[Harry Potter] To My Beloved Tom Riddle

First of all, I want to give the author a big hug. After all, HP fans are all doing it for love, so it's not easy to finish it. What's more, this is the first time I've seen this kind of joke. The author can write it completely without cheating. It's really not easy! ! ! Next, let's talk about your views as a reader. I didn't feel the pain of be in this ending. After reading the whole article, I only felt that Sabin and Tom had been having fierce quarrels, constant conflicts, ineffective communication and Sabin's weirdness. It was logical and self-consistent. On the contrary, it made me feel that the two of them were freed. In my opinion, the protagonist Sabin is an innocent and cruel person, innocent to others and cruel to tom. During the orphanage period, as an adult, she confessed about her magic power even though she knew the dangers of magic exposure and Mrs. Cole was not that friendly. Then she wanted to give Tom a complete home but in a "for your own good" way, which reversely promoted Tom's emotions of constant rejection and over-reliance on Sabin. The article has many strange logical self-consistencies, such as the secret love between C and Sabin, the over-blackening of Slytherin, or the over-exaggeration of Slytherin's negative side. If the author of the life of the brothers in the Snake House had not been so careless in portraying the life of the brothers in the Snake House, and added effective communication, Tom would be more affectionate towards his brother. Maybe the author could be less aggressive about his brother's feelings towards Tom, and I sincerely feel that the two protagonists have been quarreling during their exchanges, and Sabin has been forcing Tom's feelings. It is logical and self-consistent to write Tom's resurrection and loss of emotions in the fourth grade, and it is actually reasonable. If the author's intention is to make a person atone for Tom's sins, the above content may not be read. Finally, I would like to give some great advice to the author. I saw the author's great message in the forum. To be honest, I didn't notice that this was a new article at first because I felt that the article was a bit broken and it felt like a second grade article. I hope the author will continue to write more articles. Good writing skills are learned through practice. Dark history can be modified or locked. It's still the same problem. 1. The dialogues between the characters in the article are constantly in conflict, with constant contradictions, and the emotions are always very high. When they don't subside, the characters' personalities become very strange. The second protagonist Sabin's character changes mainly rely on his own inner suggestions, such as the Horcrux issue, so there is a feeling that Sabin is crazier than Tom. 3. The protagonist Sabin reads very strangely, a bit like sabi. Come on, do your best?

Sabin: my silly baby tom

? ! ! I was shocked, no, I thought it was he! ! This, this is the end? ! ! !

Is it all over? No extras?

Behind the innocent appearance is terrible selfishness, self-motivated giving, and insistence on having one's own way. In fact, it didn't have to be that way. Confusing behavior

To be honest, the ending is different from what I thought at the beginning... Ah, the important thing is that I really like this book.

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Sabin's future will be without Tom. I don't know if Tom will regret it or if he will remember it. He probably doesn't remember it. It's not that Sabin wouldn't say that. For the rest of their lives, they will neither remember each other nor see each other again. That's the past that only one person remembers

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