
Demon Slayer Fanfic: Onikiri
鬼灭同人「鬼切」
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46Chapters
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鬼灭同人「鬼切」
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The recent lack of updates is not because I have given up, but because I have become a close contact inexplicably and am quarantined. I have to do nucleic acid tests every day and have to be quarantined for another seven days. So it will be suspended for almost another seven days.
During the period when he was unable to communicate with anyone except Giyu, did Onikiri interact more with Giyu? After all, this setting of "only you can see me, only I can talk to you" is perfect for accumulating favorability.
The Valentine's Day special is really sweet! But as expected, I am still looking forward to the relationship between Onikiri and Giyu in the main story. Of course, the relationship between the two people will probably not develop quickly, but a girl who is divine, powerful and somewhat ignorant, and a girl who is naive but extremely determined, I always feel that it will be very interesting to get along with each other.
It is a rare fan who carefully lays out the plot and foreshadowing, and is also more rigorous in setting the historical time. The writing is very readable and concise. The setting of the heroine (who uses human beliefs and prayers as the source of her power, and seems to have a certain degree of divinity) is actually more difficult to write, because the emotional feelings of this type of character can easily give people a sense of distance. But Da Da did a great job in portraying the character, and created a charm unique to this type of character. The part where Giyuu and Onikiri first met was written amazingly, and I look forward to the next development!
I always feel that Onikiri will lose control at some point, and then Giyuu pulls her back. But Onikiri's life experience is really complicated. It seems that her brother may also be on the opposite side of her?
The writing is very good, but Onikiri's life experience is still slowly being revealed, and some settings and characters are a bit confusing. But I guess it will become clear later on in the plot.
The battle scenes in this chapter are very wonderfully written. Although there is not much ink, it has a considerable sense of imagery. Onikiri's past is also being revealed bit by bit.
When I saw the part about "scabbard", I thought of Shiken's famous line about "scabbard". Let me give you some milk. Later, from the perspective of the volunteer, "That is a scene I will never forget even in hell." If the emotional line between two people develops in the direction of "soul friends" like Shijian, it would be really good. (PS: Just write according to your own ideas, I am only responsible for yy)
Hahaha, the author does not need to express special thanks. I have also written about fandom on other platforms. I am also aware of the pressure and difficulty of writing. Compared with likes and collections, most authors prefer feedback with content. Although demon slayer is a hot topic and there are many people who like giyuu, the original heroine will have an inherent disadvantage in terms of popularity. But good writing can always stand the test of time. Of course, I will comment positively only if I really like this article. Although I may not visit Jinjiang for a few days after school starts in two days, I will continue to follow this article.
I don't know if anyone is still watching~ I have been very busy recently due to personal reasons and have no time to update! In fact, the general content has been recorded in the memo. After the exam is completed in mid-June, daily updates will be resumed! For those of you who are still watching, please wait a little longer!