
A Nanke Dream: The Beginning of Fate
南柯·缘起
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- Completed
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- 168k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Ancient Era
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- 17d ago
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- JJWXC
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Hello, I came to read your article because of the fans Li Xunhuan. Your writing style is very good, but it is not suitable for writing about fans. You have lowered Li Xunhuan's realm from "saint" to "human". Li Xunhuan in the original work is dedicated and passionate. Once he likes someone, he will stay with him until death. He is somewhat self-righteous and noble, but he also has tolerance and masochistic "abandonment" that ordinary people cannot achieve. Some people say that he treats women like clothing. I disagree with this. He respects people, but love is indeed not the most important thing in his heart, because love is selfish and saints are selfless, so it is really difficult for me to accept that Li Xunhuan let go of Lin Shiyin so easily, and in such a way He loves Nanke with a frivolous attitude. His love is deep, fierce and pure. His love is not just about love, friendship, and family affection. It seems that the proportion in his heart is higher. His character will never make his parents angry for a woman, let alone bring shame to his elder brother and Shiyin. (In ancient times, if a widow remarried or his fiancée was abandoned, he would be ridiculed.) According to his temperament, even if he likes Nanke, he will treat Nanke like Lin Shiyin in the original novel (even if he loves deeply, he only gives silently, even if it hurts, he has to bear it) or like Sun Xiao Like red (you obviously have feelings, but you have to escape, at least at the beginning). In a word, the Li Xunhuan you wrote is good compared to some fans, but it is still deviating from the original work. I suggest you change the name of "him" to be original, so that this article will be really good. Let me finally ask weakly: Is Nanke going to be transformed into Lin Xianer?
Take a look at it in one go It can be said that this is the Li Xun Huan's novel with the most Gu Long original style that I have ever read. I love the author's writing style. I changed the heroine but I feel that it is more suitable for Li Xun Huan. Only in this way can the two people understand each other and stand side by side in the future. In fact, when I first read the original novel, I felt that Lin Shiyin and Li Xun Huan were not very compatible. Lin Shiyin was beautiful, virtuous, and smart, but Lin Shiyin hoped to get what she wanted from the beginning. Li Xunhuan's life is different from Li Xunhuan's wishes and ambitions. We can understand the origin of Li Xunhuan's love for Lin Shiyin and his lifelong love after losing it. However, now in the author's article, there is a Nanke who met Li Xunhuan earlier than Lin Shiyin, who can understand Li Xunhuan better than Lin Shiyin, and who even matches Li Xunhuan's temperament and philosophy. It is natural that Li Xunhuan would turn to Nanke. Nanke is a strong, stubborn, kind-hearted and even a little self-abased child, but there are women who are very courageous and hard-working, women like kapok. I believe that under the guidance of Wang Lianhua, such a woman will grow into a towering tree that can stand shoulder to shoulder with Li Xunhuan in the future. I'm really looking forward to the second part, and hope it will be released as soon as possible. The plot is so inconsistent and really makes me want to keep my appetite. I really hope to see what kind of progress they will have after they reunite, and how A Fei and the others will appear!
Don't you think about updating the second part? Damn it?
It's great... Well... Luckily I watched the ending first... It turned out to be a sinkhole!
Regarding Li Xunhuan, I feel that he is a person in love. Although he gave up Lin Shiyin, which was both unfortunate and lucky, otherwise he would not have a perfect love. Although Sun Xiaohong is not the most beautiful, she is the most suitable for Li Xunhuan and can bring warmth, understanding and warmth to him. Even if he, Lin Shiyin and Li Xunhuan get married, they are just a couple, determined by their personalities. Therefore, Nan Ke is more suitable for him than Lin Shiyin. I hope the author will write a second part and give them a bright future. I hope that Nan Ke, who has completed his studies, will meet Li Xunhuan again.
So there won't be a second part of this article? QAQ No matter what others say, I still really like this article. It would be a pity that there is no second part. I have been thinking about the second QAQ of this article for so many years
The promised second part is here, dear. .
What about the promised second part /(ㄒoㄒ)/~~
Does the near future mean within ten years...
Please give me the second part... = =