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Red crisp hands, yellow vine wine, two orioles singing green willows. Outside the pavilion, beside the ancient road, a row of egrets ascended into the sky. There is no fragrant grass anywhere in the world, and passion is always annoyed by ruthlessness. I didn't notice anything wrong the first time, but I laughed to death the second time.
Die! Even Conan can't compare... Fortunately, the ending is good in the end
Death is nothing and my soul cannot bear it! ! !
T T How about reading those locked chapters
I'm not used to your writing being so serious. . . I took a few glances first, then looked back carefully.
First of all, it can actually be seen from the previous paragraphs that "I" seems to have matured and become a royal sister. In essence, I am still a LOLI with a beautiful appearance, a lot of thoughts, a literary and sentimental temperament, and a love for sex. I originally liked Bai Ye. He is a character who is a bit cheerful and has no feelings at all. He is more enthusiastic about Suzaku, who seems to be a noble and cool person. However, [so when Suzaku was no longer satisfied with covering up with quilts and just chatting, but made a request to have sex, I didn't feel it was out of the ordinary. I feel very abrupt! ! ! It's very abrupt at all, isn't it? ! ! I thought she was really cool and abstinent, but it turned out that she is just a guy who loves to have sex! ! ! In contrast, Bai Ye is really a reliable and good person [The moment I fell to the ground, I thought of Suzaku, and in the end I couldn't bear to say it. The name she called in her dream was not mine. I don't know if I'm afraid of being too cruel to her, or to me. Actually, your style is really close to that of Tang Qi, not to mention telling heart-wrenching stories in a humorous tone, but why is it so bloody? Suzaku is so scumbag. He likes A and ends up having sex with B. While they are having sex, he still misses A. Don't think this plot is too familiar. Such a male pig's feet are spitted all over. One by one, with Suzaku as a foil, Lian He Zeshuo is pretty good, right? ["Cao Tama's pain is so painful..."] This sentence suddenly turned the style back to your routine, expressing admiration, and I smiled with a distorted expression. [The hand holding the hilt of the sword touched my cheek, with a gentle look on her face - "I am Suzaku's savior, even if I die, I will die by Suzaku's side. You are Suzaku's sword-holder, so you must live well by her side. Is it possible that you have seen someone holding a sword for the dead?" She said to me with a smile, as if she was teasing a child with a tantrum. He obviously wanted to pretend to be joking, but he didn't smile sincerely. Ouch Baiye, I like you... The quality of the protagonist is exposed. It's so gentle. We went to drink Guyu wine together. It felt really good. I like it~ [Suzaku looked tired, walked over to me, hugged me tightly, and called my name - it was also the name she often called in her dreams. Now I finally understand that even though we have the same name, her love for me is unparalleled in the world. Over the past year, I have been depressed all the time, worrying whether Suzaku would really be my fate. I thought I would never laugh in this life...] Although I don't quite understand, is this whitewashing Suzaku? It's so frustrating to have a role as a sibling sister. She still has something to do with sex. It's so frustrating to have Bai Ye's classmate exist. Life or death is uncertain. It's just two people who have been like this and that for ten years and are still entangled in love. No matter how hard it is, you should not exist in the same story at all. You are the wrong partner! ! ... Speaking of which, Alice, do you really like a guy like Suzaku? Do you really want to be with her? You are too weird, right?
It's so sudden that I can't accept it!
Bai Ye actually likes Suzaku... How can that blind and affectionate sister be worthy of her liking? She is obviously an affectionate attacker from the Appearance Association. She really blinded Bai Ye! ! ! I thought Bai Ye liked the protagonist... I strongly requested the author to write a spin-off of Bai Ye's Happy Ending! ! Forget about Xiao Shou and Suzaku...
As long as you want to stir things up, there will definitely be two good friends in your life, one red and one white. If there is a red one, over time the red one will become dried bean curd, and the white one will be the spring in the ice and snow forest; if there is a white one, the white one will be the facial tissue on the table, and the red one will be the hot Dongpo pork across the casserole. ... So, I hate "me"... I lost my family and got into the wrong profession, worked overtime and got injured at work... They are all a cover for being gay! Point angrily! I don't like Suzaku either. He was tangled up in personal issues, and he had a clear mind on his career path (family, friendship, and love), but he still had to take a self-destructive path for "me". In the end, he was able to achieve a satisfactory result with bumps and bumps. My favorite is Bai Ye, who is decisive all his life and cannot escape from confusion. On the Donghuang Tower, he cries at the end of the road. Finally, we look at the rivers and lakes, and forget about the rivers and lakes. In the third month of Yangguan, in front of the old friend's house, I left the Grain Rain wine, pure and bright. On the 3P road, he escaped completely, he was so handsome and handsome, and compared with the other two by a few blocks ( ̄ヘ ̄ Baiye, where have you been? Are you looking for your own braised pork, or are you rushing to my side to become a monk with him (put your hands together) Suzaku and "I" were sent to Tianzhu by my cannon fodder.