What? A puppy-like boy?
No, no, no. Absolutely not!
What? Readers like that?
Fine!
Shu Zhuyun, a newbie writer with no following who had only just gotten started, tapped at her computer and knocked on her head. Her mind was clearly full of hunky older guys with eight-pack abs and hormones to spare, so why did everyone want to read about a clingy younger guy who only knew how to act cute?
She didn't get it. Not at all...
I don't like it.
I can't do it.
I got carried away writing the first chapter and used first-person narration, but then it didn't feel quite right. The rest should be in third person, I think.
Theme: Live in the present.
