Li Jun, as portrayed by Duansheng,
was peerless in talent and unmatched in beauty.
In a society like that,
where could she go after taking off her boots?
Every Jun fan is left wondering,
and perhaps Duansheng was just as lost.
I cannot capture Li Jun's brilliant mind,
nor the world of possibilities hidden up her sleeves.
Su Yingxue,
who had been like a sister to Li Jun since childhood,
was later adopted as the Grand Tutor's daughter
and then personally named a junzhu by the Empress Dowager.
One can imagine she, too, was an incomparable beauty.
I'll try to write her story...
Come on, I really want to know the good times Li Mingtang and Su Yingxue will create together after they get married!
Knock! Come back soon! I'm waiting for you to come back!
In addition, since the previous chapters are all plots that readers are familiar with, it would be better to start with Yingxue being rescued. In addition, the "procrastination" mentioned above may be related to my personal dislike of Red Mansions. Please refer to it.
After a quick glance, the writing is really good and the creativity is pretty good. I just wish it could be more concise. For example, the dialogue suggestions for insignificant characters can be omitted, otherwise it will feel procrastinating.
It has been rewritten, so I can only wait impatiently, ugh~~
Under major changes, Updates paused.
I feel that sometimes Yingxue is to Lijun, just like Watson is to Sherlock Holmes... The key is whether the focus of the fight is on Lijun or Yingxue? If the focus is on Lijun, and Yingxue is just a pair of eyes used to look at Lijun (it is the role of Dr. Watson), then the three mountains of politics, military, and history have to be climbed... If the focus is on Yingxue, then the challenge of writing a long story about a character who "admires and depends on" another person is really big, because women who lack independence are not very popular nowadays... And if Yingxue is allowed to be independent, then Koke has to be considered from her standpoint. Lijun can't think too much about it. As for how she will become Lijun's assistant in the future, let's let Yingxue stand up first... In fact, before Yingxue and Lijun reunite, she has enough time and opportunity to complete her growth...
I always feel that if Yingxue digs hard, there should be a lot of things to write about. It's not necessary to compete with Lijun for being shrewd and capable, and to achieve great achievements. I think she can complement Lijun, Lijun should be rational, Yingxue can be emotional, Lijun is the best among thousands of people, while Yingxue can be the gentlest thought hidden in everyone's heart. Li Jun is stunningly talented and beautiful, reflecting the exquisite beauty of the snow and ice. Wait, let's see how Koke performs it. I hope there will be more plots where Lijun and Yingxue are together. Yingxue is not Lijun's appendage, and Lijun's excess advantages should not be attributed to her. Of course Yingxue has her own characteristics! So that he can stand alone outside Lijun's aura—— The male protagonist, Xiaoxiao, always feels very small. I don't know if my opinion will change if I change my name. Haha, the other two will be discussed later!
The military might be able to settle the matter with Lijun's gentle guidance. But politics is a bit unavoidable. After all, in my imagination, Yingxue is not a vase. But Lijun's extremely important assistant, Like a secretary-general, a diplomat, an intelligence analyst Many details that Lijun didn't have time to deal with were filtered and processed through her hands. As for the emotional drama, it should be my focus (after all, after all, this is the only thing left to write about, sweat!) But more of it is a friendship mixed with admiration and dependence on Lijun, who is only a small step away from GL. I haven't decided on the male protagonist yet, but there are three characters to choose from: Xiaoxiao, Haishan, and Wang Zhang (the last one has not been written yet). Now I am leaning towards Haishan, but in the end I don't know. Most of them I am casual.
I'll wait too! It will definitely be better if I write again! Of course, don't compare yourself to me. Building Molan requires a process. I intend to start with a low and mediocre beginning to pave the way for what follows—— Your Yingxue is different. She can safely bypass politics and military affairs, which have little to do with her. I think you can make Yingxue's story more beautiful. I wonder how you set up Yingxue's emotional difficulties?