Ground Frost

Like this very much. I have read a lot of cat and mouse articles, and I always feel that there are many sweet articles about gentle cats and arrogant mice. Cats are among the top ten good men, modest and gentle as gentle as jade. Rats are quirky, unruly and cute. Sweet articles are always comforting to read, but sometimes they can feel a bit boring, so once in a while you see an article full of heroics and you can't put it down. In fact, seeing Xiaobai using a knife made me like this article even more. The three words Bai Yutang should not only represent the willful but sensible little mouse that everyone loves, he is also a righteous man and a resounding man. Many articles simply say that Xiaobai is proud and aloof, but there are few that can truly reflect this in the article. The young knight on the snowy mountain looking at the ground frost is the scene that impressed me the most in this article. Zhan Zhao's image is far different from the common one. The Zhan Zhao here should not be Yu Mao but Nan Xia. How can a gentle knight get along in the world? Although the name "Nan Xia" sounds much gentler, the real Nan Xia Zhan Zhao is also a person who will not show mercy to bad guys. There is no tofu and no love between children, but the deep love between the two is not inferior at all, and that bloody first kiss is even more loving>< In short, the author's writing is very consistent with the imagination of an originalist, I like it very much

First of all, let me express my surprise at Brother Chunliang's long comment. . . . Sweat. . . Thank you very much. Speaking of which, it's rare for someone's articles to have long comments. . . Sweat~~ Ground Frost is probably one of the earlier articles I wrote. . . My understanding at that time is still biased now, just like Zhan Zhao in my heart was very strong at that time ~ now. . . Subtlety is much better than before. . Sweat~ Actually, Zhan Zhao in Po Sha is closer to my current understanding~ Some people have said that Zhan Zhao in Po Sha is the best. . . Hey-hey! The plot of "Deshuang" does have a big problem. In fact, after I finished writing it, I felt very frustrated. Wu Dao really failed in shaping it, so in the later desert, I put a lot of effort into other supporting characters ~ As for the monotonous plot. . . I feel even more helpless. I feel that Di Shuang can be regarded as a martial arts article, and the fighting parts in it are very enjoyable. . . Of course, I will never admit that I am the queen, I am absolutely the biological father When I first wrote about Di Shuang, it was because of my enthusiasm. Now, I feel that I felt very good at that time. I am writing about Bai Yutang without any burden. I am writing about Bai Yutang that I understand. Many people read my articles and think that the Fifth Master I write is neither from the book nor from TV, laugh~~ I think what I write is a synthesis of the two. I like the Fifth Master on TV very much, but he is inevitably a little impulsive and irritable. As for me, Bai Yutang should be an extremely cold person if he is not in front of acquaintances. How could the perverse Golden Mouse roar and laugh at every turn~ However, Qiwuli is also the only version of the Fifth Master that I recognize. I have never had the opportunity to watch the early version, so the Fifth Master in my heart is like this. He has a very handsome appearance, but he also has ruthless means~ Zhan Zhao, in Di Shuang, is more like a protector. Maybe it's because I am partial to Wu Ye. Zhan Zhao's sharp edge here is not obvious, but he is definitely not a foil. It was not until Broken Sand that I was able to adjust the focus of my writing. Zhan Zhao there is much fuller than in Di Shuang! The leaves in the ground frost are a foreshadowing, and the real explanation is in the broken sand at the back. . . Actually, I didn't explain it clearly in Posha, I should put it in Mo Shu~~ The best thing I have written about the Fifth Master is Cat and Mouse~ I'm posting it today~~ Thank you again, Mr. Chunliang, for your long review!!

After reading the first paragraph, you can tell that the author is a rat fan. As a Zhao fan, well, keep reading. . . The text of this article is quite simple. There is not too much modification, but the smoothness, comfort and smoothness revealed from inside to outside are by no means an easy achievement. Such a classical martial arts style is really rare nowadays. It can be used in a plain but not bland, simple but not crude way. I highly praise it. Let's talk about the characters. After reading the entire article, my first impression was indeed correct, lol. In this article, Xiao Bai's portrayal is better than Zhao Zhao. Although Zhao in this article is actually not bad. When reading cat/mouse stories, the first fear here is stepping on one to lift the other. No matter whether the cat is stepped on to lift the mouse, or the mouse is stepped on to lift the cat, I can't stand it, laugh. The so-called passionate life-and-death friendship between men and the careless attitude of so many children. If you want to see those who are trapped in love and want to live or die, you will shudder. . . The taste here is light~ This article is well written by Ji Shuang. "The only one in the world who understands Zhan Zhao and can dance with him is Bai Yutang. The one who knows his pride is Zhan Zhao. The only one who praises his arrogant and unyielding stubbornness is Zhan Zhao. They are close friends, close friends, and each other's support." "Zhan Zhao, if you keep hiding from me for those inexplicable things, I will kill all the unnecessary people you care about to see why you can hide from me." "Even if Zhan Zhao is ruthless to him, he will definitely go to Kaifeng and fulfill his duties as a man. But today, if Zhan Zhao just breaks off their friendship because of some unnecessary secular etiquette, Bai Yutang will definitely kill everything Zhan Zhao cares about with a handful of ground frost!" Shoot the crime! This kind of Bai Yutang is the ruthless and handsome man with so much arrogance! Such an open mind is the kind of spirit that belongs between cat and mouse. Before ambiguity, one must first be a close friend and confidant. If we can't even have the most basic friendship between each other, what's the point of going further? I digressed, let's bring this article back The mutual relationship is well explained, and the two people can be separated in detail, especially Xiaobai. As mentioned above, the text of this article follows a simple line, and there are not many direct descriptions of the characters. However, the few places are the finishing touch and very exciting, such as Xiaobai's story about killing people. "The blush returned to the face because of the movement just now, and the sharp and narrow eyes were very cold. Although no words were spoken, the ruthless smile on the lips was like a ghostly prophecy, which captured people's soul." Free and unrestrained after understanding the mission: "White clothes are better than snow, half stained by dust, with a free and unrestrained face. Feeling this openness, even the smile becomes one-third proud and seven-point carefree." I couldn't help but sigh when I saw it, the dazzling, rebellious and heroic Xiaobai was right in front of me Wipe your saliva, who says cat fans can't spend time with noobs? Xiaobai Xiaobai I love you Ahem, let's write about Zhaozhao again. "Zhan Zhao's gentleness is actually a silent weapon. Those clear, innocent, proud and unyielding eyes can hurt people!" This description really offended me. He is so foolish and stupid, but Zhaozhao is Jiang Zi, upright and awe-inspiring, with such a majestic power that all evil spirits will retreat when they see him!!!!! Continue to be crazy. . . However, by the middle of the article, Zhaozhao's image is slightly different from what this person had in mind, for example: "With hatred in his eyes, he vowed to cut that Taoist into pieces!" Xiaohan, Zhao here is calm but measured, energetic and enthusiastic. When Xiaobai is injured, he will be angry and hateful. He will want to kill Xiaobai for revenge, but he will be divided into pieces. . . A little drop of sweat~ But no problem. She always makes compromises, even if she has a slender waist like a little daughter-in-law, even if she occasionally impulsively cuts the enemy into pieces, it's actually nothing In addition, the details in this article are also wonderfully written. The first time was sweet. Zhao Zhao drinks water from Xiao Bai's hand, Zhao Zhao takes the opportunity to lick Xiao Bai, and Xiao Bai frowns and holds back from getting angry after being licked. It's so cute! Ahhhh~~ Sweet but not greasy, extremely natural intimacy, the highest state of ambiguity!!!!!! The second time I was moved, it was heartache. "You, Mr. Bai, I'm not dead yet, don't show me such a sad face." It really hurts my heart to see such a proud Xiaobai, even though I know he wants people to look up to him, not to love him. The mentality of a nymphomaniac's daughter~ I couldn't help but think again and again, this kind of Xiaobai is the fifth master Bai that Xiao has been thinking about for more than ten years The third touch was a smile. "Bai Yutang glanced at Zhan Zhao who was looking at the statue. He felt unhappy when he saw the dark red front of his red robe, so he rummaged through it, selected a high-quality blouse and threw it away. Without saying much, he just said: 'Put it on, that official robe is an eyesore.'" I don't know about Xiami, but what I thought of was the poor person when he was teasing Yan Chasan. Continuing to digress, how on earth could such a clean-obsessed Xiaobai tolerate being so sloppy in the first place? Poof Ahem, maybe Xiao Bai is not really a germophobe, but the handsome man in white who remains in my mind is undoubtedly not from the mortal world. Therefore, when such a person sees Zhao Zhao covered in blood, he will ask him to change his clothes no matter how bad the situation is, laugh~ A little trivial matter, Xiaobai's strict temper, willful and cute personality comes out, ah The fourth time, read the name. I have never seen anyone be filled with a sense of pride when he speaks his name, but Bai Yutang can. Every time he reads his name, Zhan Zhao can feel the unique pride and pride in him. This is something that Xiami doesn't like, but it's all stated in this sentence. Xiao Xiang thought of Xiaobai's expression of reciting his own name and continued to have a nymphomaniac attack. . . . Don't disturb others The infatuation is over and the bricks begin. 1. Plot. This article may be the weakness of 90% of fan fiction. When I was reading the article, I was holding back and wanted to take a photo. When I saw the author's confession at the end of the article, I was discouraged The author has said that this is an introduction. As a long introduction, the original problem is no longer a problem. . . . . . Moreover, the plot of this article can be said to be small but comprehensive. Silence~~~~~~The shrimps will come out later, thinking. . . 2. Abuse. The author also said this, when writing about a martial arts background, pain is inevitable. Unfortunately, here we also look at the origins of martial arts, from Lao Liang to Lao Wen, and now to the new martial arts heroes such as Xiao Li. No one is merciful when they torture people, but the premise of their torture is mostly necessary. The so-called necessity means that the enemy is strong enough. What about the enemies in this article? That hypocritical Taoist, sigh, maybe he was too successful in pretending before, at least he didn't give me that strong feeling, and this person's wisdom, continue to sigh~ I felt guilty when I saw the official, hey~~ Therefore, it was a bit depressing to see Zhao Zhao and Xiao Bai suffer miserably at his hands. Although, Sobai performed quite well despite the pain. In short, it is okay to be sadistic, but if more effort can be spent on a certain Taoist priest, it will be much better. Although, it is very annoying and boring to create a villain that you hate. By the way, Mouye's portrayal is much better than that of the Taoist priest. Although the scene of raising the tripod is heartbreaking, it doesn't feel like abuse because the arrangement is good. Given the situation and character of Mouye, he would indeed act like this. Thinking about it, where is the abuse? For example, the magical poison at the end, ahem, I still didn't understand that it was necessary to add a touch of purple sauce for the shrimps. . . If it has anything to do with the continuation of the article, I didn't mention it. If not. . . Put the lid on the pot and squeak: superfluous~ By the way, don't tell me, there are many people in Cat and Mouse who have been tortured more excessively than this one. If Jiang Zi told me, I would vomit blood and die. . . Take a look at the writing, character details and even the structural arrangement of this article, if you still want to compare. . . I continued to vomit blood. . . . Finally, to pick a thorn, Xiami said that his arms are not able to move well, pff~~~ The poster must have seen too much ruthlessness, so he laughed and ran away

I have always felt that Bai Yutang should use the sword, be domineering, arrogant, fierce, and chivalrous.

The kitten sends Willa

Thumbs up! I found something good today! Although I have no objection to Xiaobai using "drawing shadows", I prefer to use a knife for the reason the author said in the previous chapter! The knife is more domineering than the sword. In my mind, Xiaobai is not a "chivalrous person", so the domineering knife is more suitable for Xiaobai! Without further ado, let's continue reading…

All the cat and mouse stories I have read are about Zhan Zhao being injured again and again, making people lament that his vitality is comparable to Xiao Qiang, but this one is about Bai Yutang being injured, which is fun~~

Sweat. . That sound of "so refreshing" instantly reminded me of Water Margin~~

The writing is very good, but I still think it is better for Bai Yutang to use painting, or he is more chic to use sword. It is all a personal opinion.

Didn't Bai Yutang use Xueying? Strange, wasn't the Zhan Lu used by Zhan Zhao replaced by Ding Yuehua? Why is everything in chaos?