The Evil God Who Goes to Jail

The long review is finished, but there are too many words, so I put it in the comment area! (I posted it once in Chapter 215, but it doesn't seem to be displayed. I'm posting it again...) Very beautiful! Very much to my liking! My favorite book in the past two years! It's been a long time since I've come across an online book that I liked so much that I would definitely buy it if it came out in physical form. The story is full of warmth and power, and tears filled my eyes several times while reading it. My lips are dead and my teeth are cold. 0 Teacher is still too good at writing Western fantasy. The chapter stories and multi-line narratives are very engaging, and the prison scene, which may seem boring at first, is also very lively and interesting, so much so that I felt a strong reluctance to leave it when the second half came to an end. The speed of reading the article slowed down again and again, and I really couldn't bear to end it! The overall structure and background settings of the story are also very complete. Basically every relic and setting that appears has played a role, and the foreshadowing is also very well recycled (except for the castle ghost and Eugene trapped in the painting, but the scribe's abilities are all in the painting and there is a high probability that they can be released... But I think the flaws are not hidden, and 98% of the settings can be recycled and the rebates are already perfect.) The two protagonists are perfect. The character, the six apostles, and the supporting characters of all sizes in the story are all very well created, and the way the main CP gets along is also very cute (I personally like this set). If you are a new viewer, it is recommended not to open the paragraphs before the reading progress reaches 1/3. It not only contains guidance on writing, finding faults, and even some spoilers of key plots, which greatly affects the experience, but the subsequent paragraphs and comments are much better. The following content contains character and plot spoilers, please read with caution. In fact, I personally don't like the copywriting of this book very much. That's because I read the Devil's book on the second day of last month and felt disappointed at the end of the story. I just happened to see the teacher's new article was finished, so I read it with the intention of eating a Western fantasy meal replacement. The result is that the whole story is shocking and beautiful. I'm also very glad that I read the entire story in one breath at the end and didn't forget the previous settings. So it is clear that the teacher of the Spring Festival Gala actually reminded a lot of content, and the unreasonable aspects that some readers questioned were actually repeatedly revealed in the previous article. The truth is actually not difficult to guess, but there are still some surprises. Because I read it in one sitting, for me everyone's portrayal was complete. Including Lyman, I saw a previous comment on the ending that felt that Lyman's portrayal as a clue character was a bit broken, but in fact, as I read along, I felt that it was very vivid and the growth line was very clear. A setting mentioned in the article is: "God chooses apostles who agree with his heart, and apostles also shape God with their own beliefs." Therefore, Lyman chooses those who have ideal sparks in their hearts and hope to use their own power to illuminate more people moving forward. This is the true character of Lyman. And every time the apostle grows up: he finds his true wish, obtains a new mission and moves forward under the guidance of the Book of Evil God. In fact, it also corresponds to every step of Lyman's growth, from seeing Selene who is unwilling to be a slave and pursuing freedom, to Toph who realizes the purpose of creation after witnessing the tragedy at the Mouth of the Abyss, to Silveira who stands up and fights with blood and fire to protect peace, to Stella who protects the ones she loves with her iron will, to Dorian who personally participates in the history of resistance with blood and sword struggles, and Aeser who never gives up on the love and greatness he has witnessed even after witnessing filth and betrayal, and firmly protects the true faith in his heart. The things that everyone wants to protect, the ideals they pursue, and the paths they follow are all witnessed by Lehmann and influence him. From the beginning, he just simply escaped from prison and wanted to regain his freedom, then he wanted to do something for the suffering people of this world, and then when Luna asked him if he wanted to save the world when he was liberating Xinglin City, he responded like a Faust: "You are so beautiful, please stop." This kind of growing character actually corresponds step by step to the image of the dawn in the faith legends he heard along the way. It was precisely because people struggled to live in the darkness that He felt that this world was beautiful, so He decided to stay in this world. He has always been a god who believes in human strength, human courage, and human greatness. To me, Lyman is very well-shaped, and the growth line also has a sense of destiny. In addition to being a god, as a human being, he loves to complain, has divergent thinking, has a rich imagination, loves to make jokes, and is also very cute. However, I do agree with the sparse emotional line mentioned in this comment. I really like the sense of gags about hurting friends, and I also like Luna's masculine character who loves to be jealous and act coquettishly. In the middle, I enjoyed the ambiguous relationship between the two when they were getting along in a road movie. The relationship between the two of them was so natural and so cute, just like two grown men. But the emotional ending at the end of the past life and the boss fight was a bit rushed. I originally thought that I would use more pen and ink to write about how the two knew each other and fell in love in the last thousand years, and the emotional journey of contact and waiting for a thousand years. The extra chapter is not enough. I really want to watch the in-depth exchange of feelings between the two in Chapter 80. 😭😭😭 Then let's talk about the structure of the script. I think it's actually very well written. As I mentioned before, I think it's great to be able to take back the main foreshadowing (do you know how many stories I've read over the years that always have unfinished settings?!), But Mr. Harmono has basically taken back 98% of the settings, and there is almost no useless description! From the prison to the southern colony to the forest to the sea to the Holy Kingdom to Star City, each copy has a rich background description and its own characteristics, making the world lifelike, which is really fun for a setting chef like me. It's really exciting that each dungeon has its own setting, connects the characters, and connects the past and the next. My favorite chapter is Ninoville Island. After finishing, looking at the entire drama, this chapter is endlessly beautiful. The cycle of the island, the resurrection of the ancient gods, the believers gathering together to fight in a team fight (except Stella, who has not yet joined the team, everyone is fighting), connecting the pirate legend Fede Colle and Carlos's son Joyce who were imprisoned in the previous article, and then the Storm Fleet involved by Joyce, and the observer who revealed part of the truth about time and space. The last meeting between Selen and her sister. Looking back at the beginning of the chapter, "I am a sinner, I spent a long time to atone for my sins" is not only Fedkore's confession, but also Irina's confession. Thousands of years of karma, a wonderful and sad fate, and an unbreakable vow are all so wonderful. There are two plots in this chapter that impressed me very much. One was the moment when the little bird changed back into its bird form. He originally wanted to hug Granny Feng intimately, but he knocked her sideways. It really has the appearance of a childish god and a strange warm atmosphere. It's very cute. Another one is the life of Federkore reflected in the moment when the "waking nightmare" dissipates. The sentence "The nightmare moves from the dream world along the cracks of human nature to the waking world" is so well written that it is the most perfect judgment on the life of the great pirate. In addition, there are many plots that are very graphic and epic, and many monsters and bosses are also designed to be memorable. I have always imagined how exciting it would be if it were made into an anime. The previous plots of piranha meat retaining youth forever, Toph discovering that the spices in the mouth of the abyss come from the lives of indigenous people, and Silvera discovering the "human stakes" in the forest are all very cult movies. The Harmono teacher who shocked me at the time was also very comfortable in writing horror and novel plots. In the later part of the story, Esther laughs maniacally in the rain when he kills Andonella; the whole city is helping the Mouse Gang to hide with the national treasure ("Morning at the Port of Star City" rises from the footplate of the noose, but the mission leader is falling; when the people pave the road of Iron Dome with flesh and blood, the falling arrow rain is turned into flowers to welcome the heroes by Dorian. I think these plots The writing is excellent and unforgettable. In addition to the "waking nightmare" mentioned above, the boss design turned into an angel by Bishop Fiore is also very impactful, even more shocking than the one transformed by the Holy See and the Black Dawn God (probably because of the first sight kill), and the mechanism of the Sphinx is also very interesting. The main meaning of this article is still very rich. As mentioned earlier, I think this is a warm and powerful story, which involves many views on religious beliefs and national wars. I think the most important points are three. One is that it is mentioned repeatedly in the article that "a mouse also has the courage to kill a lion." Ordinary people with low status and little power, even in a divine worldview, are great and should not be underestimated. The nobleness of a person's soul is not determined by status, wealth, and power. It was those who were the poorest and most humble people who took in young girls who had lost their country. They mended the souls of those whose faith was broken. They took back the national treasures stolen by the invaders... This small force, precisely because of the common will, condensed into the beating courage of every people's chest, like little sparks gathering into a prairie fire, thus defeating those powerful extraordinary beings and the powerful Holy Kingdom. In the same way, the one who defeated the final boss was the tiny and brave little mouse, the tiny and great one. The second point is in line with the point mentioned above: "Man's great deeds will never end." Before the gods came to this world, humans were working hard to survive. The dwarves made, the elves sow, and the mermaids cruised. This slowly formed this beautiful world that was willing to allow many gods to live here for a long time and even sacrifice to protect it. In the story, the main force that saves the country and the world is actually the people of each race. They use their wisdom, courage and unyielding spirit to protect the world together with the undying kindness and kindness in human nature. It is true that there are hypocritical, cowardly and selfish people among them, but there are also "nameless" citizens who will not bow to interests to protect their country no matter what. There are ordinary guards who always cherish the original intention to protect the people, and there is Mrs. Lutz, "The God of Dawn only taught us love but never taught us hate." This is also what I think is the difference between dawn and dark sun. When I see the brilliance at dawn, I also see the decay and ugliness. When I see the shadows under the light and the gaps outside the light, I realize that the light of humanity is so admirable. It is really because of these never-extinguishing radiance of humanity that the world can stand firm when darkness falls, retain the fire of hope, and rise the new sun. It was they who changed the world, and it was they who wrote history. The third point is also what I think is wonderful. This book has a very strong religious element, but it also has some views and meanings that deny religion and gods. The belief system revealed in the end is actually "God chooses apostles who agree with him, and the apostles shape God with their own beliefs." This is a setting that I think is very satisfying. It well explains the differences in customs and habits of various gods and believers, the difference between dawn and dark sun, and the operating mechanism of the "Book of Evil Gods". At the same time, it also refers back to the heart-to-heart talk between Archbishop Mavo and Esser. God is neither on the altar nor in the holy scriptures. He walks on the path recognized by believers and is in the hearts of believers. Faith is justified by righteousness. What believers recognize is a point of view, a path, and a way of life that specifies the principles of their own lives. This is why Esther can express his beliefs. Because "only teach love but not hate", what Dawn teaches is to protect the feelings of the important people towards you (Nashel, Thieves Guild) and to fight hard for it. And from this, it can be seen that the relationship between Dawn and Blood Sacrifice Moon is also somewhat reciprocal. Every supporting character is very impressive, from the prison scholars, Eric, and the Four Gitoux to the transportation station, Feralion, the Thieves Guild, the Rat Gang, and the villagers of Greywater Village, almost everything has something to say. The interactions between the gods with various personalities and each other are also very lively and interesting. It's so fun to watch! But what surprised me the most was the final portrayal of Black Sun and Livia. (This is also the case without putting Black Sun in the boss. I think his portrayal is more like a character.) I originally thought it would be a collection of pure negative emotions, but I didn't expect that the character would really be like the performance of Lyman after being blackened. Although it is extremely twisted and does not like the world, it will be destroyed (feeling) I feel that I have a completely obsessive-compulsive disorder concept, and I have to completely deny the parts I don't like. In fact, I think this is also influenced by Livia's idea of treating the world as pottery.) But he also has a weird compassionate and gentle side towards Livia, and he also has his own style when he complains about Lyman and Luna's disgusting feelings. In the early days of Livia, I thought she was just a crazy woman who simply liked to play conspiracies, but I didn't expect that she was actually a twisted family man, and she really loved her brother, so she turned him into a container, because in her twisted concept, this was the only way to achieve happiness. This kind of child-like innocence, cruelty and all-seeing wisdom really impressed me. Finally, let's talk about the six apostles and dandelions that I particularly like! Let me tell you that I really like the initial card surface and gold-plated card surface of each apostle, as well as the mission, task name and judgment written for each apostle. I will definitely buy it if Mr. 0 Can sell the peripherals. The first is my most favorite Apostle Selene! The first apostle, the original apostle! From the moment he appeared on the scene, his tenacity, tenacity, his yearning for freedom, and his enthusiastic and innocent sense of justice all attracted me. He is obviously just a young man but he is very spiritual and wise. I have figured out a lot of things that normal people would struggle with, such as true wishes, whether the confrontation with my sister is a trick of fate, how to persist in a career that cannot be achieved in my lifetime, etc. The shaping is very complete and the growth line is very clear. My feelings for him are like Shui Lanlan, my first partner in Rock Kingdom. I feel at ease every time I fight with him. Just like what Lyman said later, "God gave him strength, and he also gave God strength. The day his God met him, he also regained his life." When I was reading a review earlier, I accidentally saw someone else's spoiler saying that he would die later on, and I immediately became furious and burst into tears. Fortunately, Mr. Harmono was still merciful. In my original imagination, I really thought that he would die in the battle against the slave masters at the transportation station like what I said before, and his relic would be the ship "Sailene" turned from the corpse. Fortunately, he passed away in the end. Surrounded by his descendants at the transport station, his close friends Ferrarin and Sister Pauline, he died with the hope for a free future for the mermaids and the peace of mind of fulfilling his mission as the sworn Lord of the Abyss. His loyalty to his beliefs and his previous friendship with his partners are equally touching. In this line, whether it is the discussion of freedom, the liberation of race, the thousand-year watch of sister-brother love and the light be with the Elf Son due to the lifespan difference, it is very exciting and delicious. The time when Selene fought with everyone on Ninoville Island must be one of his happiest memories. Later, when he saw everyone gathered together without him, he couldn't help but feel a little regretful. But his spirit, the Storm Fleet he formed, and the "Day of Rebirth" he left behind continued to fight until the end. Selen, you are always here! Then there is Miss Tove, the second apostle in order. Ms. Tove's cheerful and open personality is particularly endearing! I am still deeply impressed by the image of her apostle card: the figure behind the dwarf holding a lantern is as majestic as a giant. She has a simple craftsman spirit that creates to benefit more people, and she also has the drive of a young scientist who dares to face injustice and find the legendary place. She was able to help people of other races change the world and create a new world regardless of her own interests but rely on her faith. She did indeed do it and created a promised land flowing with "milk and honey" (but it was achieved by people with their own hands). And it burns the spark of the industrial revolution, truly interpreting the meaning of technology and creation. Prometheus came to steal fire and teach people how to use flames in order to light up more people's paths and illuminate the world. Lady Silvera is very controversial in her plot, perhaps because such an overly naive idealist is prone to polarizing views. But I actually quite like it and think it's very reasonable. First of all, she is relatively young among the elves, has less experience, and is separated from the inheritance of the previous Holy Son. At the same time, she loves her people very much, and it is precisely because of her concept of equality regardless of high or low that she is unguarded against the Council. (Because the Council is also equal in her heart) And I think it was precisely because of her early naivety that the elves' fire was not completely extinct. If she hadn't gone to the village to look for the holy relics left by the Holy Son, the Holy Tree would have been completely extinct. It was her belief that finally gave birth to new hope. The "Human Stake" plot in the Green Royal Court and the plot of the deer carving still impress me to this day. Through the death and pain of her people, Silvera understood that peace comes from blood and fire, thus completing her true transformation. The face of the card holding the corpse is still fresh in my memory. The grown-up Saint is very, very handsome, and she is awesome every time she fights (the spiritual mage is too strong). In the final ending, he leads the elves to gain new life. During the war, she led the elves to recall that fighting is the way to bring peace; after the war, she returned to tranquility, watching over the new land, sowing and taking root again the seeds of hope. In fact, I have always had visions of the image of Captain Dorian as the Shakespeare of FGO. They are all literary giants with brown hair and beards, elegant clothes and big cloaks. Their personalities are sullen and narcissistic and chatter about some literary content. Every time I watch his dramas, I feel more relaxed (because they are very funny and enjoyable), so I thought his extras would also be very relaxed, but I didn't expect that they would actually be life-span-filled daily life after old age! Such a well-rounded and smooth playwright is actually full of blood and backbone in his heart. It is better to say that he is like this. It is precisely because he dared to speak out for injustice that he was forced to leave his hometown. To a certain extent it is consistent. Smart, funny, with high emotional intelligence, he speaks the right voice and does what he needs to do. It was really touching when the flowering skill developed into a triumphal form, and the cage that imprisoned the rebel consciousness turned into a flower ceremony to welcome the heroes. Dorian is also very good at using his skills. I really didn't expect him to be able to be so helpful when fighting the Star Gate monster. Although several battles were in the atmosphere group, they were especially C when it was time to C. As a scholar with such unyielding character, using your sword as pen and blood as ink to participate in historical struggles, you deserve to be a "Eternal Superstar" that will be remembered for generations to come! Princess Stella's growth line is very rich and complete. It is also the one with the most contact with "rats" among the six apostles in this article. During the exile, she truly achieved "from the masses, to the masses". It was truly a unique journey of exile where she met so many respectable and lovely people. She was able to resolutely cut off Alfonso's life when her family members died one by one, and when she saw her brother resurrected as an undead soul. The people became the anchor of her life, and she became a qualified queen. She has witnessed so much with her own eyes, the greatness and perseverance of the people, how they must create beauty and light (wedding) even in gloomy days, how they must protect their country even in the face of threats and terror, and not succumb to aggression. She benefited from the people, and it was also because the people completed the secondary shaping of personality (the true shaping of a hero). Her journey to Star City with the Thieves Guild and her final battle with Alfonso were both very impressive to me. Her fallen stars were incorporated into her crown, and she never forgot love or hate. Finally, a golden sea once again ripples to the west of these lands. And her crown just turned into a garland, just like an ordinary traveler and ordinary people. Esther's story line is what I think can be called the most supporting character. It is also very perfect, with clear and progressive lines. At the same time, because of his final status as the Holy See - the spokesperson of Dawn in the world. I think his growth and Lehmann's growth are actually mutually exclusive. Although he is stubborn about most things, he can only pretend not to see the unfair hidden rules within the church. He is a young inquisitor who is oppressed by the internal system and cannot completely clear his own existence. He lost his beloved companions, was saved by the poorest and humblest people, and then witnessed the darkness and corruption within the church, sacrificed his body for revenge and was imprisoned, and then had a heart-to-heart talk with the archbishop who helped him to re-establish what faith is and what persistence is. The whole line is very logical, and the character arc is also very strong. As a character strongly related to faith, his existence is precisely to reveal the meaning of religious existence and what God is. It is people with the same beliefs who gather together to work hard and move forward together for the path they adhere to. It is to protect the important people, to use death to open up a way for him to live, to mend his soul's existence with needlework and kindness. In order to pass on that kindness, that protection, and that help. He once threw away that rag and became a high-ranking cardinal, putting it on again and again to fight for his faith and the people. The storyline between him and Nasher is also very delicious, with a sense of unavoidable fate in ancient Greece, but maybe it's because Nasher knew it was inevitable. (And this Spring Festival Gala teacher always used big and small knives on them everywhere, but fortunately the extra episode gave HE a whimper) His justice, his belief, and his justice truly triggered the "Second Coming of the Holy Spirit." It is also because of pure believers like him who still exist and persist, that Dawn can insist that it is Dawn. Even if the light is shrouded in darkness, there are still such small lights that gather into an ocean of faith. This is the lovely thing about this world. Both for Esther and Lyman. Dandelions are my favorite animal friends! It is really special and I would call it the seventh apostle! To borrow a sentence from Duan Ping, "Saint Rat, the patron saint of travelers and righteous people!" It is really very smart and very brave! Instead of indulging in the pleasure of power that comes from prison ruling the rat pack, you are willing to devote your little life to endless travel, to see the world further away and learn more! It is not afraid of separation and always travels bravely. She is always kind-hearted and helps those who are confused during the journey (Stella). The dandelion, as the name suggests, roams freely in the world. The rat problem discussed with Lyman is also very interesting. I believe it also triggered Lyman's thinking at that time. Will God also feel dissatisfied? At that time, Lyman also fell into a little confusion about his irreversible fate. But together with Dandelion, we came to the conclusion that we should still live in the present. In the final decisive battle, although Dandelion was a little mouse, he was more courageous than the lion or elephant and won the crucial drop of blood! This is probably the reason for Black Sun's defeat. Lyman's side is a kind of "I am not alone". Along the way, his apostles, his apostle development partners, and his animal friends pushed him step by step to get here. Even though there is a huge disparity in power between him and Black Sun, "man can conquer nature". This is indeed history written by human beings, a chapter created by the power of human beings. There are so many things I want to say, and I ended up writing a long one without realizing it. I really like this article, and I am really reluctant to say goodbye to it. Every story is so wonderful, and every character is so lively and lovely. I really want to see more of their experiences, interactions and interactions. Thank you, Mr. Chuanxiejihan0, for persisting in writing this article despite all the hardships. I am really, really happy to see such a good story! So can you write another 100,000-word extra? (Wiping tears, fantasizing, waving a little whip)

I feel so sad to finally finish the full text. Teacher 0 will write another 20 extras, whether they will be successful or not [crying loudly] The new nutrient solution is coming~ Come on, come on, come on!

Congratulations on the completion, send flowers to your wife! In this historic moment, in this great moment, author, have you seen my sincere heart like a grenade?

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I'm so reluctant to let go [crying] The two of you are so unhappy in the main line. Boss, I haven't eaten enough yet [crying] [crying] [crying]

Lehmann and Lunaster's honeymoon was so good to watch [Orange Candy] I got it Nasher and Esther's confession on Christmas was so sweet [Purple Sugar] kswl It's such a pity that I didn't see Selene and Feralion's sweet look [holding chin] Although there are indeed some regrets, such as not seeing much of Lyman and Lunast's past, and the future of Selen and Ferrarion, in the end everyone was happy and everything got better and better. It was really great [crying] When I saw that the author had a physical problem, I was really worried that the story would end in the middle, but the author persevered and made the story very complete and satisfactory. Thank you very much! ! ! [Come on]

It's been a long time since I've seen such a beautiful Western fantasy novel. I'm really happy! Thank you, wife, for writing such a beautiful article. I like every character very much. Every character is very vivid and every journey is wonderful. I hope that the true and evil gods and their families can live happily forever! I also want to thank my wife for giving Esther and Nasher a happy ending at the end of the article.

Finished with flowers———— I haven't read enough - I feel like Lyman and Luna can still have dozens of chapters of sticky descriptions of the early stages of their relationship, I still want to read - [crying] [crying] [crying]

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