Roaming the Immortal Realm won third prize in the fourth Greater Bay Area (Shenzhen) Online Literature Competition in 2022. Immortals can split open the heavens and earth, move mountains, and fill seas. In truth, they're nothing special. They're just people with a little more cultivation. We're a group of mortals from Earth. If you are immortals among mortals, then I'm an immortal among immortals. I came to the Immortal Realm mainly to teach you immortals how to be human. Learn to be a decent person first, then become an immortal. Do you know the teachings of Confucius and Mencius? Do you know Confucianism? I'll teach you...
After transmigrating to the Immortal Realm, Baili Changqing discovered that Earth's cultivation methods were far inferior to those of the Immortal Realm, but Earth's martial arts techniques were far superior to theirs.
Emperor Wu of Han used the excuse that "a chivalrous person breaks the law through force" to hunt down and kill most of the martial arts experts in the jianghu. Baili Changqing, formerly known as Guo Jie, and his eight sworn brothers, four maids, seven disciples, and five thousand brothers who would live or die alongside him were all shot down by a rain of arrows when General Wei Qing's hundred-thousand-strong army surrounded them. In the end, a powerful figure from the Immortal Realm saved their souls and had them transmigrate to the mortal world of the Immortal Realm, tasking them with completing a very important mission.
With his brothers and disciples, Baili Changqing fights his way through one continent after another in the Immortal Realm, from the mortal world to the world of immortals and then the divine realm. They unravel one earth-shattering conspiracy after another, until everything is finally settled!
Having lived three lives, Baili Changqing takes everything in stride after transmigrating to the Immortal Realm. His personality changes dramatically as he roams the world, and the book is full of wit and humor.
Theme: Wuxia and cultivation stories aren't about killing, but about sparing lives, showing great love, and upholding martial virtue. Immortals are just people with a little more cultivation. They're nothing special.
Dude, are you on the wrong channel? Do you even know what "pure love" means on Jinjiang Literature City? Do you know what "dominant perspective" means?
The characters are well portrayed.
Does the author know that all the male protagonists in pure love stories like boys?
Pure love is conceivable, but I'd like to know what the author means by "dominant partner"! Please tell me!
I don't know why, but I was moved by the author. Although I haven't finished reading it, please continue writing.
Furthermore, what's popular on Qidian might not be so successful on Jinjiang. Jinjiang also has many cultivation novels, but not like yours, which are obviously from Qidian, such as a Western fantasy-style ice and snow academy with a protagonist's name in a classic martial arts style, combining Western fantasy—this kind of East-West fusion… Jinjiang's cultivation novels are very traditional cultivation novels, and their Western fantasy novels are very typical Western fantasy novels; they don't combine them. Of course, you might ask if there aren't any? I can't guarantee that. Imagination, writing style, etc., Can break through limitations; good writing and interesting tropes are all good. Although I still have one major question: is this story truly without any romantic pairing? "No romantic pairing" means the main character has no romantic subplot, won't fall in love with anyone, and the male lead can't have a harem.
Why doesn't the author consider writing on Qidian?
It's obvious that the teacher really likes Mr. Gu Long.
I read a bit, and it's actually quite well-written, with decent prose. It didn't have the kind of overly elaborate writing I expected from a popular author. However, our no-CP (no-romance) genre is a bit niche, and martial arts or Western fantasy are generally less popular unless your writing is exceptional. But I have a suggestion: if you want to become popular but can't change your writing style for now, I suggest you write a quick transmigration novel. Quick transmigration novels are relatively popular even in the no-CP genre… so you don't need to change the theme. Just keep the story concise, cut a chapter, break it down, and make it more enjoyable. Wearing it slowly is fine too...
A writer who accidentally stumbled into the world of pure romance on Jinjiang Literature City, hahaha