[Harry Potter] The Leader's Exclusive Rose

After two days of watching it, I finally finished it! Thank you, madam, for generating electricity for love! First of all, this is a rare novel written by a female Seder. It is quite warm overall, especially since the heroine did not get involved with the trio in the early stages. The plot of the trio is also quickly introduced in just a few sentences without wasting too much space. I think this treatment is quite good. After all, everyone is familiar with the main plot of the original novel, so there is no need to read it again. Overall, my personal score is: 95 points for the emotional line, 70 points for the logic line and plot line, which are a bit weak, but it is understandable. After all, this was just written by my wife in a notepad, and she did not deliberately design the framework in advance, so I personally recommend it. But u1s1, there are several plot settings that I feel are unreasonable, it's just my personal opinion: 1. He has a crush on the heroine since he met Seid at the age of seven. This setting makes people feel that their childhood sweethearts are really sweet, but at the same time, they feel that it is too early? So do you know what love is? 2. The first-year Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher of the hero and heroine is Quirrell, but according to the original book, Quirrell was still teaching Muggle Studies at this time, and did not change to teach Defense Against the Dark Arts until Harry entered school; 3. Chapter 21: During the summer vacation after the heroine's second year graduation, he met Lockhart at a book signing in Diagon Alley. At this time, Harry was preparing to enter the first grade. The book signing took place a year earlier than the original; 4. Autumn is the Chaser on the Ravenclaw Quidditch team, and the Seeker in the original book. This article changed the setting, but there was no extended plot about this new setting, so I don't quite understand why it was changed; 5. Chapter 23 said that one day during the summer vacation, I went to play in the Muggle streets. I got lost but it snowed again... Britain is not in the southern hemisphere, so how could it snow during the summer vacation! 6. Hermione had Crookshanks when the trio was in second grade, which was only in third grade in the original book; Pettigrew was not discovered in advance, so it is not clear whether this is a misremembering or a deliberate writing. If so, it is not clear what the purpose is; 7. Before the Harry trio entered school, there were some scenes with male and female roommates, but there was basically not much focus on them afterwards. It feels a bit pity. The images of the roommates in the early stage were quite full, but later on there were not many scenes, and the group portraits were slightly weak; 8. After the heroine's Jade endured an Avatar for Ced, the heroine was wiped out by the backlash of magic power. This should be a relatively big ups and downs in the plot setting, but Fox solved it easily with a few tears. Is the Phoenix Tears Panacea a must-have at home? 9. When DA was formed, the reluctance of Qiu's friend Marietta was shown here just like in the original work, but in the end the informer wrote Qiu according to the movie, and it suddenly felt like Marietta had appeared in vain. Anyway, I really want to thank you, madam, for your hard work! Hope to see more HP fans, love you!

Hahahaha, it's really amazing. It's the first time I saw Snape burst into laughter. Good baby Potter.

Finally found an article by Seid! I love this article so much! It's really very beautiful! Call it Ceder's ceiling

Very sweet~ Thank you to the author for giving Seid a happy ending~ >w< Although it seems a bit OOC in some places

What can I say about Qiu, I don't like her very much either. I watched the movie first and then the original work. I was confused when watching the movie, why is she with Harry? It makes Seder look like a joke, which makes me sad.

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha I actually laughed so hard in class that I twitched hahahahahaha

It's really, really beautiful. It's a dream come true.

Great, my Sif is not dead, woo woo woo Thank you, madam, this dream is so beautiful

It's really beautiful! It's rare to find a fan of Seid with such good writing and plot design! Will your wife update the extra story about the baby after marriage?

Very good(?▽?)😍❤️