A Carefree Wanderer

Ps: In order to prevent being criticized, some of the titles of other time-travel novels are not correct. Welcome to take your seat Dear Mo Da, I really like this article. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . I came here specially to add extra points to the long review. I have been reading time-travel novels since junior high school. As for the BG part, I have read not even a hundred but eighty time-travel themed novels. Haha, although this is not something to be proud of, I just want to interpret the evaluation from the perspective of a mature time travel reader. Check out this great article. I found this article in other places a few days ago. After reading it, I rushed here to make up for it. I read it. The serialization date and number of hits are a bit unfair to "Xing". It seems that I didn't see it on the Jinjiang rankings during that period, so I missed it when it was serialized, which is a pity. I feel that this article is very detailed in the description of the character's personality and psychology, and the tangled emotions are It turns out that it affects the reader's psychology very much. Unlike many time-traveling articles that crudely develop the characters' psychology in order to create the image of the heroine, the Madonna. It's a struggle to do what you do. In terms of psychological description, among the many BG time travel stories I have read (excluding the BL part), that is The transition and characterization of the psychological description in "Love#Can Give Up" are above the level of this article. When I first read the article, I felt that the heroine might be that People who are cool or willful are very common (such as "Bai # Zhuan", "Postscript # Thousand Years", etc.~~~~) But they don't seem to be that way. I was reading some idiotic article like "Not #Being a Concubine", so I read it as a temporary read to pass the time before going to bed, but... Been watching it all night…=_= It seems that many people have no feelings for Dong Bo, but I think he is a highlight of this article. The heart-warming photos between him and the heroine The emotional scene in Feidi is very exciting, and it is also crucial in promoting the development of the emotional clues between the heroine and An Qing. I think the climax of "The Line" is in the fifty to sixty chapters where the emotional entanglement between the three of them is discussed. The author's delicate feelings This can be seen in the processing of papermaking, including the emotional aspects of the male and female protagonists in popular works such as " #" and " #" The processing level can only be expressed by the words "very average". By the way, I really like Dong Bo. Not only is he used to seeing It's just a time-travel novel where the male protagonist is a general, a marquis, and an imperial palace bishop. His appearance is a clear spring, especially When his values are slowly revealed in front of the readers in Chapter 60 and Chapter 60, whether it is selfishness or coldness, this character becomes more obvious. Real and plump. In the end, when he protected the heroine without hesitation, he even played the emotional card gorgeously. The character It was sublimated quite naturally. And when the male protagonists of many novels do this, I just think, "Oh, that's how he should be." Generally speaking, the plot of this article is not too cliché. The male protagonist and male protagonist have their own strengths and weaknesses, which is very eye-catching. The copywriting is full of It failed. When I didn't know, I thought the male protagonist was Shu Yan who didn't have any characteristics at first (I didn't blame him wrongly. At first, this kind of character appeared... There are quite a lot of them in the Vietnamese version, but thanks to the author, he finally got BT and mutated in the direction of the final boss. This setting It's really uncommon). If it is a comprehensive score, overall it can be ranked among all the BG time travel stories I have read. It's in the top fifteen, although the emotional entanglements and psychological descriptions of the characters are second or third, but overall... The fly in the ointment is that, first, the clues in the full text are not very clear. The clues in the novel are quite important. One of the clues in "Xing" At the beginning, a lot of ambiguous scenes between Shu Yan and the heroine are described, but later there is no explanation at all or the explanation is very anticlimactic. This one has It's a bit unreasonable. Although the emotional drama of life may be like this, in the novel of the drama... Although in "Yueying##" In the early stage, there were many ambiguous scenes where the male protagonist cooperated with the female protagonist, but after all, he was the male protagonist, although I felt sorry for the male protagonist. Point. But do you think Shu Yan, a pseudo-boss, could have had so many scenes with the heroine in the early stage? Even if it is for contrast The mutation is a bit too fussy. The negative teaching material is the famous BL time travel novel "#", the emotional drama comparison between the male supporting actor and the protagonist. The male protagonist has N times more emotional scenes. This later period has a huge impact. The emotional thread between the male protagonist and the protagonist collapses and cannot be connected, causing the male protagonist to The main article was not popular, so the number one article with 100,000 clicks per chapter fell into disgrace that year!!!!!!!!!! Infinite resentment Secondly, because the emotional scenes were too nuanced and detailed in the later period, the overall plot lacked tension a little, and the previous scenes were too subtle. The foreshadowing characters are too casual, such as Yi Yang, Pu Zhiming, etc.~~~ This may be the reason why some readers later had a problem. It's probably because of the bad ending. I have coded so many words~~ I hope Mo Da can read it~~ Looking forward to your new work~~ I am optimistic about you~~ I think you are quite capable, much better than some SB writers on the current rankings

Well, actually I really want to see Bobo's, hang~

The ghost world can also be maintained. . . . O(╯□╰)o

Xiao Xuanxuan~~~~~~Why did you die so early

Committed suicide? (#`')Depend on

Good article, like it Poor An Qing, he became a widower after only a few good years with his beloved. Fortunately, in the end, he could be together forever, making up for all the reunions he owed while alive, and fulfilling his eternal promise to her.

It's so wonderful, now we can really be together forever.

Very good article, I finished reading it, thank you author~ Pay attention to the new pit and keep up the good work

To be honest, it is much better than many v-articles. I finished reading it on my mobile phone. . . I specifically searched for DaDe's column, but it's a pity that there is only this one. . . After thinking about it, I decided to come back and leave a message. Thank you Mo Damei for writing so well!

Funny yet slightly sad ending, I like it