A Little Ration on the Island

Claw, oh my, I really look forward to what happens after the blue dry food becomes stronger.

Nice!! I also wanted to see their sweet daily life, but it ended lol

Lan Qianliang: "Can I also pick up yang and replenish yin?" Hahahahahahahahaha

Laughing so hard hahahahaha

The chase is over! Spread flowers spread flowers

Emmm, the following are purely personal feelings. I think the character design is quite distinctive, an upright demon cultivator x a veteran spiritual cultivator, but I still feel that the characters are a bit too thin. For example, their pasts can be detailed in more detail, and their interpersonal relationships can enrich the characters. In addition, the plot is also a bit simple. The part where dry food is suspended from death can be more harsh. For example, the psychological description after being saved but almost not saved, the panic after being frightened, anger, etc. Can be added a little more. Finally, there are still some situations that are anticlimactic and have nothing to say, so keep up the good work!

It's finished, it looks good, I like it

Come from next door and support me.

52.3% Of blue dry food has been beaten into blue text.

Hey hey hey, the fish is so big that I can't swallow it in one bite