
My Years as a General
我当将军那些年
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63Chapters
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Madam, I went to find out. JJ typesetting is determined by the author himself, so you can really leave a blank line between paragraphs. It's too dense.
Come on (???_??)?, Let's get fatter? (????)
Dad, I would like to ask if you have any ideas for period novels, which are about the educated youths going to the countryside in the 1960s and 1970s. I like this theme very much, and I also like your writing style. I have basically read all the fanfics you wrote, because I like these TV series. The relationship between the male and female protagonists you created is very warm, and the female protagonist is also relatively self-reliant, which is my favorite type, so I would like to ask if you have any ideas for period novels.
The writing is good, but the layout is too dense. Pay attention to the blank lines between paragraphs.
Finally I know what's wrong. Madam, your page seems to be divided into sections very closely. I can't see it in other articles. I scratch my head and feel very tired after reading it.
Madam, what you wrote is too serious (laughing and crying)