to be a businessman before finishing school and was obsessed with learning. Finally, he was worried about his biological parents and entered a military school. The second child was smart but not hard-working and chose a military medical school with the same strict management. The characters of the two people are very little reflected here. It can only be seen that they are both smart children. The choices they make are more based on the reference they have had in the previous life. Often the experience of the previous life flashes by, and then it is time for the two of them to make the next decision. The individual logic is not a big problem, but the combination seems very abrupt. Qin Feng had read books and knew something about them, so it was understandable that the professional references he gave coincided with them. I personally think that when the three fathers and sons are very smart, writing a plot in which one or both parties are suspicious can better reflect their intelligence and enhance the drama and story of the time traveler versus the reborn person. Then talking about the third and fourth Fu brothers, they also have little character expression. What is more prominent is their professional choice and Qingyun's career line (making TV series while making money for the family). I even think Qingyun's career line is too prominent, because most of the second half of the article talks about Qingyun's career, which incidentally provides opportunities for Chu Sheng and Wu Xiao to get to know each other, and incidentally mentions that Lingyun and Miaomiao have more connections through their lawyer (?) Careers. As for Miaomiao, from the beginning he was a quiet little monk who was pampered by everyone and grew up to be a lively and sensitive child. His personality changes were more obvious, but there was less foreshadowing for his career choice. The only thing that left an impression on me was the small incident of Qin Feng leading police classmates to come to the village to popularize the law. It seems that the impact on Miaomiao before and after was not seen. I think one point that I can write about is that the four brothers were reborn and grew up in a normal family. How did their thoughts change from the previous life? In the previous life, they could only rely on themselves and became the villains in the "book" due to such and unavoidable reasons. In this life, they have a warm family and more choices. Will they embark on the journey of the previous life or enter a new field, and why there is such a change in their hearts. It's a pity that the author wrote too little in this aspect. Only the eldest brother said that he had to make up for the schooling he didn't go to in the previous life. As a result, he went to a military school to avoid the search of his biological parents. This reason alone made me feel a bit ridiculous. The sub-line of the article seems to be Qin Feng's love/marriage line. The first half is about his parents urging him to get married, trying out a blind date, and deciding to let things go. The second half is about meeting Chu Fang, testing each other, and starting to write about their relationship after Chu Fang and his family broke off. To be honest, Qin Feng was written in the previous article as being very rational and objective about marriage and love. Such a person would actually become tired of being with the person after he decided to fall in love with Chu Fang. The love between parents is really annoying (?? [Spread flowers]). Why is it said that it seems, because the career line of the article is not obvious compared to this one. Overall, it is said that Qin Gong is studying trams. I don't know whether he has been promoted. Generally speaking, the narrative line of the article is a little less, and the growth and transformation of raising children are a little less and not smooth. Except for Qin Feng (the protagonist) and Miaomiao (half of the protagonists), the character traits of the characters are not very clear. Take away the story line, and the rest of the article is mostly trivial things about the parents, which is difficult to summarize. These contents have nothing to do with the main storyline but they can express the character's character very well (the author chose this subject to write so much and it is obvious that he likes [Dog Head]). Personally, I feel that it would be good to use these things to connect the character growth of the five little animals. It would be better if a few flashbacks of past life memories were added. It would be amazing if there is a mental duel between the book traveler and the reborn person that breaks through the paper (I am a native dog and I love to watch [Sunglasses])

Wuhu ~ The ending feels unexpected and unexpected. I am actually a little curious about married life, curious about Miaomiao's reaction after knowing his biological mother, and curious about Qin Gong and Chu Fang's old life. However, it's good to stop here. Stay in the best time

Is that designer the second child of the stepmother? ! !

Want to watch extras Want to watch extras? ???? ??????? 555

I'm really happy to finish the article hahahahahaha

Damn, please make a side story! ! !

In fact, I prefer to have some plots about work

Very nice! ! ! ! ! ! !

I'm new here, I want to watch the extras, it's great