Loki's Smile

Archeology ten years later!!!

It seems that I need to change my habit. I can't just look at the word "danmei" in the classification, but also whether it is a tragedy and what the subject matter is. I can't watch it every time only to find out that it is a thriller and suspense. . . . . .

Reminds me of science fiction writer Lin Xi and the period when I was fond of science fiction detective stories~ The article has been collected, please read slowly

I haven't had time to take a closer look. Let's scatter the flowers first.

When I saw the spaceship, I thought of science fiction... But I love Norse mythology! Another note: Because Westerners have very long names, I can't remember who everyone is (I'm a fool TAT)

I said I would accept it, so I sent you a flower first~

Tanmei Detective, have you seen it? Hehe, I took it away!!!

Huster and Fistonfo are so pitiful... Has the author ever thought of writing a story about the afterlife for them? O(∩_∩)O~ The background music of the last chapter is also very good, it sounds even more sad T. T 'I've been waiting for you for a long time... Yes. ' T. T Can this be considered together... It feels like very little happened between them, but I can't help but feel sorry for them and feel sad for them. It seems that they were only together for a few months in the early days, and then separated. Later, they only met together at work. Fei was so pitiful at first, always looking for and waiting for Xio, but in the end she was heartbroken and thought Xio was dead... Later, when Huster pretended to be a female forensic doctor, Fei didn't recognize him... They just recognized each other, and Huster committed suicide... How pitiful! Until the end, it was Fei who was waiting for Xio to pick him up T. T I cried at the ending, thinking it wouldn't be any more sad, but when I saw the words "I've been waiting for you for a long time", I couldn't help but blush... But this time I still felt a little warm in my heart. Please make me think they are together!

Well, I like detective novels very much. It can be said that the author's novels did not meet my expectations. Maybe it's because I read a lot and am a little picky. Don't be angry. I saw that Fox commented on your appearance, and you have almost changed it. I want to talk about the structure of the article. The author has already finished it, so I am just talking about it, and it is just my own feeling. There may be deviations. I hope the author will understand. First of all, the murder has already happened when the author begins. As for the deceased, we all know about him from the memories of everyone later. When reading the article, I felt that his character was a bit strange. However, these memories give people a somewhat scattered feeling, always interrupting the article, causing the article's structure to feel loose. At the end, I suddenly realized that there was another Huster, and the previous memories became even more confusing, and I couldn't tell who was who. In addition, I can see that the author mostly uses the form of other people's narratives when it comes to emotions, but not many actually describe actions to express emotions. The only couple in the article who seem to be in love are the female forensic doctor and Fei, but the author's description of them in the article always stops after touching a little bit, which makes people feel very unsatisfied. Well, Dada is actually very good at capturing the readers' emotions. Whether it's the female forensic doctor He Fei or Xio He Fei, if they work harder and write more, maybe the effect will be better. Furthermore, if the author is a writer who places less emphasis on emotion and more on reasoning, I don't think so. In the author's entire article, the police chief's reasoning is not the highlight, and even the final method of committing the crime is hurriedly described. The setting of the killer is layered with suspense, but the method of committing the crime lacks tension and does not give people the feeling of 'so that's how it is'. However, this aspect has been made up for by the emergence of clones, but the entire reasoning is still lacking. In addition, the author actually put in a lot of effort. I feel that the structure of the story is still very large, and the ending of 100,000 words is a bit hasty. I still like the author's article, but I hope that if the author has time, he can open up the structure and show it properly. However, the author is still very good. The setting of this article is indeed unexpected. I was very sad in the end~ The author should work harder in the future~

Hey, the vow "Let's go to heaven together", I originally thought it had a heartwarming ending, but the author kept mentioning it, and I realized that it was actually used to trick tears, ~~~~(>_<) I really, really like their conversation, and it was even more painful after watching the extra episode. I really want them to be together... Let Fistonfer chase him out. T Author, leave me alone, I will grumble on my own. Fiston Buddha has been waiting for a long time, waiting and waiting alone, so pitiful...