Critiquing Love

Updated daily at 9 a.m. My next novel is So I Had No Choice But to Stop Being Her Moonlight. It's about a carefree, sunny girl and a gloomy, disabled beauty. The blurb is below. If you're interested, please add it to your favorites. 1. That autumn, as the leaves fell, Gu Nianyin transferred to Nancheng Middle School. She was cool and aloof, as radiant as the moon and the wind. She topped the entrance exams and quickly became the school's acknowledged beauty and the teachers' model student. Lin Xi, meanwhile, sat at the very back of the classroom, listlessly flipping through comics as she waited for the teacher to criticize her for her plummeting grades. In front of her, classmates discussed how they might win the favor of this untouchable beauty. They were worlds apart. No one would ever have pictured Lin Xi and Gu Nianyin together. So no one expected that one day they would stand side by side. A photo of them embracing in an alley set everyone talking. And no one knew that they had done things even more intimate than that embrace. The shy sweetness of youth had long since melted between their lips. 2. Later, one went north, while the other went abroad. The bitter wind on the Siberian Plateau chilled Gu Nianyin to the bone as she stood in the vast snowy wilderness and called Lin Xi. Once, twice... On the nineteenth call, the person on the other end finally answered. But all she got was: "Gu Nianyin, don't contact me again. I never loved you in the first place." No one knew that Lin Xi had approached Gu Nianyin with an ulterior motive from the very beginning. And Gu Nianyin had known from the start. 3. Everyone knew that Gu Nianyin, the new president of the Lin Group, was cold-blooded and decisive. As soon as she took office, she had the old guard completely under control, earning everyone's submission. On the day Gu Nianyin returned to Nancheng, everyone threw her a welcome banquet to curry favor with her. She moved through the party with calm ease, poised and unflappable. Her refined, distinguished appearance made everyone steal glances at her. Yet this very woman publicly hauled someone from the opposite banquet hall into a restroom and pinned her against the wall. Her eyes bloodshot, she demanded in a furious voice, "Lin Xi, you dared to come back." "Now that you're back, don't even think of leaving again. Not in this lifetime." Important reminder: The protagonists kiss as adults in this blurb! We do not encourage minors to date early! School life in the early chapters, adult life later A shameless little troublemaker x a gloomy, untouchable beauty Blurb written on December 20, 2021 Revised on November 5, 2023 This novel will be published behind a paywall on December 2, 2023. A hefty chapter of over ten thousand characters will be released then. Please show your support! Muah OvO Coming next, So I Had No Choice But to Stop Being Her Moonlight: Chi Qian transmigrated into a book, becoming the disabled villain Shi Jinlan's moonlight, the kind who was fated to be sacrificed. She was supposed to meet Shi Jinlan, fall in love, contribute one of the original story's few steamy scenes, and finally die to trigger Shi Jinlan's descent into darkness. Chi Qian: I understand all that, but... do I really have to do the steamy scene? System: Sorry, dear. It's the most important part of winning Shi Jinlan over. Shi Jinlan, unconscious and struggling in a nightmare, pressed her seawater-soaked body against Chi Qian. Her warm breath brushed past Chi Qian's ear, going straight to her heart. Chi Qian's heart stirred. Actually, I suppose I could... . Shi Jinlan was cold and unfeeling. She believed that if she had no value, people would abandon her, yet when she was at her lowest, someone took her in. This person not only cared for Shi Jinlan, whose legs were disabled, and massaged them to improve circulation, but even sold her family's heirloom bracelet to pay for treatment. It was thankless work with no reward. She was a complete fool. Shi Jinlan didn't like fools. She only wanted to use her: get better and take back her power. But when the assassins came after them again and Shi Jinlan watched Chi Qian disguise herself as her, panic suddenly seized her. Wearing Shi Jinlan's clothes, the fool smiled and let go of her hand, then resolutely leaped from the seaside cliff. Before making the sacrifice, she left Shi Jinlan with one last message: "Don't love me. I'm free now." That night, Shi Jinlan went mad. As she watched Chi Qian smiling while jumping off the cliff in her place, her eyes turned bloodshot. Her heart-wrenching anguish echoed through the cliffs, far surpassing what the script had planned. The one who kept saying she loved her was lying, while the one who only wanted to use her had fallen in love. . The moonlight sacrificed herself for love, and Shi Jinlan turned evil overnight. Her frenzied revenge nearly destroyed the world, and the System was powerless to stop her. Chi Qian completed her mission and left with a huge haul of points, traveling freely through different worlds and watching the drama unfold with her coworkers. But as Chi Qian enjoyed the show, she never imagined that the System would send her back to Shi Jinlan to stop her from destroying the world. That day, Shi Jinlan dragged Chi Qian back and gripped her throat. Before Chi Qian's eyes was a pair of blood-red eyes. Pressing her forehead against Chi Qian's, Shi Jinlan demanded hoarsely, again and again, day after day: "A Qian, do you love me or not?" Theme: Learn from past shortcomings and look forward to a better life