Transmigrated as a Footman

I also felt that Mr. Bai seemed to have been attracted to Xiao Jin earlier.

It feels a bit anticlimactic

Where did Mr. Bai go? Is this how it ends?

I said why did you end it like this? You could still write a lot more, and there are still some things that you haven't explained clearly. I've also read that article, but after reading part of it I couldn't read it anymore. The introduction to the story was buried too deep, and it was boring to read. It didn't attract me, but the language was still good. On the other hand, the author's article, although he also buried most of the clues, was not nervous and wrote slowly and leisurely. It looked pretty good, but some places were not explained clearly. 1 I thought he was a supporting actor, but he turned out to be a charlatan. 2 Doesn't Master Bai's attitude towards Jin'er affect his relationship with Jin'er's father? Yan has no opinion on this at all. 3. Dad Yan is really awesome, but they are all side descriptions. 4 In the end, the Yan family won, but I don't understand what Mr. Bai facilitated. What does it have to do with Jin'er's father? 5 And Li Chongying didn't explain to him Finally, I definitely think that the author has the ability to write a very good article that is completely original.

Sprinkle flowers~ But how was the dilemma resolved in the end...

It's really interesting to watch these people bickering. To be honest, when I was in school, I often copied passages from famous people's articles. If I used them well, I would get compliments. In fact, the leader's articles are quite good. Occasionally I quote other people's articles, maybe because I want to be lazy and don't think too much. Why bother to hold on to them? Everyone reads the article for fun. Why are you so serious? Maybe next time you can copy a piece of the leader's article to get revenge!

Overall, the writing is good and the story is good. Correct what is wrong and stick with it. It would be a shame to give up like this.

Jin'er should have the right to speak only if she is good at martial arts, otherwise she will be abused by others. Now that I have kung fu, I can at least defend myself.

It's time to meet his love rival... Yan Yu has no idea what to do with Xiao Jin'er who has developed skills.

Leave a message, updated again, very good, very interesting story, keep up the good work